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Post by Caesar » 26 Jun 2025, 19:16

No Hay Mal que por Bien No Venga

The rec room had no windows, but they still called it “outside.” Caine sat with Ramon and EJ near the wall, the floor cool through his pants, the air thick and loud with movement. Somebody was jawing over by the TV. Uno cards slapped the table nearby. But their little corner stayed quiet.

Ramon leaned back, eyes half-closed. EJ scraped lint out of his sock with a pencil.

The door buzzed.

Tyree walked in grinning, jumpsuit halfway unzipped and CO trailing like an afterthought. He hit Ramon’s back with a loud smack and dropped onto the bench like he was still riding whatever adrenaline the courtroom gave him.

“Bitch, I told y’all,” he said, grin wide. “I’m out Friday.”

EJ leaned up, eyebrows raised. “You for real?”

Tyree nodded like he couldn’t stop. “PO and all. They signed off. Said my shit low enough and I got family saying they got space. Judge ain’t even blink.”

“You cried?” Ramon asked, side-eye sharp.

“My mama cried. I just sat there looking like a dumbass that learned his lesson.”

They all chuckled—light, brief. But something in the way Tyree kept moving his leg said it wasn’t sitting right yet.

“Where you headed?” Caine asked.

“Laplace. My auntie house.”

Ramon snorted. “She still got that man with the iguana?”

“Yeah,” Tyree said. “But I ain’t staying long. Bout to start moving smarter.”

“Like hell,” EJ said, grinning.

Caine wiped his palms on his pants. “Y’all both turning nineteen in here, huh?”

EJ nodded. “Ain’t no rush. Could be worse.”

Ramon gave a short nod.

Tyree leaned in, quieter now. “We know some folks. If you tired of waiting.”

Caine didn’t look at him, but didn’t pretend not to hear either.

Tyree kept going. “Witnesses disappear. Papers get misplaced. Folks forget how to get to court.”

Ramon scratched his jaw but didn’t say anything. EJ stayed still.

Caine finally spoke. “Ain’t that simple.”

Tyree shrugged. “Ain’t that hard neither.”

Caine looked down at his hands.

He didn’t agree. Didn’t push back.

Didn’t smile either.

Just stood up. “Gon’ stretch.”

Nobody followed. But he felt them watching.

He didn’t mind.

That’s how it worked. Everybody watched. Everybody waited to see who’d fold.

~~~

The library was cold and quiet. Fluorescent lights buzzed overhead like they hated being on. Mireya sat tucked into the far corner, hoodie halfway over her face, backpack propped against her knees like a barrier. She’d told her third period she had cramps. Fourth, that she needed to meet with her counselor.

Really, she just needed to shut her eyes. For ten minutes. Maybe twenty.

Her head leaned back against the brick wall, heavy with exhaustion. Her body didn’t rest so much as it gave out. Sleep came in fractured pieces, like her brain cutting the lights to stop the house from falling in.

Then laughter cut through.

Sharp. High-pitched. Intentional.

She stirred. Her vision cleared in pieces. Three girls at the table by the printer. She didn’t know the others, but the one in the middle—Kiana Bennett—she knew. Long braids, overlined lips, and a voice that always carried like it was meant to land on somebody else’s nerves.

Kiana had flirted with Caine back in freshman year. Said so to Mireya’s face. Said it like a joke, but not really.

Kiana leaned over the table like she was giving a TED Talk.

“She walk around here like she still matter,” she said, loud enough for the shelves to hear. “Girl, you not even Caine’s babymama—you just what’s left. He got locked, and you stuck here playing dress-up in your mama’s hand-me-downs and busted-ass slides.”

Her friends cracked up.

Mireya sat up.

Kiana kept going. “Every time I see her, she look more tired than them damn daycare posters. Talkin’ bout college? Baby, you ain't goin’ nowhere but aisle five with a WIC card.”

Another laugh. One of the girls slapped the table.

Mireya stood.

Kiana stepped forward, unfazed. “Ain’t nobody scared of you. You just mad ‘cause he picked you to get stuck with and left the rest of us free.”

The first punch came clean. Jaw, side angle, just like Caine had taught her years ago—back when fighting meant something different. Kiana’s head snapped sideways. A chair toppled. Screaming.

Mireya lunged for her again, fists cocked.

But Kiana was faster this time.

The heel of her palm caught Mireya square on the cheekbone—hard. A white flash bloomed behind her eyes. She stumbled back into the table, teeth clenched, face burning.

Then the adults were shouting.

The SRO grabbed her from behind and yanked her into a chair with no care for her balance. She hit the plastic hard, shoulder first.

“You done?” he asked.

Mireya didn’t answer. Her chest heaved. Her vision tunneled.

Kiana stood a few feet away now, lips split, breathing heavy—but it was Mireya’s cheek that pulsed with heat, like her skin was trying to crawl away from her bones.

She didn’t feel tough.

She didn’t feel right.

She just sat there with her fists balled and her stomach hollowed out and the taste of metal in her mouth like she’d been the one bleeding.

~~~

Markus adjusted his tie in the reflection of the courtroom’s darkened window—not because he cared, but because the habit calmed his hands. Jill Babin was already seated at the prosecution table, red pen tucked behind her ear, a highlighter clenched between her fingers like a blade.

She glanced over her shoulder as Markus took his seat and gave him a thin smile. Not friendly. Not hostile. Just the kind that said, We’re not colleagues today.

The judge entered. Everyone rose. Routine, automatic.

When they sat again, Markus leaned forward and cleared his throat.

“Your Honor, we’re moving to suppress the out-of-court statements made by Percy Anderson, who the state has admitted was seventeen at the time of questioning. The interview in question was conducted without a guardian or legal representative present, and therefore—”

“Your Honor,” Babin interrupted, already standing, “Percy Anderson’s charges—while not being pursued—would have qualified him for adult prosecution under the existing statute. Furthermore, his statements were made voluntarily and without coercion.”

Markus didn’t flinch. “Let’s not pretend this is about Percy’s crimes. This is about protecting the DA’s star witness, who gave a narrative that became the entire spine of their case against my client.”

Babin folded her hands. “Your Honor, the state entered into a limited agreement with Mr. Anderson for supervised probation. But that doesn’t negate the voluntary nature of the statement. There was no coercion, no threats, and the testimony aligns with independent evidence.”

“With a lawyer present?” Markus asked.

“No. But he waived—”

“He was seventeen,” Markus snapped, “and the police knew he wasn’t asking for counsel because he thought cooperating would save him.”

Babin turned, polite but firm. “And it did. Because your client is the one on trial, not Mr. Anderson. And the details Mr. Anderson gave—time, place, communication records—correspond with evidence already in discovery.”

Markus stepped forward. “Your Honor, the state is justifying the admissibility of an improperly obtained statement by referencing the charges that Percy didn’t face. But the moment you remove Percy’s confession from their toolbox? Their entire case falls apart. Which is exactly why they’re fighting to keep it.”

The judge held up a hand, silencing them both.

He glanced between them, then down at his notes.

“Mr. Shaw, I’m sympathetic to the issue of Percy’s age, but given the nature of the charges, the voluntary nature of the statement, and the corroborating evidence already introduced into the record, I’m ruling to allow the confession to remain admissible at trial.”

