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Post by Caesar » 04 May 2025, 20:07

Lo Que No Mata, Enseña

The walls were the same gray as everything else in the juvenile center—floor, ceiling, plastic chairs, the table bolted to the ground. A clock ticked too loud above the door, reminding everyone inside that time didn’t slow down, even when your life did.

Caine sat across from a woman in tortoiseshell glasses and a shapeless brown blazer. Her nameplate read H. Mansfield, Disciplinary Officer. She was already annoyed.

“Fighting on your second day,” she said flatly. “That’s impressive.”

Next to her sat a soft-eyed man with a counselor’s badge and a notebook. He looked at Caine like he saw a version of his own son in him.

On the far wall, a CO leaned against the door with his arms crossed, silent and unimpressed.

Caine didn’t say anything. His hands were cuffed in front of him, and the plastic seat under him creaked every time he shifted his weight.

Mansfield opened a folder and flipped through a few pages. “Caine Guerra. Sixteen. First-time intake. You were moved to our general dorm two days and by this morning, you were already in a physical altercation. Tell me why.”

Caine stared at the table.

“You’re gonna have to say something,” Mansfield said. “This is where you get a chance to explain yourself.”

“I ain’t got nothing to explain,” Caine muttered, eyes low.

The counselor spoke up gently. “Caine… we’ve had worse kids come through here and turn it around. But not if they let the place shape them. What happened in that holding cell? Did someone say something?”

“No.”

“Did someone provoke you?”

Silence.

Mansfield sighed and sat back. “Look, let’s not pretend this wasn’t deliberate. You laid hands on another youth and had to be physically restrained. That’s not nothing.”

Caine’s jaw tightened, but still, he didn’t look up.

The counselor cleared his throat. “He’s new. No priors. I’d like to recommend conflict de-escalation sessions and two days of loss of privileges, no lockdown.”

The CO at the wall scoffed lightly. “That kid came in hot. He put the other one on the ground with one swing. That wasn’t fear. That was rage.”

Mansfield tapped her pen. “Two days restricted movement. No dayroom. No rec. No calls except legal. Final warning.”

Caine didn’t flinch.

“Understood?” she asked.

He nodded once.

As the CO stepped forward to cuff him for the walk back, Mansfield looked up one last time. “You keep going down this path, Mr. Guerra, you won’t need a hearing. You’ll just disappear into the system like everybody else.”

Caine stood slowly, letting the cuffs slide around his wrists again.

But just as the door opened, he caught movement in the hallway. A tall older boy—eighteen, built like a linebacker—stood at the window across the corridor, watching him through the glass.

Caine didn’t blink.

Neither did the other boy.

