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Post by Caesar » 11 Aug 2025, 22:11

Pa Tout Verite Dwe Pale

The classroom smelled like sweat baked into polyester and dry-erase marker that had been sitting too long in the heat. Even with the window cracked, the air was heavy, thick enough that Caine could feel it sticking in his lungs. The hum from the fluorescent lights overhead was just loud enough to make the silence feel full, and every few seconds, one of them flickered like it was thinking about giving up.

Caine sat two rows from the front, legs stretched out, slouched low in a chair. His shirt clung damp to his back from practice, the fabric shadowed darker where sweat had soaked through. His book bag was slumped against the desk leg, zipper half-open, papers sticking out like they were trying to escape.

Mr. Landry leaned forward in the chair at his desk, flipping through a thick ACT prep booklet. The corners were bent, the cover soft from use. He didn’t look like he was in a rush. Nobody else was in the room—it was after school, after practice, the halls outside quiet except for the far-off squeak of a janitor’s mop bucket wheels on tile.

“Alright,” Landry said, running his finger down a page. “Reading comp. Question twenty-seven—underline the sentence that tells you what the narrator’s real motivation was.”

Caine looked at the sheet in front of him. He found the paragraph, read it once, then again. The answer was there, sitting plain as day, but his brain felt slow, like he was running plays underwater. This week had stacked on him—film study before first period, sprints after, four hours of hauling lumber and bags of cement for Mr. Lucas’ crew, Roussel breathing down his neck, Camila waking up screaming for him every night. Now it was Thursday—or maybe Friday—he honestly couldn’t remember without pulling out his phone.

He circled the sentence, slid the paper toward the edge of the desk without sitting up.

Landry glanced at it, then nodded once. “Right. You know this stuff. Problem is, you’re answering it like you got five minutes before you pass out.”

Caine let out a short breath that wasn’t really a laugh, rubbed both hands down his face. “Ain’t far from it.”

“The ACT’s not designed for people running on fumes,” Landry said. “Ideally, you’d walk in rested. Brain sharp.”

“Ideally,” Caine said, eyes still on the page, “I wouldn’t be doing school, football, work, probation, and raising a kid all at the same time either.” His tone was flat, no complaint in it. Just the truth.

Landry set the booklet down. “That’s exactly why we’re here. You pull a good score, it opens doors—college, football, whatever comes after.”

“That’s the plan,” Caine said, leaning back in his seat, the plastic creaking under his weight. “Get the number, get to college, play, then I’ll figure the rest out later.”

Landry tilted his head, studying him. “That’s where you’re wrong. College isn’t just about the degree. It’s about learning to think—problem-solve like an adult. You get that skill, you can work your way through anything. Especially with your background.”

Caine smirked without looking up from the desk. “What? A criminal?”

The pause between them stretched. Landry didn’t flinch. “No more a criminal than half the CEOs in this country. Difference is, they got money and sunscreen.”

That pulled an actual grin out of Caine, quick and crooked. He shook his head once, looking down so Landry wouldn’t see it.

The hum of the lights filled the space again. Outside in the hall, a locker door clanged shut. Somewhere in the building, an old AC unit kicked on and rattled against the window frame like it was trying to shake itself loose.

Landry pushed the booklet back toward him. “Again,” he said. “We’ll keep at it until your brain’s too tired to get it wrong.”

Caine sat forward, pencil tapping lightly against the desk. He could feel his eyelids dragging, but there was a stubborn part of him that refused to hand Landry a bad set of answers, not when the man had stayed after on a Thursday just for him.

He filled in the next bubble, then the next, forcing himself to focus on each line like it was a pass he had to thread through double coverage. Landry didn’t hover—just sat back in his chair, arms crossed, watching the way Caine worked the page.

The minutes stretched. Sweat cooled under his shirt, leaving him chilled, but his palms stayed damp against the pencil. When he handed the paper over, Landry skimmed it without comment, then slid it back with another set of problems.

Caine didn’t even bother to groan. He just bent over the page again. Somewhere in the back of his mind, he could hear Camila’s laugh from earlier in the week, sticky hands reaching for him before school. That was the picture he held onto while he worked through the questions—because the score wasn’t just about him getting out. It was about her having something better to grow up in.

Landry’s voice cut back in after a few minutes. “You know, you’ve got that vision for… things for a reason. This ain’t that different. Just a different kind of read.”