Markus sat down, jaw tight.

Babin didn’t look at him. She didn’t need to.

He leaned back in his chair, staring at the ceiling for just a second longer than necessary.

Opening salvos had been fired.

And the judge had already shown whose side he leaned toward.

~~~

The envelope was already open, but Sara kept reading it like the words might change. The letterhead said Housing Authority of New Orleans. The bottom said: Approved.

A two-bedroom unit. Second floor. Window unit. East of the canal. No pets. No roommates.

She sat at the edge of her mother’s kitchen table, elbows on knees, the house humming around her with too many lives. Kids’ shoes in the hallway. Pots soaking in the sink. Katia, Deysi or Yanet crying two rooms over.

She folded the letter neatly and set it beside her phone.

For a moment, she just breathed.

She had waited six months. The list had been long. Her paychecks were short. This wasn’t what she’d hoped for. It was what was left. But it was hers. If she signed.

She opened the photo attached to the email again. A dingy little kitchen with cracked tile and a dent in the fridge. But the light through the window was clean. Quiet.

No one yelling. No doors slamming. No Hector muttering racist shit under his breath when he got home from the yard.

She could picture herself there. Alone. Or maybe not.

She swiped to the second photo. The bedroom. Just enough space for a mattress, maybe a fold-out crib.

Camila.

Sara felt the name hit her chest before the thought fully formed.

Camila didn’t spend much time with her. That had never been up for debate. Maria made sure of it. But Sara still loved that baby like something holy—even if she only got to hold her for a few minutes at a time.

And if Caine came home… where would he go?

Not here. Not back to this house where there were too many opinions, too many eyes, and no room to grow.

This apartment could be the difference.

Or it could be a reminder. That she might be living alone for a long time.

Nicole’s voice floated back from that late-night meeting in the office: Hope for the best. Prepare for the worst.

Sara stared at the lease form on her screen.

The cursor blinked, waiting.

She didn’t type.

She just sat still, imagining the silence of her own front door closing behind her. Not freedom. Not peace.

But something like starting over.

~~~

Caine sat with his hands clasped, arms tense on the table. His eyes stayed fixed on the door, jaw tight enough to hurt.

He’d said it enough times. Don’t bring her here. He’d said it with words. With silence. With the way he didn’t ask for photos. Didn’t want her to remember this place.

And still.

The door clicked open, and there they were.

Mireya looked thinner than the last time. Pale. Exhausted. She had Camila on her hip, the baby’s curls frizzed from heat and sleep. A purple bruise sat high on Mireya’s cheekbone, half-concealed with makeup, not enough to hide the swelling.

Caine didn’t move.

Camila blinked at him, unsure, then lit up. “Dada!”

His heart seized.

Mireya sat across from him without meeting his eyes. Camila squirmed, reaching across the table.

“I told you not to bring her,” Caine said in Spanish, voice flat.

“Yo sé.”

Silence settled between them like dust.

He looked at the bruise. “Who did that?”

She gave a half-shrug. “Some girl at school ran her mouth.”

“You fighting now?”

“I ain’t start it.”

Caine leaned forward. “Reya…”

“I’m drowning,” she said, still not looking at him. “I don’t sleep. I don’t eat unless I’m feeding her. School’s a joke. Work’s worse. My mom’s tired of watching her, and I can’t say no to work—even when it don’t feel right. I’m trying to hold it all together and it’s just—”

She stopped, eyes glassy but dry.

“I can’t see the end of this. I don’t even know if there is one.”

Caine looked at Camila, who was babbling now, drumming her hands against the plastic tabletop. He reached out, let her grab his fingers. She squeezed tight, laughing.

“I’m sorry,” he said.

Mireya looked up.

“I ain’t mean for all this to fall on you.”

Her face twisted like she wanted to yell, but didn’t have the energy. Instead, she just shook her head.

“Sorry doesn’t pay for daycare. Sorry doesn’t fix the fact that she’s outgrowing her shoes and I’m still wearing shoes I bought sophomore year.”

Caine nodded, quiet.

“Tell your mama to file for stamps,” he said. “Maybe they’ll cover some groceries. Take some weight off.”

“She already working full-time and barely holding it together,” Mireya said. “I don’t need food. I need a break.”

Caine didn’t have a response for that. He just kept his hand out for Camila, who grabbed at his thumb and tried to gnaw on it.

“I’ll figure something out,” he said finally.

“You always say that but look where we are.”

She stood, adjusting Camila on her hip.

“I didn’t bring her for you,” she said. “I brought her so she could see you. So she don’t forget your face.”

Caine stood too. The CO stepped forward, ready to cut it off.

But Caine held up a hand, gentle.

“Just one sec.”

He leaned over and kissed Camila’s forehead. Kissed Mireya’s too, light and quick.

The CO started to protest.

“This my daughter, man,” Caine said, not looking back.

The CO didn’t say anything else.

As Mireya walked away, Camila looked over her shoulder and waved her tiny hand.

Caine didn’t sit down.

He just stood there until the door closed again.
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Post by Captain Canada » 26 Jun 2025, 20:05

This is a hop away from being considered torture porn at this point, gang.
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Post by Caesar » 27 Jun 2025, 23:25

Captain Canada wrote:
26 Jun 2025, 20:05
This is a hop away from being considered torture porn at this point, gang.
Gritty is the word I'd use
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Post by Caesar » 27 Jun 2025, 23:25

Ojos Que No Ven

The visitation room at Elayn Hunt smelled like old disinfectant and boredom. Metal chairs. Plexiglass dividers. A CO leaned against the back wall, arms crossed like he’d seen this movie too many times. Dre sat at the far end, hoodie pulled low even though it was warm inside. He hadn’t been here before. Not to see Ricardo.

Ricardo stepped in, chin high. Orange jumpsuit creased at the collar. He looked leaner, harder. Eyes sharper than before. A line of tension followed him like a second shadow.

He sat down across from Dre. Didn’t pick up the phone. Just stared.

Dre picked it up anyway.

Ricardo waited a beat longer, then lifted his own receiver.

“Didn’t I tell you?” Ricardo said, voice low. “Next time I saw you, it needed to be on the yard. Not behind glass.”

Dre’s throat tightened. “I’m here now.”

“You late.”

“I didn’t know where to start.”

“You didn’t want to start.”

Silence hung a second too long.

Dre shifted forward. “I think they hiding him. He’s got protection.”

Ricardo’s jaw flexed. “You came all the way up here to ask me where a snitch’s hiding? You the one with a phone and a free pair of legs.”

“I’m trying to fix it.”

Ricardo leaned back, arms crossed over his chest. “Nah. You trying to feel better about not doing shit sooner.”

“I ain’t set him up.”

“You ain’t stop it neither.”

Dre looked down at the scratched table surface. He didn’t argue.

Ricardo’s voice dropped. Cold now. Close. “The three of us was supposed to be tight. Brothers. Now? Caine’s in OJJ. I’m doing 15. And you?”

He nodded toward the glass.

“You still out there. Like this ain’t your mess too.”

Dre said nothing.