And when the door shut behind him, that cold weight settled in his gut again—like he’d just stepped further into something he couldn’t walk back from.
~~~

The public defender’s office was tucked inside a crumbling brick building with paint peeling from the doorframes and a busted vending machine that buzzed louder than the overhead lights. The kind of place that told you everything before anyone even said a word.

Sara sat stiffly in the chair closest to the desk, purse clutched tight in her lap like it might keep her grounded. Mireya stood behind her, arms folded across her chest, shifting from one foot to the other.

The public defender, a woman in her early thirties with tired eyes and a laptop covered in chipped stickers, clicked through a file on her screen. Her nameplate read: P. Corley, Juvenile Division.

“I appreciate y’all coming in,” Corley said, voice clipped but not unkind. “I wanted to walk you through where we are and what options exist.”

Mireya tilted her head, skeptical. “There’s options?”

Corley hesitated. “That depends on how you define ‘options.’”

She turned the screen toward them and tapped on a document.

“This is Percy Anderson’s sworn statement. It was signed and notarized. In it, he claims Caine was present during the attempted carjacking of Quentin Landry and that he actively participated in the plan.”

Sara’s lips parted, her voice brittle. “That’s not true. He didn’t have a gun. He didn’t—”

“No one’s saying he pulled the trigger,” Corley interrupted gently. “But under Louisiana law, presence and participation in a violent felony—even as an accomplice—is enough.”

Mireya stepped forward. “What about Ricky? Percy named him too, right? He wasn’t even at that house. Y’all know that.”

“We can’t prove that,” Corley said. “The only names on the statement are Caine and Ricardo. Which makes things… difficult.”

Sara’s hands tightened on her purse strap. “So, Ricardo gets punished for being loyal. And Caine gets punished for staying silent.”

“Ricardo’s been offered a deal,” Corley said, her voice flattening. “Testify against Caine and he walks with probation and community service. So far, he hasn’t taken it.”

Mireya’s eyes went wide. “So y’all offering deals to the ones who lie, as long as they lie the right way.”

Corley didn’t answer that.

Sara leaned forward. “Why hasn’t that deal been offered to Caine?”

“Because Caine didn’t talk. And right now, the DA’s office thinks they have enough to make an example out of him. Gunfire was involved. A teacher was involved. And they’re coming down hard on carjackings right now—especially after what happened a couple years ago. And that’s before you take into account the other charges.”

Mireya’s voice turned sharp. “So, he gets thrown away for doing less than the kid who actually talked and ran his mouth?”

Corley sighed. “I’m doing what I can. But I’m not the DA. I’m not the judge. And I’m not a magician.”

Sara swallowed hard. “So, what do we do now?”

Corley clicked her laptop shut. “We wait. We prepare. And we pray that something shifts.”

Outside, the hallway felt hotter than it had on the way in. Mireya pushed through the glass doors and stepped into the sun, shaking.

Sara followed a few steps behind.

At the curb, Mireya pulled a lighter from her pocket and lit a cigarette, her hands trembling.

Sara gave her a look. “You don’t smoke.”

Mireya didn’t look back. “I do now.”

They stood there in silence, watching the traffic roll by.

For the first time, neither of them knew what to say.
~~~

The phone crackled with static as Ricardo pressed it to his ear, tapping in the pin code with impatient fingers. His other hand gripped the bottom of the wall-mounted unit like he needed something to hold him up.

Through the scratched plexiglass of the visitation partition, there was no one on the other side.
He was calling his mother. Again.

It rang. Once. Twice.

Then her voice, weary and breathless: “¿Ricardo?”

“Mamá,” he said quickly. “They moved me again. I’m in a different tier. They said it’s ‘cause of space, but—man, I don’t know. I’m just tired.”

“Are you okay?” she asked in Spanish. “They feeding you? They treating you right?”

Ricardo exhaled sharply. “They feeding us, yeah. If you like sandwiches made with wet paper towels.”

She made a sound—half laugh, half sigh. “Your cousin asked about you. He said he saw something online.”

Ricardo’s jaw clenched. “Let him ask about that puto cabrón. Since he’s the one who threw my name out like it was nothing.”

His mother went quiet.

“I wasn’t even at that house,” Ricardo said, voice rising. “And now I’m sitting in this cage like I shot the damn teacher myself.”

“Keep your voice down, mijo,” she said softly. “Don’t give them another reason.”

Ricardo leaned his head against the plexiglass. “They offered me a deal.”

She didn’t say anything.

“They said testify and I walk. Probation. Community service. Give them some names. All I gotta do is nod my head in court.”

Silence.

“I ain’t doin’ it,” he muttered. “I didn’t sign up for this, but I ain’t folding.”

“You sure, mi amor?” her voice cracked.

“They already think I’m guilty. So, if I go down, I’ll go down honest. I ain’t gonna be able to live with myself if I rat.”

There was a long pause. Then, in the voice only a mother can have when her heart is breaking: “I just want you home.”

Ricardo closed his eyes.

“I know.”

The automated voice cut in: You have one minute remaining.

“They’re gonna make me into something I’m not,” Ricardo said, staring through the scratched plastic. “All ‘cause Percy couldn’t keep his mouth shut and Dre ain’t say a word.”

His mother whispered something in Spanish he couldn’t hear.

“I’m not staying quiet forever,” he said.

The line went dead.

Ricardo hung up the phone and stared at his reflection in the glass, distorted by grime and fingerprints.