Caine looked up at him, pencil paused mid-bubble. Landry was leaning forward again, expression even.

“Field’s smaller,” Landry said. “But the decisions matter just as much.”

Caine gave a small nod, then went back to the test, pencil scratching steady against the paper.

~~~

The parking lot was half-lit, two busted sodium lamps humming over cracked asphalt. A warm breeze pushed a strip of fast-food napkins across the ground, catching for a second on a curb before the wind took them again. Ramon’s car sat tucked in the shadow of a closed laundromat, engine off, windows down just enough for the smoke to drift out.

Ramon was behind the wheel, one hand loose on the top, the other holding the blunt. He wore the kind of stillness that came from knowing you had time, that nothing happened until you decided it did. E.J. sat in the passenger seat, slouched deep, knees wide, the glow of the blunt catching in the corner of his eye each time Ramon passed it.

“They ain’t going nowhere this year,” E.J. said, smoke curling out slow. “Shough’s trash. I could throw that bitch better than his ass.”

Ramon smirked. “You still salty about that money you lost last year.”

E.J. shook his head. “Fucking right. We had a poor ass quarterback last year too. A couple of ‘em” He flicked ash out the cracked window, the ember breaking up into sparks. “Niggas in the city stupid, though. Acting like we one player from getting back to the Super Bowl.”

The back door opened without warning, dome light flooding the interior. Tyree slid in, wearing his Brother Martin letterman jacket like he’d just stepped off a school bus. The gold and maroon caught the light, bright against the shadows.

E.J. stared for a beat before grinning wide. “Say, bruh. You look like you about be on one of them musical shits. The fuck you doing in that?”

Tyree shot him a flat look. “Fuck you, nigga. You know I just came from school.” He peeled the jacket off, tossed it into the corner behind Ramon’s seat, and leaned forward to take the blunt.

“I always be forgetting you be out here with them white boys. Don’t let none of the OGs find out. They gonna clown your ass for life,” E.J. said, still laughing.

Tyree ignored him, taking a slow pull, holding it, exhaling toward the open window. He handed it back to Ramon, settling into the seat like he’d been there the whole time.

Ramon turned the key, engine rumbling awake. “Let’s go.”

The drive out was mostly quiet, city sliding past in blurs of streetlight and neon. Every so often E.J. muttered about Shough’s stats or the Saints’ busted O-line, but neither of the others bit. Traffic thinned as they left New Orleans behind, the road opening up into dark stretches broken only by gas station islands and the glow of highway signs.

By the time they hit Baton Rouge, the air had changed—thicker, the smell of damp concrete and fried food leaking from corner kitchens still open this late. Old South Baton Rouge felt tighter, the houses closer to the street, porches sagging under the weight of old furniture and people who’d been sitting there for years.

Ramon eased the car into a short driveway beside a shotgun house with paint peeling in long curls. The porch light burned weak and yellow.

Inside, the kitchen was cramped, two men standing shoulder-to-shoulder near the counter. Their TBG chains caught the dim light each time they moved. The brick of cocaine between them sat wrapped tight in cloudy plastic, edges sharp where the powder pressed against it.

The air was warm and still. Nobody smiled.

Ramon stepped forward, the bills in his hand already in order. He counted them out slow, fingers steady, the only sound the crisp flick of money turning. When he finished, he gave a small nod.

One of the men dipped his chin in return. Hands came up, quick daps, palms smacking in short bursts. No small talk, no extra looks.

They left the same way they came in, the door’s old hinges groaning before it shut behind them.

Back in the car, the silence held for a few seconds before Tyree leaned back with a smirk. “Man, I almost told ’em NBA better.”

Ramon’s hand shot back without warning, reaching back and smacking the back of Tyree’s head—not hard enough to hurt, just to make the point. “You stupid as hell, nigga. I’m not trying to get caught in these niggas beef.”

E.J. cracked up in the passenger seat, head dropping forward as he laughed. “That nigga YoungBoy is weird weird.”

Ramon pulled them back onto the street, headlights sweeping over the cracked pavement ahead. The night pressed in again, the engine’s low hum the only sound as they headed for home.