“I ain’t got addresses for you. No favors to call in. That part of the world’s off-limits now. But I’ll say this—”

He leaned forward, eyes sharp.

“You get close to him? You better finish it. ‘Cause if you freeze up? Don’t come back here talking like you part of anything.”

The CO knocked on the glass. Time.

Ricardo stood first. Didn’t hang up slow. Didn’t look back.

Dre stayed a second longer, then hung up too.

The whole way out, Ricardo’s voice followed him like a second skin: Don’t come back here talking like you part of anything.

~~~

The office at the concrete yard didn’t have AC—just a standing fan that pushed hot air in slow circles. Mireya sat at the desk in the corner, cross-legged in a busted swivel chair, studying for algebra between invoices. Her pen scratched across the page. Her neck ached from hunching.

Her phone buzzed beside her. A text from Denise: “Did you reconcile the orders?”

She typed back: “Yeah. Just finishing the log.”

No reply.

She put the phone down and rubbed her temple.

Then the door creaked open.

Leo leaned in without knocking. Safety vest unzipped. Dust on his boots. Sweat darkening the collar of his undershirt.

He didn’t say anything. Just nodded his head once, that lazy tilt he always used when he wanted something.

Mireya didn’t move.

He reached into his back pocket and pulled out a fold of bills. Waved it between two fingers. Then turned and walked out.

She closed her textbook. Waited five seconds. Then stood.

Outside, the sun pressed like a hand on the back of her neck. Leo was already in the passenger seat of her car, window down, elbow out.

She got in. Didn’t say anything.

He grinned a little. “You playing shy today?”

Mireya turned the key. The engine clicked, then caught. “Where?”

“Up the road. Just need to check some QC shit.”

She backed out.

The drive wasn’t long—ten minutes, maybe less—but it felt slower than usual. The concrete yard faded behind them, giving way to cracked roads and half-empty lots lined with rusted fences. Mireya kept her hands at ten and two, her eyes on the traffic ahead.

Leo leaned back like he owned the seat. His arm stretched along the window, fingers drumming. The smell of cement dust and sweat clung to him.

“You always this quiet?” he asked, glancing sideways. “Or just don’t like talkin’ to me?”

She didn’t respond.

He laughed to himself. “Bet you was real loud back in the day. That’s probably how you ended up with the kid. Guess that shit wears you down, though.”

Mireya’s jaw locked. She focused harder on the road.

“You still with your baby daddy? The one locked up?”

“Yes.” She hoped the finality of her tone would stop the conversation.

Leo grinned wider. “Don’t sound like you think he getting out. Good to know.”

She exhaled through her nose.

He kept going. “Just sayin’. You do good work. Real dependable. Ain’t a lotta girls like that left.” His eyes moved lazily down her side. “Looks good on you too. That little vest. The boots. Kinda like a uniform. Got that… professional vibe.”

She didn’t flinch. Didn’t give him the reaction he wanted.

He leaned a little closer. “Everybody got bills. Everybody got somebody needing somethin’. Question is who you lettin’ help you with that.”

When she pulled up to the address—a corrugated steel shed with a padlocked fence—he finally got out, slow and unbothered, like they were just on break.

Mireya stayed in the car, staring ahead, throat tight.

On the way back, he rolled the window up again and didn’t talk.

When they pulled into the lot, he didn’t move to get out right away. Instead, he reached into his jacket and pulled out the cash. More than usual.

She stared at it.

He dropped it in her lap. “For the ride,” he said. “Next time, I might need some better company from you.”

Her jaw tightened.

Then her phone buzzed.

A message from her mom: “Camila woke up. You coming?”

She didn’t answer. Just looked at Leo. “I gotta get my kid.”

He opened the door and climbed out, slow. Before slamming it shut, he leaned back in.

“Think about it,” he said. “Ain’t no medals for breakin’ your back.”

She reversed out without another word.

Kike was leaning against the fence as she passed, watching her. He didn’t wave.

She didn’t look back.

~~~

Caine sat on the edge of the table in the attorney room, arms crossed, watching the fluorescent light buzz and flicker overhead like it was running out of patience. His leg bounced, slow and steady. His workbook lay beside him, spine cracked, but he hadn’t touched it since breakfast.

The door clicked open.

Markus entered like someone who didn’t need to raise his voice to own a room. Slim-cut suit, tailored sharp even without the jacket. Cufflinks glinting at his wrists. He carried a leather case in one hand, not a bag slung over his shoulder. His expression gave nothing away—but his eyes scanned the room like they were already cross-examining it.

“Afternoon,” he said evenly.

Caine nodded once.

Markus set his case on the table and drew out a folder thick with paper. He stood for a moment, flipping it open with practiced calm.

“Trial date moved again. New date is the last week of January.”

Caine blinked. “I thought it was supposed to be November.”

“It was. But the DA’s office hasn’t finished handing over discovery. Judge signed off on a continuance. Typical. Annoying, but not unexpected.”

Caine didn’t respond right away. He looked down at his shoes, one lace frayed near the tip.

“So, what now?” he asked.

“Now we use the extra time. Keep applying pressure.” Markus tapped the folder. “Nothing’s changed in their playbook. Still leaning on Percy’s statement to carry the weight.”

Caine’s jaw tensed. “He really gonna sit up there and lie?”

“They’ll call him unless something big gets in the way. Our job is to chip at the story until the jury sees the cracks.”

“Ain’t no way to stop it?”

“Not unless he backs out. Or we make the jury question his motives.”

Caine leaned in, elbows on his knees. “Percy always been foul. Dre brought him around. Me and Ricardo didn’t trust him—he was loud, reckless, trying to prove something. We told Dre he was gonna bring heat.”

Markus looked up from his notes. “Dre?”

“Yeah. Andre Helaire. Percy’s cousin.”

Markus raised an eyebrow. “How’s he involved in this?”

Caine shrugged. “He was there. Ricardo was with us earlier but left before anything happened. It was me, Dre, and Percy when shit went left.”

Markus flipped through a few pages in the folder. “State’s version says Ricardo was still present. Not a single word about a fourth person being there.”

He paused. Then said, more to himself than to Caine, “If Dre was there, and Percy left him out—but kept Ricardo in? That’s not just an oversight. That’s protecting his cousin.”

Caine nodded once. “It make sense.”

Markus made a note, pen scratching fast. “That kind of substitution? That’s motive. If the defense can prove Percy omitted a blood relative and framed someone else by omission, it opens a door.”

He closed the folder and looked at Caine. “This helps. If the narrative the DA’s pushing doesn’t line up with the actual players on the ground? That gives us something to rip into.”

Caine leaned back, arms crossed again. “You think it’s enough?”

“I think it’s a start,” Markus said. “And in a case this muddy, a start matters.”

He picked up his case. “Keep your head clear. I’ll see what I can dig up on Helaire.”

Caine watched him head toward the door.

“Mr. Shaw?”

Markus turned, one hand on the knob.

“You ever feel like it don’t matter? Like they already made up their minds?”

Markus didn’t answer right away.

Then: “All the time. That’s why I don’t stop swinging.”

And then he was gone, leaving the door to whisper shut behind him.

Caine sat still for a long moment.