He didn’t recognize the kid staring back.
~~~

The cell door slammed shut behind him with a mechanical clunk that seemed to echo straight through his chest.

Caine stood still in the silence.

No windows. No clocks. No sense of the outside world. Just a slab of a bed, a toilet with no seat, and a sink that coughed air when turned on.

The CO paused at the door. Reached into his pocket. Slid something through the tray slot.

“Paper and a pencil,” he muttered. “You know. To pass the time.”

Caine didn’t answer.

The door shut behind him. The lock sealed with finality.

He sat slowly on the edge of the cot, the mattress barely more than a strip of foam. The piece of notebook paper crinkled in his hand. The pencil was no bigger than his finger — dull, half-used, the kind of thing a kid might chew on at the back of a classroom.

For a long time, he just sat there.

Then he leaned forward, elbows on his knees, staring at the floor.

It was Dre’s silence that hurt the most.

Not Percy’s snitching — he’d always been shaky.

Not Ricardo’s name being dragged — he’d been thrown into the fire just like Caine.

But Dre?

Dre had walked him into that night. Dre had looked him in the eye and said it was easy money. Dre had vanished the second it got hot. And Dre had let his own cousin throw two boys—his two best friends--under the bus to save himself.

Caine gritted his teeth.

He could take the charges. He could take the lockdown, the food, the silence.

But that part?

That betrayal?

That was the thing eating him from the inside out.

He looked down at the piece of paper, still folded in half on his lap.

At first, he didn’t even know why he reached for it.

But as his fingers touched the pencil, another name floated to the surface, soft and unshakable.

Camila.

He didn’t remember grabbing the pencil. Only that the lead touched the page, and his hand started moving before his mind could catch up.

Hey Camilita—

The pencil scratched in slow, uneven lines. The room didn’t echo anymore. It just listened.

You too little to read this. Too little to know. But maybe one day Mama’ll read it to you. Or maybe she won’t. That’s up to her. But I’m writing anyway because I want you to know who I am in my words…

The words came slow, stiff. But they came.

And for the first time since the door closed behind him—

Caine didn’t feel invisible.

Just lost.

And still trying.
~~~

The elevator ride was silent, save for the soft hum of fluorescent lighting and the muted shuffle of papers in Quentin’s hands. He adjusted the cuffs of his shirt and exhaled through his nose, jaw tight.

The doors opened to the fifth floor of the Orleans Parish Courthouse, where the Juvenile Division of the District Attorney’s Office kept its corner offices. The front desk receptionist barely looked up.

“Name?”

“Quentin Landry.”

She scanned a list. “You’re here about the case you’re a victim of?”

“Yes.”

“Have a seat.”

He sat in a row of molded plastic chairs. Across from him, a woman dabbed at her eyes with a napkin. Her teenage son slumped beside her, hoodie drawn up, avoiding eye contact with the world.

Everyone in the room wore the same expression: weary, wary, already grieving something that hadn’t finished happening yet.

Quentin clenched his hands together until his knuckles cracked.

Eventually, a door clicked open.

“Mr. Landry?”

Quentin stood.

“Brent Branch,” the assistant district attorney said as they shook hands. He was trim, mid-forties, graying at the temples, and looked like he wore cufflinks even when he mowed the lawn. “Appreciate you coming in.”

Quentin followed him into a glass-walled office. Framed diplomas lined the back wall. On the desk: neat piles of paper, a well-worn legal pad, and a framed photo of two boys in travel baseball uniforms.

They sat.

“I understand you wanted to speak about the Guerra case.”

“I did.”

Branch opened a folder, eyes scanning the first few lines. “Sixteen years old. First offense. Held on multiple felony counts, including attempted carjacking and aggravated assault with a firearm.”

Quentin’s eyes narrowed. “You know as well as I do how quickly people become suspects when somebody’s looking to cut a deal. And when they look like Caine Guerra.”

Branch gave a tight smile. “That’s true. But deals only get cut when someone gives us useful information.”

“Or believable lies,” Quentin replied. “The only name you’re working off of came from a kid with a reason to lie. A reason to throw someone else in front of the train before it hit him.”

Branch closed the folder, leaning back in his chair. “You sound sure.”

“I’ve taught long enough to know who’s headed for the deep end and who’s still trying to swim.”

“And you’re saying this Caine Guerra falls into the second group.”