~~~

The fan in the corner had a tired rattle in its spin, like something inside was just loose enough to never settle. Every rotation pushed warm air across the room in slow waves, carrying the chalky smell of concrete dust and the faint damp of paper that had been through too many humid mornings. No matter how many times she wiped the desk, the grit always came back—settling into the wood grain, catching under her nails when she ran her fingers along the edge.

Mireya sat behind the desk with the ledger open flat, elbows braced on either side, pencil balanced between her fingers. The slips in the pile to her left were uneven, corners curled where rain had caught them on the yard, ink blotted or faded. She worked methodically, eyes moving from slip to spreadsheet, checking, marking, moving to the next. The wall clock above the door ticked just off-beat with the fan’s rattle, a small reminder that time here moved differently—slower, heavier.

Through the narrow, dust-filmed window, the yard glared under the late sun. Trucks sat angled along the fence, tires white with dried dust. Near the loading bay, Felix was talking to Jamie, Stasia standing between them. Felix’s posture was loose but contained, the kind of stance that didn’t waste motion. Even from this distance, Mireya could picture the way his voice carried—precise, clipped, that faint accent she could never place giving certain words a weight that made you pay attention.

Stasia’s back was to her, hair catching in the sunlight each time she moved. Her stance didn’t angle toward either man; shoulders square, head level, weight even. She looked like someone who knew she didn’t need to adjust to be heard. Mireya’s eyes stayed on her a moment too long before she made herself look back down. The numbers on the page blurred for a second before settling again.

The screen door gave its usual hinge-complaint before slapping shut. Mireya didn’t look up right away—learned habit—but she felt the shift in the air when someone took the chair across from her desk.

“You never answer my texts,” Leo said, leaning forward, forearms resting on his knees.

“That’s because I don’t work for you,” she said, pencil moving over the page. Her tone was even, flat, not giving him anything to grab onto.

He waved his hand, wrist loose, like he was brushing away the point. “That’s semantics.” Then he leaned back, stretching his legs under the desk until the toes of his boots almost touched hers. “What you doing this weekend?”

She kept her eyes on the column, marking a slip for correction. Didn’t answer. The silence stretched between them.

He let the pause hang long enough to feel intentional. “How come I never see your man around here? You do have one, right?”

Her head came up then, eyes locking with his. “Probably ’cause he’d kill you, and I’m not trying to send him back to jail.”

Something in his face slipped—barely, but enough for her to catch—before he tried to pull the smirk back into place.

The main door opened, bringing a rush of yard heat and the dry tang of dust. Jamie came in first, Felix behind him, Stasia close enough that her shoulder brushed his.

“Leo,” Jamie said, voice steady but sharp at the edges. “Fuck off.”

Leo stood, muttering something low as he left through the screen door. The wood slapped the frame with a harder clap than usual, making the fan’s hum sound louder in the sudden quiet.

Felix stopped beside the desk, shadow falling over her ledger. “What is it you think you do here?” That slight accent bent the shape of the question, making it feel heavier than the words alone.

“I make sure the slips match the spreadsheet,” she said, straightening in her chair.

“And if they don’t match?”

“Then we make them match.”

Felix’s mouth twitched at the corner—quick, unreadable. He gave a short nod, like she’d given the right answer, and turned toward Jamie’s office.

Stasia lingered in the space between them for a beat. Her gaze found Mireya’s, steady enough to make Mireya’s pulse pick up before she even realized she’d been holding it. There was nothing hurried in the way Stasia’s eyes moved—just the slow, certain look of someone taking her measure. The wink was quick but deliberate, enough to leave a mark without breaking the room’s stillness. Then she followed Felix and Jamie through the door, the latch clicking shut behind her.

Mireya let out the breath she’d been holding, setting her pencil down. The fan pushed another stream of warm air across her neck, lifting loose strands of hair. She looked back toward the window—the glare made it hard to pick out detail now, the yard already swallowing whatever space Leo had been standing in minutes ago.