He didn’t trust slow.

Slow was how people got forgotten.

~~~

The folding chairs in the church hall groaned under the weight of too many bodies and not enough air. A wall unit rattled in the corner like it was doing its best, but the heat hung thick. Sweat trickled down Sara’s spine beneath her blouse. Her mother sat beside her, hands folded over a dog-eared hymnal, murmuring quiet amens whenever the speaker paused for breath.

It was one of those Tuesday night community meetings that mixed Scripture with life advice and barely veiled gossip. A little prayer, a little judgment. A pot of red beans waiting in the back.

Sara’s mind wasn’t on any of it.

She kept glancing at her phone, screen dimmed but not dark enough to hide the image she’d left open—the apartment listing. Second-floor unit. Narrow kitchen. A little square of light hitting a scuffed linoleum floor. It wasn’t much. But it was something.

Her name was on the approval letter. She just hadn’t signed.

A woman across the aisle leaned forward. Ms. Lillie—one of the older church sisters, always doling out hugs and butter cookies to the kids—gave her a warm nod.

“Heard you got approved for that place. That’s a blessing, baby,” she whispered.

Sara blinked. “I… yeah. Just thinking about it.”

Beside her, Ximena turned her head, slow and sharp. Her mouth tightened, but she said nothing until the final hymn had ended and the folding chairs started screeching across the linoleum.

Outside in the parking lot, as the streetlights buzzed on, Ximena finally spoke.

“You really think that place is better than being here with family?” she asked in Spanish, voice low but sharp.

Sara stiffened. “I didn’t say I was leaving tomorrow.”

“No, but you’re thinking it. And that’s enough.” Ximena’s hand tightened.

Sara swallowed hard. “I’m just trying to have options.”

“You already have them,” Ximena said. “This house. Your sisters. Your brother. Your father, descanse en paz. Me. You don’t need to go chasing some ugly apartment just to prove something.”

Sara shifted her purse higher on her shoulder. “It’s just an apartment.”

“It’s a choice,” Ximena said, voice harder now. “It was family that helped you when you came home pregnant and alone. Family that took you back in.”

“I know,” Sara said. “And I’m grateful.”

“Then act like it.”

Sara didn’t reply. There was nothing to say that wouldn’t sound like rebellion.

Later that night, she lay on the air mattress in her mother’s sewing room, the ceiling fan ticking in slow circles above her. One of her nieces cried down the hall about a missing doll. A car rumbled by outside, bass shaking the glass.

She opened the email again.

Looked at the form.

Name. Date. Signature.

She typed in “Sara Guerra” and hovered over the button.

Didn’t press send.

Not yet.

Just lay back and stared at the ceiling.

Listening.

Waiting.

Trying to figure out if the silence she wanted was even real.

~~~

The motel room smelled like mold and microwave popcorn. The AC unit sputtered with every gust like it hated its own breath. Percy sat on the edge of the bed, peeling back the lid of the Popeyes box, the grease already soaking through the paper liner underneath.

It was still warm. Barely.

Outside the window, he could see the edge of the deputy’s cruiser parked sideways under a drooping palm. The man himself leaned against the hood, one boot up, scrolling through his phone like the sun wasn’t melting every inch of the pavement.

Percy picked up a wing, bit through it, and chewed slow. His eyes stayed on the door. No lock from the inside. No chain. Just a little button on the knob that wouldn’t stop anything if someone really wanted in.

He dropped the bone back in the box and walked over to the bathroom. Turned on the shower. Let the steam start up—enough to fog the mirror.

Then he knelt beside the mattress and reached underneath.

The burner was right where he left it. Cheap. Plastic. No case. Just tucked into the slit in the lining like a secret.

He checked the window again. Then dialed.

It rang twice.

“Who this?” a girl answered. Sharp, suspicious.

“It’s me.”

“…Percy?”

“Yeah. I just— I just wanted to hear your voice.”

Long pause.

“I heard your name in some shit,” she said finally. “Didn’t believe it at first. Now you calling out the blue?”

“I ain’t do nothing no other nigga wouldn’t do.”

“Plenty wouldn’t.”

“I got my own room. Nobody around. You could come through.”

She laughed. Not kindly. “You really think I’d show up somewhere alone for you? Boy, I ain’t stupid.”

“You think I’d hurt you?”

“I think you already talking to the people. How I know you not trying to find other people to point ‘em at.”

He didn’t say anything.

“Should’ve took your charges like a man.”

“I thought you were my ride or die, Tay.”

“You thought wrong, nigga.”

Click.

He sat there for a second, listening to the dead line hum like a low insult.

Then he slid the phone back under the mattress and went back to the bed.

He chewed slower now. No music. No TV. Just the broken hum of the AC and the sound of grease clinging to skin.

Outside, the deputy knocked once on the window.

Percy didn’t look.

He just kept chewing.
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Post by Caesar » 29 Jun 2025, 00:47

Las Cuentas No Se Olvidan

The attorney room smelled like dry paper and anxiety. Caine sat stiff in the plastic chair, workbook closed beside him, but his thoughts weren’t on school. Nicole sat across the table, blazer still buttoned, laptop open but untouched. Today wasn’t about files.

Today was practice.

She leaned back, eyeing him over folded hands. “You ready?”

Caine nodded once. “Go ahead.”

Nicole’s posture shifted instantly. Her voice hardened. “Mr. Guerra. Isn’t it true that you supplied the firearm used in the attempted carjacking on April 12th?”

Caine blinked. “No.”

“You didn’t have a gun?”

“I didn’t say that. I ain’t give it to nobody.”

Nicole clicked her tongue. “But you knew your co-defendant had it.”

“I didn’t know what he was gonna do with it.”

Nicole narrowed her eyes. “So, you’re saying he acted alone? You just stood by?”

Caine hesitated. “I didn’t know it was gonna happen like that.”

“You were there.”

“Yeah.”

“You didn’t stop him.”

“I tried. I pushed his hand away when he pointed it.”

Nicole broke character, holding up her hand. “Okay, stop.”

Caine exhaled, rubbing his temples.

She spoke gently now. “You’re not fighting for the truth. You’re fighting to be understood.”

He looked up. “Ain’t that the same thing?”

“No,” she said. “The truth is messy. But a jury doesn’t want messy. They want clarity. Emotion. They want to know why they should care about you.”

He nodded slowly.

Nicole reset. “Let’s try again. Deep breath.”

Caine inhaled, then sat up straighter.

Nicole slipped back into the role. “Mr. Guerra. The state has text messages showing you planned multiple carjackings over a two-week period. Can you explain that?”

“I talked about it, yeah. But talking ain’t the same as doing.”

“You planned it.”

“I was scared. Broke. I ain’t have options. But that don’t mean I did what they saying.”

“You have a daughter. Isn’t that motivation enough to stay out of trouble?”

Caine’s jaw worked. Then: “I ain’t proud of none of this. But I ain’t a monster. I ain’t tell nobody to pull that gun. I didn’t make that call.”

Nicole studied him.

He held her gaze this time.

“Better,” she said. “Still shaky. But better.”

Caine leaned forward, elbows on the table. “You think they’ll believe it?”

“That’s not the point,” Nicole said. “We make them feel it.”