“I’m saying you’re trusting the word of someone who was there, who had a gun, and who’s already been offered a reduced charge. That’s not justice. That’s politics.”

Branch raised an eyebrow. “And what would you call it when someone like Guerra doesn’t speak for himself? Doesn’t say who else was involved? Doesn’t deny what happened? I’m sure he has more than a few things he can speak about that’ll get his sentence reduced.”

“I’d call that fear,” Quentin said evenly. “Not guilt.”

Branch tapped his pen once on the file. “Unfortunately, fear doesn’t hold up in court, and I don’t traffic in some sense of ghetto omerta.”

Quentin stood. “Neither does a coerced plea deal from a liar.”

Branch didn’t stop him as he headed for the door.

But just before stepping into the hall, Quentin paused. Pulled out his phone. Dialed.

One ring. Two.

A voice answered: “Hello?”

Quentin’s voice was low. Urgent.

“I need a favor,” he said. “It’s about one of my students. His name’s Caine Guerra.”
~~~
The bedroom was dim, lit only by a soft lamp in the corner and the pale glow from Elena’s television in the other room. The baby monitor flickered green on the dresser. The only sound was Camila’s soft, rhythmic breathing from the travel crib nearby.

Mireya sat on the edge of the bed with her phone in her hand, thumb hovering over the screen.

She hadn’t eaten since lunch. She didn’t remember what lunch was. She couldn’t tell if the ache in her chest was anger or grief anymore.

The house was still. Elena had gone to bed early. The dishes were clean. Camila had finally gone down after a half-hour of fussing. But Mireya hadn’t been able to settle. Her brain was stuck in loops, every thought starting and ending with him.

She opened her messages. Typed something. Deleted it.

Then she opened the voice memo app.

Took a breath.

Pressed record.

Her voice came out soft. Uneven.

“Hey. I don’t know if this is stupid. I don’t even know if you’ll ever hear it. But I had to say something.”

She glanced at Camila, who twitched in her sleep.

“You were here. Just a few days ago. And now it feels like you’re on another planet.”

“I saw you walk out the door, and I knew something was wrong. I didn’t say anything. I just let you go.”

“Maybe that’s on me. Maybe I should’ve made it harder for you to keep disappearing.”


She swallowed.

“I keep thinking about how you looked holding her—like she was the only thing in the world that didn’t scare you.”

Her voice cracked then, just slightly.

“You said you love us. And I know that’s true, in whatever broken way you know how to love people. But love is supposed to make people feel safe.”

She paused. Wiped her eyes.

“I don’t know if I can wait for you to become the kind of man who makes us feel that way. But I want you to know… we’re not gone. Not yet.”

“Camila’s okay. I’m okay. But I miss you.”


She took a breath, held it.

“I’m gonna send this to your mom. Maybe she’ll find a way to get it to you. Or maybe I’ll delete it. I haven’t decided.”

The baby stirred. Mireya stood and walked to the crib, gently placing a hand on Camila’s back until she settled again.

“Goodnight, Caine. Wherever you are. Te amaré por siempre.”

She ended the recording.

But didn’t press delete.

Not yet.
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Post by Captain Canada » 04 May 2025, 20:23

Messy ass situation, goddamn.

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Post by Soapy » 05 May 2025, 07:02

trying to turn this criminal who finally got caught into a poster boy for injustice lmao aight dog
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Post by Caesar » 11 May 2025, 18:45

Captain Canada wrote:
04 May 2025, 20:23
Messy ass situation, goddamn.
We shall overcome
Soapy wrote:
05 May 2025, 07:02