She closed the laptop softly, almost like a signal. “Let’s run it again.”

~~~

The guidance office always felt like it was trying too hard. Posters of smiling college students with slogans like Dream Big and Future Starts Here were peeling at the corners. A potted plant sagged by the window, one leaf brown at the tip. Somewhere behind the wall, a printer groaned to life and coughed out a sheet.

Mireya sat in the plastic chair with her legs tucked to one side, arms crossed tight. Her backpack rested by her feet, one of Camila’s socks still stuffed into the outer mesh pocket.

Ms. Hanley settled into her seat across the desk, glasses low on her nose. She had the kind of face that always looked half-worried and half-tired, but her voice was gentle. “Thanks for coming in, Mireya.”

“I got your pass,” Mireya said, eyes down.

Ms. Hanley clicked through a few tabs on her desktop. “Your grades came through for the last grading period. You’re passing. But just barely.”

Mireya said nothing.

“You missed two assignments in biology, three in world history, and you haven’t turned in your algebra project. That’s the one due last Friday.”

“I’ll get it in,” Mireya mumbled.

“I believe you. But I’m worried.” Ms. Hanley leaned forward slightly, elbows on the desk. “Because you used to be one of the strongest students in your class. Back in ninth and tenth, you were tracking for dual enrollment.”

“I still want that,” Mireya said quickly, too quickly.

“I believe that too. I do. But what I want to know is—do you have help? Support, I mean.”

“My mom watches Camila. Mostly.”

Ms. Hanley tilted her head slightly. “What about emotionally? Financially? When things go sideways—who’s catching you?”

Mireya hesitated. Then, quieter: “It’s just us.”

“And the father?” Ms. Hanley asked it gently, not pressing—just letting the question sit.

“He’s in jail.”

The air between them shifted.

Ms. Hanley didn’t look surprised. Just sad in a way that felt too understanding. “I’m sorry.”

Mireya shook her head. “It’s not your fault.”

“Still. That’s… that’s a lot.”

Another pause. Mireya could feel her jaw tightening, the pressure building in the back of her throat. She kept her eyes on a spot on the desk—a tiny nick in the laminate where someone had carved a name halfway through and given up.

“Do you feel like you’re drowning?” Ms. Hanley asked softly.

Mireya’s voice came out small. “Every day.”

Ms. Hanley reached into her filing drawer and pulled out a handful of brochures—most of them bent at the corners, their pastel covers faded. “There are programs. Financial aid. Childcare resources. GED options too, but I don’t think that’s the path for you. You’re still in the fight.”

Mireya took them automatically, slipping them into the back of her binder. She didn’t look at the titles.

“I’m not saying it’s fair,” Ms. Hanley said. “It isn’t. But it’s still yours to finish. You still have a future, Mireya. And I want to make sure you get to decide what it looks like.”

Mireya nodded once. She couldn’t manage anything else.

When she stepped into the hallway, the fluorescent lights made her eyes ache. It felt louder out here—louder than usual. Laughter echoed from the stairwell. Two girls ran past, bumping her shoulder as they went.

She paused by her locker and leaned against the cool metal for a breath.

Her phone buzzed in her pocket.

L.b.: “U good?”

She stared at the screen, thumb hovering.

Then she locked the phone without responding.

As she walked toward her next class, the weight of the binder pulled heavier against her shoulder.

The brochures inside rustled softly, unread.

She didn’t throw them away.

But she didn’t open them either.

~~~

The pod smelled like detergent and boredom. Somebody was mopping. Somebody else was singing too loud over a card game near the TV. Caine sat on the bench by the back wall with his back to the cinderblock, legs stretched out, tracing circles with the toe of his sneaker.

Ramon dropped down next to him without warning. “They link up?”

Caine nodded once.

EJ and Tyrell joined them, quiet and casual, but Caine could feel the weight of it—like something had shifted. The kind of moment where everybody pretended not to notice but paid attention anyway.

“That name you gave helped,” Tyrell said, voice low. “Folks outside been tryna move weight without having the jakes on they back. Tito’s name still good good out there.”

“I told y’all,” Caine muttered. “He ain’t been in the shit for as long as he has without knowing how to move.”

Ramon grinned faintly. “You right.”

There was a silence. Not awkward—just full.

Then EJ leaned forward, forearms on his knees. “So, what’s up? You affiliated or what?”

Caine blinked. “I’m not.”

Tyrell raised an eyebrow. “Not yet.”

“I ain’t really been about that,” Caine said. “Just trying to make my money and go about my business.”

Ramon nodded slowly, chewing a piece of gum he must’ve smuggled from somewhere. “You will be. If they send you to Dixon? Or Hunt? Even Angola—eventually, you gon’ need somebody.”

“I hold my own.”

“Everybody say that,” Tyrell said. “Right until the second they can’t.”

Caine didn’t argue.

Ramon leaned back, arms crossed. “Where you from again?”

“Lower Nine.”

EJ smirked. “Shit, you already one of us. That’s all 39 right there.”

“Even if you was runnin’ with that old nigga from the Melph,” Tyrell added.

Caine kept his face still. That old head had fed him when he was broke, patched him up more than once, kept him out the game longer than anyone else could’ve.

“People switch up inside,” EJ said. “They claim who protects them. Ain’t about turf no more. It’s about who gon’ answer if your name get called.”

Caine said nothing.

“You don’t gotta choose today,” Tyrell said, standing. “But you will.”

Ramon tapped his knuckles once against Caine’s shoulder before following.

Caine sat a while longer.

The buzz of the pod blurred into background.

He wasn’t scared.

But he wasn’t sure if staying neutral was survival—or just delay.

~~~

The porch steps creaked beneath him like they were tired of holding anything up. Dre sat with his elbows on his knees, hoodie pulled low, watching the block. Old tires stacked by the curb. Grass gone patchy. A plastic bag drifted down the street like it had nowhere better to be.

He lit a cigarette. Let the smoke sit in his lungs before exhaling slow. He hadn’t been back here long, but it already felt like too long. Every house looked smaller now. Every laugh from down the block felt like it was meant for someone else.

A voice cut across the sidewalk. “Look who finally came home.”

Tay.

She walked with a slow roll in her step, flanked by two girls he didn’t know. Denim jacket over a tank top, gold hoops catching the light. Her eyes locked on him before she even hit the gate.

Dre stood. Not all the way, just enough to meet her without looking like he was hiding.

“What you doing on this side?” she asked, arms folding.

“Just sitting.”

“Mmm.” Her smile didn’t touch her eyes. “Look like sittin’ with guilt.”

Her girls laughed. One kept walking. The other lingered but eventually moved along too.

Tay stayed.

Dre rubbed the back of his neck. “You heard anything?”

“You mean about your cousin snitching?” she said, eyebrow raised. “Or about ya potnas in the parish because of it?”

“I mean about where he at.”

She studied him. “Why?”

Dre looked down the block. Quiet. “Because I need to know.”

“That some justice shit or some ‘you tryna make yourself feel better’ shit?”

He didn’t answer.

Tay shifted her weight. “You got money?”

Dre blinked. “That what it takes now?”

“Look—I ain’t no duck. Not when it might come back on me.”

He dug into his pocket. A small roll—hundreds, folded tight.

She reached for it.

He pulled it back.

“Where he at?”

She hesitated. Then: “Boutte. Motel off the highway. By the school, probably, janky sign. He been posted up there for a minute.”

He handed her the money.

She tucked it into her bra without breaking eye contact.

“Don’t get caught slippin’,” she said. “They already know who you are.”

He nodded once.

She walked off without saying goodbye.

Dre sat back down. The cigarette had burned to the filter. He lit another, but it didn’t taste the same.

Nothing did anymore.
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Post by Captain Canada » 29 Jun 2025, 01:23

About damn time. Go waste his ass
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Post by Chillcavern » 29 Jun 2025, 19:24

Oh gawd, they’re all on the precipice of “Fuck Around Find Out”. Shit’s gonna get messier before it gets cleaner here.

Dre’s going to get absolutely fucked over from every angle, isn’t he?
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Noche en Rojo

The lunchroom didn’t smell like Christmas. It smelled like steam trays, bleach, and too many boys pretending they didn’t care. The guards called it a “special meal.” Caine stared down at the tray—two slices of meatloaf sitting heavy under a layer of ketchup, some powdered mashed potatoes, a roll harder than the plastic fork.

Ramon bit into his like it was real food. “They done put their foot in this one,” he joked, mouth half-full.

EJ snorted. “That foot been in the same sock since Thanksgiving.”

Tyree leaned over from across the table, waving his spork. “Y’all bougie now? They gave us two meats. That’s a Christmas miracle.”

Caine didn’t laugh.

Didn’t eat either.

The sounds of the room floated around him—dominoes slapping, chairs scraping, boys from different pods calling out holiday greetings like they mattered. One of the COs wore a Santa hat. Somebody had drawn a tree on the whiteboard with dry erase markers and hung a paper star at the top.

Caine just kept staring.

Camila’s first birthday had come and gone.

Thanksgiving too. He hadn’t even thought about it until after the food had been cleared.

Mireya’s birthday had passed a couple weeks ago. His, too, on the day after. Nobody in here remembered. And the people who might’ve… they had bigger things to worry about.

Now Christmas. His first locked up. Probably not his last.

Tyree nudged him with an elbow. “You straight?”

Caine blinked. “Yeah.”

“Then eat.”

“I’m good.”

Ramon reached over and grabbed the roll off Caine’s tray like it was up for grabs. “Don’t waste, lil bro. Commissary closed till Tuesday.”

Caine didn’t stop him.

EJ lowered his voice. “You thinking about your people?”

Caine nodded once.

EJ glanced around the room like he was searching for the words. “Ain’t nothing out there but more pain, anyway. Least in here, you know where the shots comin’ from.”

That didn’t help. But Caine knew he meant it to.

The ketchup on the meatloaf had congealed. Camila would be pulling wrapping paper off some cheap toy right about now. Mireya would be sitting alone in a room full of people who only saw her as a cautionary tale.

He pushed the tray forward. “Y’all can have it.”

Ramon gave him a look. “You gotta eat.”

Caine shook his head. “Ain’t hungry.”

The noise in the room rose—someone started banging a plastic cup on a tray, and soon others joined in, an off-beat rhythm that passed for celebration.

Caine just sat there.

Thinking about how many more birthdays he’d miss. How many more holidays would come and go without him. How long it would take before Camila forgot the sound of his voice.

Tyree said something else. Ramon laughed. EJ leaned back in his seat.

Caine didn’t hear them.

He was somewhere else.

Learning how to be gone.

~~~

The incense curled up from the censer like smoke from an old wound. Christmas Mass at St. Cecilia’s was always the same—velvet ribbons wrapped around fake pine, creaking pews filled with the same tired faces pretending to glow with hope. Sara sat between her mother and Saul, hands folded in her lap, lips moving through the prayers but not feeling any of them.

“Peace be with you,” the priest said.

“And also with you,” came the hollow reply.

Beside her, Saul nudged gently. “Tía?”

She looked over.

“You good?” he asked.

Sara gave a tired smile. “Not really.”

He nodded once. Didn’t push. Just stood there with her in the hush between hymns.

Ximena’s hand tightened around her rosary, beads clicking softly. Sara could feel the judgment without even turning. Her mother had a way of praying louder when she thought someone else’s soul needed it more.

As they stood for communion, Sara stayed seated.

When Mass ended, the congregation spilled into the foyer in small waves, murmuring greetings and nodding at the altar boys. Outside, the cold hit like a warning. The early dark was already creeping in, the glow from the stained glass pooling weakly on the sidewalk.

“Feliz Navidad,” someone said behind her. Sara turned just enough to offer a small smile.

Hector lit a cigarette just past the steps.

“Pretty mass,” he said, blowing smoke sideways. “But if you’re praying for Caine next month, you better hope for more than Jesus.”

Sara turned, face pinched. “What’s that supposed to mean?”

“It means,” Hector said, “they’re not letting that boy out. Not now. Not ever. You think you need a lawyer. What you really need is a priest.”

Sara stepped forward, jaw tight. “Chinga tu madre, Héctor.”

Gasps snapped through the air. One of the older women standing nearby made the sign of the cross.

Ximena hissed her name. “Sara—”

She walked to the parking lot alone, arms crossed, teeth clenched against the sting in her eyes. Behind her, the murmurs grew louder. Words like shame. Embarrassment. Ungrateful.

She didn’t care.

Not tonight.

She looked up at the sky, the stars blurry with cloud cover and city haze, and whispered a prayer of her own.

Not for forgiveness.

But for a miracle.

~~~

The backboard rattled as the ball clanged off the rim and bounced down the driveway. Markus didn’t chase it.

“Hell of a shot,” he called.

“You fouled me!” Miles yelled, jogging after the rebound with a dramatic limp. “And the light’s in my eyes!”

“Excuses,” one of his nephews said, checking the ball at the top of the key. “Run it back.”

Markus leaned against the porch railing, arms crossed, his sweatshirt dark at the collar. He’d taken the blazer off hours ago, kicked off his shoes too. The house behind him hummed with warm light and Christmas jazz, the sounds of his family inside—cousins, aunties, Delia moving between the oven and the stove with her usual focus.

The driveway court was cracked and uneven, rim bolted to a plywood backboard someone had painted LSU purple a decade ago. But tonight, it felt like home.

“Old heads versus young bloods,” Greg said, passing Markus the ball. “One more game before we eat.”

“I’m not pulling a hamstring for your pride.”

“You already pulled it,” Greg muttered. “Back in ‘02.”

They laughed, and the game resumed—half-court, trash talk, elbows legal.

After the final layup, Markus collapsed onto the porch steps, towel over his neck, chest rising with slow, even breaths. Miles flopped down next to him, sweat beading across his forehead.

“Uncle Ced said I should start lifting,” Miles said.

Markus raised an eyebrow. “You still can’t bench your body weight.”

“Not yet.”

Delia came out then, holding two Gatorades. She handed one to each and kissed the top of Miles’ head before giving Markus a look.

“Heard from another scout,” she said. “This one’s out west. Said if his grades hold, they want him at their camp this summer.”

Markus twisted the cap off the bottle. “Told you. Overseas gonna be jealous.”

Delia shook her head. “He’s going to college. You’re not raising a TikTok phenom.”

Markus smirked. “LSU, huh?”

“Whichever school keeps him within driving distance.”

They all sat there for a moment, the air just cool enough to feel like winter, the smell of fried turkey drifting down the block.

Delia lowered her voice. “How’s your head?”

Markus wiped sweat from his brow. “Quiet. For now.”

“The trial’s soon.”

“I know.”

“You ready?”

He looked at Miles—tall for sixteen, but still all angles and awkward grace. Then back at Delia. “I’m ready.”

She touched his shoulder once, then disappeared back inside.

Markus took another long sip. The porch buzzed with voices from inside, the old city stretching out behind them—tired, pulsing, alive.

January was coming.

But tonight, he had this.