trying to turn this criminal who finally got caught into a poster boy for injustice lmao aight dog
Image Caine be guilty since the day he was born in the eyes of the Yakubian justice system. This is a miscarriage of justice in every sense of the word.
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Post by Caesar » 11 May 2025, 18:45

El peso no se levanta

The door buzzed, then groaned open.

Caine stepped out of solitary with his eyes squinting into the hallway light, wrists loose at his sides, body humming with stiffness from three days of stillness. His shirt hung wrinkled from his frame. He hadn’t spoken a word in seventy-two hours, but his head was clear in a way he hadn’t expected. Not calm. Not rested.

Just sharpened.

The CO didn’t say anything as they walked. Just kept a slow pace ahead of him like a leash without the rope.

When they reached the dorm, the buzz of the security lock sounded louder than usual. As the door opened, the noise inside rolled over him—voices, stomping feet, fists pounding the walls. It wasn’t chaos. Not exactly. It was rhythm. Raw, hard rhythm.

He stepped in.

And everything shifted.

Eyes tracked him from across the room. Some just glanced. Others lingered. A few whispered.

He knew why. His size made him stand out immediately. In any other space, it would’ve made him respected. Here, it made him one of two things:

A threat.

Or a challenge.

The dorm was alive with motion—spades slapped on plastic tables, boys huddled around a tablet watching music videos, two more doing pushups in a corner like it was currency. The ones who didn’t have strength had loud mouths. The ones who had both ran the pecking order.

Caine stood still for a long second. Breathing it in. Letting them see him.

He didn’t puff up. Didn’t try to take space. That wasn’t how you moved here. You didn’t try to own the room.

You just made sure the room didn’t own you.

He slid to the edge of the dorm and leaned his back against the cinderblock wall. Not slouching. Not stiff. Just waiting.

Then it broke out.

Shouting across the floor.

A boy in socks charged another near the chairs, yelling about a stolen honey bun and a ripped hoodie. Voices raised, pushing, hands flying before anyone even tried to pull them apart.

One boy got slammed into a table. The other cracked him in the jaw and rode him to the floor.

A circle formed—half cheering, half waiting for blood.

Caine stayed still, watching the fight through the crowd.

He saw the hesitation in one of the COs. The delay.

They were waiting, too.

Only when one kid started choking the other—his elbow pressed hard across the windpipe, the other boy’s heels kicking the floor—did they finally move.

Batons. Zipties. Screams.

One boy dragged off, face bloody, yelling he didn’t do nothing. The other pulled in the opposite direction, spitting at the floor.

And just like that, the dorm reset.

Back to noise. Back to boredom. Back to normal.

Caine rolled his shoulders.

Then, slowly, deliberately, he reached down and began rolling up the sleeves of his shirt.

He wasn’t trying to show off. But he knew what they were watching.

Muscle definition. Scars. Stillness. Size.

He flexed one arm slightly—not a show, just a stretch—and leaned back into the wall, eyes cast low.

Someone passed nearby, slowed their walk, looked at his arms.

Caine didn’t look up.

But he knew they saw him.

He wasn’t looking for a fight.

But he wasn’t about to hide from one either.

He’d already been locked in a box.

He wasn’t about to be turned into prey.
~~~
The lunch rush was over, and the taquería had gone quiet except for the buzz of the soda fountain and the occasional clink of silverware being rolled into napkins. Mireya stood by the back register, apron still tied around her waist, shifting nervously from foot to foot.