~~~

The phones clicked on with the same static edge every time. Ricardo waited for it—ignoring the other inmates’ calls, eyes fixed on the dingy tile in front of his boots—like it might sound different this time. It didn’t.

A tone beeped. Then the ring.

Once. Twice.

Then the shuffle of a receiver being lifted.

“¿Bueno?”

“Mamá.”

A breath. Then her voice, trembling but warm. “Ricardito.”

He swallowed. “You good? They told me they sent you somewhere else at first—was it Sonora?”

“Durango,” she said. “Not even the right one. I waited at the bus station for six hours. My sister and Miguel came to get me.”

“I’m sorry.”

“Ya pasó.” It’s passed.

“I didn’t want this to happen.”

“None of us did,” she said. “But you’re still here. And I still hear your voice.”

He closed his eyes, chest tightening. “They gave me fifteen.”

A pause.

“I know.”

“They say if I behave, maybe I get out sooner. But I don’t know.”

“Don’t think like that.”

“Mamá—”

“No,” she said firmly. “You think about your soul. Not the time. You think about who you are in here—” she tapped her chest, and the line fuzzed like the sound reached across the wires “—and who you want to be when they let you come home.”

Ricardo nodded even though she couldn’t see it. “You still lighting the candles for me?”

“Every week. San Judas, La Virgen, todos. The whole altar looks like a birthday cake.”

He laughed softly, the sound catching somewhere between sadness and gratitude. “Gracias.”

“Cállate,” she said, but sweetly. “You don’t thank your mother for loving you.”

“I still do.”

There was a pause on her end, like she didn’t want to hang up either.

“Merry Christmas, Mijo,” she said at last.

“Merry Christmas, Mamá.”

The line stayed open for another few seconds. Neither of them spoke. Then the system cut them off with a chirp and a click.

Ricardo set the phone back gently.

He didn’t move right away. Just stood there with the memory of her voice wrapped around his shoulders like a blanket too small to keep the cold out—but too important to let go.

~~~

The smell of tamales and fried pork filled the house, thick with warm air and louder conversation. Mireya sat on the edge of the couch in her aunt’s living room, legs crossed beneath her, Camila balanced in her lap with a toy from Dollar Tree wrapped in holiday paper. Camila had torn it open with more curiosity than joy, now mouthing the edge of the ribbon, sticky fingers tapping Mireya’s arm in a soft rhythm.

The room was packed. Cousins crowding the floor. Tíos with folded arms watching a soccer match on the small TV in the corner. Someone’s baby crying in the hallway. Laughter rising from the kitchen, where the women stirred pots and rolled dough and poured soda into red plastic cups.

Mireya wasn’t part of any of it.

She sat quiet. Small. Out of the way.

Camila tugged at the hem of her sleeve.

Maria was in the kitchen, laughing with her sisters—Mireya’s aunts. She wore an apron she hadn’t taken off since they got there. Her hair was pinned back, and there was a lightness in her face Mireya hadn’t seen in months. Not at home. Not when they were alone.

Only Elena had crossed the invisible line.

She’d pulled Mireya aside when they arrived, whispered, “You good?” and hugged her tight like she meant it. Mireya nodded, but didn’t say anything back. Elena didn’t push. She just gave her a long look—one that understood too much—and disappeared into the noise, back into the places Mireya couldn’t reach anymore.

The other cousins barely looked her way.

Once, that had been her. Talking fast, laughing louder. Now, their eyes skimmed past her like she was a stranger, or worse—like she was someone they’d been warned about. She was the one with the baby. The one who hadn’t gone to homecoming. The one whose boyfriend was locked up and whose mama showed up tired and silent.

Mireya adjusted Camila on her lap. The baby had started playing with her shoelace, cooing to herself. Her curls were frizzing from the heat.

A sharp laugh snapped from the kitchen. One of the uncles—Tío Gerardo—boomed something in Spanish that made a few people turn their heads.

“…la chiquita con la niña…”

Mireya’s stomach tightened. She didn’t need the rest. It was the tone. The way they laughed. That half-mocking, half-knowing kind of joke meant to sting without sounding like it did.

She didn’t say anything. Just shifted her weight, held Camila closer.

Camila turned toward the noise, then looked up at her with wide eyes. “Dada?” she asked, clear and curious.

Mireya blinked.

Camila looked again to the kitchen, then back to her mother. “Dada?”

Her voice was softer this time. Like she wasn’t sure, like maybe he was behind the noise, behind the people, waiting to show up.

Mireya pressed a kiss to her forehead. “No, mi amor,” she said, voice catching. “Not today.”

Camila laid her head against Mireya’s chest, content with the answer for now. Her thumb found her mouth.

Mireya looked out the window.

It was starting to rain. The colored lights on the neighbor’s porch flickered against the glass—green, red, green, red. A string of them had gone out, leaving a gap of dark bulbs between the blinking.

She watched them until her vision blurred.

Not crying. Not really.

Just tired in the kind of way that sat in your bones.

~~~

The house in Jackson smelled like cloves and pine needles. A fake tree stood crooked in the corner, flocked in artificial snow and wrapped in an old Saints fleece as a tree skirt. Quentin sat on the couch with a paper plate balanced on one knee—ham, cornbread dressing, a scoop of sweet potatoes too sugary for his taste. Across from him, Ashley’s father leaned back in his recliner, one socked foot resting on the opposite knee, tea glass sweating in his hand.

“New Orleans still treating y’all like fools, huh?” the man said, not looking up from the muted game on TV. “Can’t believe you still letting my daughter raise a baby in all that madness.”

Quentin chewed slow. Swallowed. “We’re doing fine.”

“Fine?” Her father snorted. “Y’all was in the news not even six months ago. Shot at by some damn teenager? You think that’s what fine looks like?”

Ashley’s voice floated in from the kitchen. “Daddy—”

“Don’t ‘Daddy’ me. You asked us to host, I didn’t ask for a sermon.”

Quentin wiped his hands on a napkin, set the plate on the coffee table. “I’m not saying the city’s perfect. I’m saying it’s where I can make a difference.”

“Ain’t your job to fix broken boys,” the man said, shifting forward now. “You got your own child. Your own wife. What you doing putting yourself in danger for some kid who already chose the streets?”