Her manager, a stout woman named Carla with a notepad tucked into her back pocket, was wiping down a table when Mireya approached.

“Carla?”

Carla glanced up. “Yeah?”

Mireya hesitated. “I was wondering if maybe I could pick up an extra shift. Or two, if someone’s dropping one.”

Carla straightened up, her face already bracing. “Business is slow, baby. We’re cutting shifts, not adding.”

Mireya nodded, chewing her lip. “Even weekends? I can come in open to close.”

“I’d love to give you hours,” Carla said gently. “You’re a good worker. But we just don’t have the covers right now. Folks ain’t spending. You know how it is.”

Mireya swallowed hard. “I got a baby, Carla. And her dad—he’s gone right now. He used to help.”

Carla’s eyes softened. She reached out and gave Mireya’s arm a squeeze. “I know, hun. I know it’s rough. But I can’t squeeze blood from a turnip. You just hang in, alright? If anything opens, I’ll think of you first.”

Mireya nodded, her throat tight, eyes burning.

She lingered for a second, trying to will herself not to beg. Not to ask about tips. Not to ask for cash up front. She just swallowed it all and turned back toward the kitchen, head down, heart pounding.

She could already feel the tears climbing, but she held them off until she got to the walk-in cooler.

Inside, the metal racks were stacked with tubs of jalapeños, sleeves of tortillas, and gallon jugs of crema. Mireya closed the door behind her and leaned her back against the shelving.

She slid down to the floor, arms wrapped around her knees. The cold of the concrete seeped through her shoes.

She didn’t sob. Just let the tears run silently.

Caine wasn’t there. The money was gone. The hours were drying up. And she was sixteen, clocking out at a place that couldn’t afford to keep her in.

Outside the cooler, the world kept moving.

But in here, it was cold, and quiet, and honest.
~~~
Ricardo sat cuffed to the table in a cinderblock interview room, jaw clenched so hard his teeth ached. The overhead light buzzed faintly, too bright, too close. His legs bounced under the table—not from nerves, but from pressure building in his chest. He hadn’t spoken since they brought him in.

Two detectives sat across from him—one older, heavy-set and gruff, the other younger and smug, with slicked-back hair and the cocky posture of someone who thought he had all the time in the world.

The older one opened a folder. “Ricardo Fernandez. You know why we’re here.”

Ricardo didn’t respond.

The younger one leaned forward. “Percy gave us a lot. Said you were there. Said Caine was there. We know you weren’t at the second house, but you’re tied to the car. The longer you stay quiet, the heavier it gets for you.”

Ricardo finally looked up, eyes flat. “I ain’t got shit to say.”

The older detective folded his arms. “You sure about that? You help us now, you walk. Simple. Be smart, kid.”

Ricardo shook his head slowly. “I’m not saying a word about anyone.”

The younger detective smiled like he was waiting for that answer. “Alright then. Let’s talk about your mother.”

Ricardo’s body went still.

“Ana Elena Fernandez,” the man said, reading from the file. “Works at the hospital. Born in Mexico. Legal status pending. That sound right?”

Ricardo stared straight ahead. “You keep her name out your fucking mouth.”

“Calm down,” the older one said quickly, trying to sound reasonable. “We’re just saying… if ICE happens to flag her paperwork while this case is open? That’d be unfortunate.”

Ricardo leaned forward, voice rising. “You threaten my mom again, I swear to God, I’ll break your fucking neck even in cuffs.”

“Careful,” the younger one said with mock calm. “That’s a threat.”

“Yeah, bitch. It is.”

The room fell silent for a beat.

Then the older detective stood and closed the folder. “We offered you a lifeline.”

Ricardo spat at the floor between them. “Take me back to my motherfucking cell, pinche chota.”

They walked out, door slamming shut behind them.

Ricardo sat back in the chair, breathing hard, cuffed hands still trembling with rage.

They thought he was scared.

And maybe he was.

But not of them.

And not enough to turn.
~~~
The porch smelled like laundry detergent and fried onions, the smell of real life clinging to the quiet air. Dre stood on the top step, hands in his hoodie pocket, waiting for the door to open. He didn’t want to be here, not really. But guilt had a way of knocking louder than pride.

When the door finally creaked open, it was Ana Fernandez who answered. Her hair was pulled back, dark circles under her eyes. She didn’t look surprised to see him.

“You got a lot of nerve coming here,” she said.

Dre nodded once, eyes down. “I just wanted to check in. See if y’all needed anything.”

She stepped out onto the porch, closed the door behind her.

“You want to help?” Her voice cracked. “Tell your cousin to take his lies back. Tell the police the truth. My son didn’t do anything but stay loyal.”

Dre looked away, jaw flexing. “I didn’t know Percy was gonna flip.”

Ana’s voice rose, raw and shaking. “But he did. And you stayed quiet. Now Ricardo’s in there, locked up like some criminal, and you walkin’ free like none of this got your name on it.”

Dre took a step back, guilt bleeding into frustration. “I didn’t put Ricardo’s name in no statement.”

“But your blood did,” she snapped. Her eyes glistened. “You let him. You let him trade my boy’s name so yours wouldn’t come up.”

Dre didn’t respond. Couldn’t.

“I see you walkin’ around with your hoodie and your silence like it’s armor,” she said, tears slipping free. “My son’s in a cage because he wouldn’t talk. And he’s in there scared, and proud, and stupid—because boys like him think loyalty means dying with your mouth shut.”

She wiped her eyes and took a breath, steadying herself. “So don’t come here unless you bringing the truth. Not flowers. Not apologies. Just truth.”

Dre stood frozen, unsure what to say, the full weight of it sitting heavy in his throat.

Ana turned and opened the door, but before stepping inside, she paused.

“You ever had to visit someone you love through bulletproof glass?”

Dre shook his head.

“You don’t want to.”

Then she went inside and closed the door.

And Dre just stood there, on a porch that didn’t feel like his anymore.
~~~
The apartment was dark except for the blue light of the television flickering across the living room wall. Mireya sat on the couch in a hoodie two sizes too big, knees tucked under her chin, staring blankly at the muted screen. A bowl of cereal sat untouched on the coffee table.

Camila was asleep in her crib in the next room, and for once, the stillness didn’t feel like relief. It felt like something heavy pressing on her chest.

Her mother came out of the bathroom in a robe, towel wrapped around her head. She moved slowly, stiff from the long shift she’d just worked at the care center.

“You okay?” she asked.

Mireya nodded without looking up. “Yeah.”

“You don’t look okay.”

“I’m tired.”

Her mother sat in the armchair across from her, rubbing lotion into her hands. “How was work?”

Mireya hesitated. “Dead. Carla cut my hours again.”

Her mother didn’t say anything right away. Just nodded and kept rubbing her hands together like it was the only thing she could control.

Mireya stared at the blank captions scrolling across the TV. Her voice was quiet when it came. “I don’t know how I’m supposed to do this without him.”

Her mother looked up.

“I used to complain when he’d give me cash in crumpled twenties. But at least we had something. Now it’s just me.”

“You’re not alone,” her mother said.

Mireya shook her head. “You work all night. I can’t even afford daycare if I’m not getting hours. I feel like I’m failing her.”

“You’re not.”

“I feel like I am.”

Her mother stood up and walked into the kitchen. A moment later, she returned and quietly set a couple folded twenty-dollar bill on the coffee table.

“It’s not much. But it’ll hold you over till next week.”

Mireya didn’t touch it.

Her mother sat back down. “Don’t make this a pride thing. Take it. It’s for Camila.”

Mireya’s eyes burned. She nodded once. “Thank you.”

The two of them sat in silence, the TV flickering between commercials.

Her mother finally said, “You loved him, huh?”

Mireya blinked. “I still do.”

Her mother didn’t respond, but the quiet stretched out gently this time.

For the first time in days, Mireya didn’t feel like she was drowning.

She just felt tired.

And seen.
~~~
The soft tap of Quentin's knuckles against the heavy oak door echoed through the polished hallway. He stood outside a corner office on the thirteenth floor of a high-rise downtown, dressed in slacks and a tucked-in polo that still felt too casual for where he was.

The plaque read: Markus Shaw, Esq. — Criminal Defense Attorney.

Inside, the sound of jazz drifted faintly through the door. Quentin adjusted his glasses and waited.

A moment later, the door opened.

Markus stood there in a tailored navy suit, no tie, sleeves rolled at the cuff. “Damn, Q. You clean up alright,” he said, smiling. “Thought you’d be calling, not showing up.”

Quentin stepped inside. “I wanted to put this in your hand.”

He set a manila folder on Markus’s desk. The edges were dog-eared. Inside: progress reports, character statements, Caine’s transcript, even an old game-day program with a photo of Caine in full pads.

Markus opened it and started thumbing through. “This all for court?”

“Whatever you think can help,” Quentin said. “He’s not just some kid who got caught with the wrong crowd. He’s been through hell. He’s stayed clean when everything around him told him not to. Should’ve been dead himself. He fought to stay in school. He fought for football. For his daughter.”

Markus nodded, eyes still scanning. “I can use some of this. The transcripts, the coach’s quote... that’ll help paint the picture. The rest—humanizing details. That’s what they need to see.”

Quentin took a seat across from him. “They don’t see him right now. Just a silhouette. Just a name on a docket.”

Markus looked up. “DA’s office wants this off their plate. Big press on violent crimes this quarter. They’re not looking to bargain. Not unless they think it’ll cost them something worse if they don’t.”