Ashley entered the room with their baby on her hip, dressed in a red onesie with gold ruffles. Her mother trailed behind, carrying a foil-wrapped tray of rolls.

“Because if I don’t do it,” Quentin said, his voice level, “nobody else will.”

Her father scoffed. “That’s ego talking. You think you the one man who can pull them all back from the fire?”

“No,” Quentin said. “But I think one man can stand between a kid and the edge. One man can show them there’s another way. And sometimes that’s all it takes.”

The baby let out a soft whimper. Ashley adjusted her gently, patting her back.

Her mother spoke up, voice softer. “Q’s trying. That’s more than most.”

“Trying don’t mean succeeding,” her father said.

Ashley cut him a glance. “You weren’t there that night. You didn’t see how close it came. You didn’t see what it did to him.”

The silence that followed wasn’t awkward—it was full. Heavy. Old furniture and old grudges creaked under its weight.

Quentin looked down at his daughter, whose fingers had curled around the edge of his shirt. Her eyes were wide, curious, unaware of the world waiting outside the front door.

“I don’t blame that boy,” he said. “Or the ones with him. I blame a system that never gave them anything else. I blame every adult that turned away. I blame every closed door, every shrugged shoulder. And I’m not gonna add to that list.”

Her father leaned back slowly in his recliner. “You really believe all that?”

“I do.”

Another pause.

Then the man said, quietly, “You better be right. ‘Cause it’s not just your life you gambling with now.”

Ashley stepped forward and handed Quentin the baby. She settled easily into his arms, curling against his chest with a sleepy sigh.

“I don’t think it’s a gamble,” Quentin said. “I think it’s a calling.”

Ashley smiled, tired but proud.

Her father didn’t answer.

But he didn’t argue either.

Outside, the wind moved through the brittle magnolias.

Inside, Quentin watched his daughter’s eyelids droop, felt her tiny heartbeat against his chest, and held her a little closer.

~~~

The motel’s hallway reeked of mildew and burnt coffee. A plastic wreath hung crooked on the fire extinguisher case. Outside, the sun had dipped low behind the strip mall, bleeding orange through the dust-streaked window. Inside room 212, Percy sat on the edge of the bed, phone in one hand, the other gripping the thin edge of the nightstand like he was trying to steady himself.

He hadn’t slept much.

Not from fear, he told himself. From boredom. From the thudding rhythm of the AC unit coughing all night. From the quiet that got too loud when there wasn’t anything to drown it out.

A knock at the door cut through.

Not loud. Just… present.

He stood. Moved slow. Peeked through the warped peephole.

Outside, Jill Babin stood with a brown grocery bag in one hand and a look like she’d already lost her holiday spirit. The deputy posted at the end of the walkway—beefy, bald, red-cheeked—gave her a nod but didn’t follow.

Percy opened the door two inches.

“I figured,” Jill said, lifting the bag, “you might want something hot.”

He opened the door wider.

Inside the bag was a plastic clamshell with a few slices of ham, boxed stuffing, and a sad roll wrapped in foil.

“No drink?” Percy asked.

“Don’t push your luck.”

He took it, muttering thanks.

Jill didn’t leave.

He shifted. “So… when am I going home?”

“After trial,” she said. “Mid-January, if things hold.”

Percy frowned. “I thought—”

“Nothing moves during the holidays,” she interrupted. “Even your protection detail wants to be somewhere else.”

He opened the box, poked at the food with a plastic fork.

Outside, a gust of wind knocked something metallic down the corridor. The deputy looked up, one hand drifting toward his belt.

That’s when Percy saw it.

A figure—tall, hood up, ski mask stretched across the face—rounded the corner between the vending machine and the ice room.

He knew that walk.

Heart jamming sideways in his chest, Percy pointed. “Him—hey! Hey!”

Jill turned.



Dre crouched behind a rusted AC unit, sweat slicking the inside of his ski mask. The motel’s walls glowed faint orange in the dying light, casting long shadows across the lot. The cold bit at his fingertips where the gloves didn’t fit right. He’d been out here long enough for his thighs to burn from holding still. Long enough to watch the cop at the end of the walkway shift his weight and look bored.

Then the door opened.

Percy stepped halfway out. Holding a grocery bag like he still deserved to be taken care of.

A white woman stood next to him, talking low. Too casual.

Dre’s pulse hit his throat.

This was it.

He stepped out from behind the corner, slow and steady, pulling the mask tighter as he moved. The concrete felt loud under his boots. The deputy’s head snapped up.

Then Percy spotted him.

Their eyes locked.

Even across the lot, Dre saw the fear flood his cousin’s face. Saw him point.

“Hey, hey!” someone yelled—that white bitch maybe, or Percy, or the deputy himself. It didn’t matter.

Dre didn’t wait.

He raised the gun, hands steady. Squeezed the trigger.

The gun kicked hard in his grip—too hard. He hadn’t fired in months.

Muzzle flashes split the air—pop-pop-pop-pop—sparks bouncing off metal rails. Percy ducked. The woman screamed. The deputy shoved her back through the open door and fired back. A bullet pinged past Dre’s shoulder.

Dre dropped low and bolted.

Shots tore after him, hammering the pavement, cracking glass. He hurdled the hood of a parked sedan, scrambled between two vans, boots slipping on spilled oil.

One more burst from the deputy’s sidearm ripped the air as Dre reached the edge of the lot.

Then he was flying across US 90.

Cars honked. Tires screeched. A truck veered hard left, horn blaring. Dre cut between bumpers, heart in his throat, feet barely touching ground.

No time to think.

Just run.

Behind him, sirens started to wail. Radio squawks echoed down the corridor.

But Dre didn’t stop.

Didn’t look back.

Didn’t feel anything except the heat of the blood in his ears and the memory of Percy’s face—wide-eyed, mouth open, too slow to duck.

Almost.

Next time, he told himself.

And kept running.



Muzzle flash lit the corridor in bursts—pop pop pop pop—sparks against the railing, the low roar of panic in Jill’s throat as the deputy yanked her back into the room.

Percy hit the floor hard, food scattering across the carpet.

The deputy returned fire, chasing toward the corner, gun raised, shouting into his radio.

Back inside, Jill pulled herself upright and slammed the deadbolt.

Percy sat slumped against the far wall, hands over his head, chest heaving.

Jill turned to him, voice sharp. “Who was that?”

“I don’t know.”

“Bullshit.”

He looked at her. Sweat slicked his forehead. His hands were shaking.

“They after you because of this case?”

Percy paused. For just a second, something flickered in his eyes—recognition, guilt, fear.

Then he shook his head. “I owe somebody money. That’s all. Ain’t got nothin’ to do with court.”

Jill didn’t believe him.

She walked to the door, glanced out the peephole again, then stepped outside as sirens started to rise in the distance.

More cruisers. Flashing lights. Voices over radios calling for backup.

Inside, Percy wiped the sweat off his face. His hand trembled.

The bag of ham lay spilled on the floor.

Red Christmas.

And he’d just become the ghost in somebody else’s story.

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Post by Soapy » 30 Jun 2025, 07:04

Dre can't get shit right, incompetent group of criminals right there
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Post by Captain Canada » 30 Jun 2025, 14:13

Come the fuck on.
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