“That’s why I came to you.”

Markus leaned back, tapping the folder. “Alright. I’ll file for discovery tomorrow. Push to review any surveillance and statements. If they’re bluffing about a weapon, we’ll call it. If they’re overstating his role, we’ll break it down line by line.”

Quentin exhaled, grateful but still tense.

“I don’t want him to walk,” he said. “I just want him to be treated fairly.”

Markus gave him a look that was half-respect, half-warning. “You’re asking for a lot in this city.”

Quentin stood. “I know.”

Markus stood too and reached for his phone. “But lucky for him, you came to the right motherfucker.”

Quentin lingered a moment longer. “He’s not just another case, Markus. He’s a kid trying to hold the line with no one to cover his back.”

Markus nodded, dialing. “I hear you. I’ll start with the intake judge, then push for a pre-trial release hearing. If the DA wants to posture, I’ll make them do it in public. Loud and messy.”

Quentin gave a half-smile. “That’s what I’m counting on.”

As Markus stepped out of the office to make the call, Quentin took one last look at the folder sitting on the desk. It wasn’t much—paper and ink—but it held Caine’s story. Or at least enough of it to matter.

He turned and left the office, the door clicking shut behind him.

For the first time in days, Quentin felt like someone might actually be listening.
~~~
Caine sat on the edge of his bunk in the common dorm area, a stub of a pencil in one hand and a folded scrap of paper resting on his thigh. His handwriting was crooked, stiff from trying to cram everything he wanted to say into the corners of a space too small to hold it all.

He started and stopped again.

Camila—

Then scratched it out.

Mamas—

He exhaled hard and rubbed his hand over his face, then tried again.

I don't know what they’re telling you. But I didn’t leave you. I’m trying to come back. I just—

“You writin’ love letters, big man?”

Caine didn’t look up.

The voice came from a few bunks over—skinny kid with a house tattoo on his neck and too much energy in a place where that got you hurt. He was grinning.

“You know your girl probably getting clapped by the whole hood by now, right?”

Caine looked up slowly, eyes blank.

Then he stood.

The room went quieter. Not silent. Just… watchful.

Caine’s shadow stretched across the space between them. He didn’t say a word.

The other boy chuckled, backing up a step but lifting his chin. “Where you from, homie?” He flashed a sloppy hand sign, cocked his head. “You bangin’? Nah—you look like you went private school or some shit.”

Caine didn’t answer.

He just stared at him. A long, steady look.

Then he turned around, walked back to his bunk, and sat down.

He picked up the pencil. Finished the sentence.

I just need you to know your daddy didn’t run.

Behind him, the boy laughed again, but it sounded thinner now. He walked off, tossing a towel over his shoulder, mumbling to nobody in particular.

Caine didn’t care.

He kept writing.

It was the only thing in that place that still made him feel human.
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Post by Captain Canada » 11 May 2025, 21:55

Curious as to how you're going to resolve this. Not everyday the protagonist starts off in penitentiary

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Post by Soapy » 12 May 2025, 08:34

Captain Canada wrote:
11 May 2025, 21:55
Curious as to how you're going to resolve this. Not everyday the protagonist starts off in penitentiary
25-year old college freshman.
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Post by djp73 » 12 May 2025, 13:48

Caine is lucky to have someone going to bat for him, hope it works out and he doesn't squander it.
I don't think Camilla need her granny making fake forty dollar bills tho.
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Post by Caesar » 18 May 2025, 16:49

Captain Canada wrote:
11 May 2025, 21:55
Curious as to how you're going to resolve this. Not everyday the protagonist starts off in penitentiary
We innovating. #induetime
Soapy wrote:
12 May 2025, 08:34
Captain Canada wrote:
11 May 2025, 21:55
Curious as to how you're going to resolve this. Not everyday the protagonist starts off in penitentiary
25-year old college freshman.
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djp73 wrote:
12 May 2025, 13:48
Caine is lucky to have someone going to bat for him, hope it works out and he doesn't squander it.
I don't think Camilla need her granny making fake forty dollar bills tho.
But will it save him?
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