She pulled the next slip from the stack, the paper rough under her fingertips, and laid it on the desk. The clock ticked, the fan rattled, and she bent back to the work, each number aligning exactly where it needed to be.

~~~

The building was quiet enough that Roussel could hear the hum from the vending machine down the hall. Past midnight, the air inside had settled into that heavy, stale mix of paper dust, old coffee, and the faint tang of bleach from the janitor’s mop earlier in the evening. The overhead fluorescents cast a flat, cold light, shadows pooling at the corners where the file cabinets lined the wall.

Across from him, the new intake sat slouched in the metal chair, one leg bouncing a slow rhythm. His DOC release clothes—faded gray sweats and a stretched-out white T-shirt—looked like they’d been folded and unfolded too many times. Ink curled out from the collar toward his jaw, another mark disappearing up his sleeve. Roussel noted both, pen moving neatly across the box for “identifying marks” on the form.

“So, Terrell,” he said, tone even, almost conversational, “how’s freedom feel?”

Terrell’s eyes slid toward the clock on the wall. “Feel like my baby mama waitin’ in the car since y’all takin’ all night.”

“Of course you got a baby mama and not a wife,” Roussel said, still writing.

Terrell’s mouth opened like he might bite back, but he stopped himself. The bounce in his leg slowed.

Roussel looked up, catching his eye just long enough to make the silence work for him. “That’s what I thought.”

The pen scratched again, his handwriting precise in the narrow lines. “You know how this works, Terrell. You violate, I send you back in. No hesitation. You understand me?”

“I know the drill.” Short. Flat. His gaze didn’t lift from the desk.

The pause between them stretched. The hum from the vending machine filled it, steady and low. Roussel slid the release papers across. “Sign. Date. Keep your appointments and you won’t see me more than you have to.”

As Terrell leaned forward, Roussel reached for a manila folder set aside on the desk. Jill Babin’s block-printed label was clean, the corner unbent. He opened it, eyes flicking to the grainy color CCTV still—four kids at the Mardi Gras barricades. Caine in the middle, jaw set, beads around his neck, holding his daughter. The others—Ramon, E.J., Tyree—faces blurred but familiar to Roussel from past sweeps, field interviews, and mugshots.

He slid the photo across the desk, one finger tapping the edge. “Ever seen ’em?”

Terrell didn’t lean in. “You askin’ if they bangin’?” He shrugged. “Don’t know. Don’t care.”

Roussel let the shrug hang in the air, eyes on him longer than the words required. He tracked the way Terrell’s jaw flexed once, twice, like he was working something back down before it could make it out. The bounce in his leg had stopped.

Roussel sat back, the leather creaking under him. The smile that touched his mouth was thin, calculated. “If you ever do know, Terrell… might make me see you in a different light.”

“I ain’t no snitch.” The words landed firm, but his pen hand hesitated over the date line.

“No,” Roussel said, voice even, “you’re just the type who enjoys going back inside.”

The silence after was heavier than the room’s air. Terrell finished the date, dropped the pen so it clicked against the desk.

Roussel closed the folder, pushing the papers back toward him. “Welcome back to the real world. Try not to waste the opportunity.”

Terrell shoved his chair back, the scrape of the legs loud on the tile. He stood, shoulders tight, eyes still avoiding Roussel’s, and left without another word. The door clicked shut behind him.

The vending machine hum filled the quiet again. Roussel picked up the photo, studied it for a moment longer, then tucked it back into the folder. His pen was already in hand when he reached for the next file.

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Post by Soapy » 12 Aug 2025, 06:17

who is terrell again
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Post by Caesar » 12 Aug 2025, 06:24

Soapy wrote:
12 Aug 2025, 06:17
who is terrell again
No one. Throwaway character just meant to have that conversation.

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Post by redsox907 » 12 Aug 2025, 16:58

can't believe I got four updates behind somehow lmao

no one going to mention Mireya watching stripper tok? Girl finna find her calling.

Somethings coming to a head soon tho - too much non-action happening. Like the eye of the storm :smart:
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Post by Captain Canada » 12 Aug 2025, 18:02

Roussel gotta get got. Insert that storyline somewhere, please.
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Post by Caesar » 12 Aug 2025, 22:24

redsox907 wrote:
12 Aug 2025, 16:58
can't believe I got four updates behind somehow lmao

no one going to mention Mireya watching stripper tok? Girl finna find her calling.

Somethings coming to a head soon tho - too much non-action happening. Like the eye of the storm :smart:
Gotta keep up.

She also watched makeup videos, hair videos, a few updates back she watched some bitches on a beach. Her calling can't be becoming a makeup artist, hair stylist? A lifeguard? Gotta be a stripper???? :smh:

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Roussel gotta get got. Insert that storyline somewhere, please.
We'll see how that resolves :curtain:
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Post by Caesar » 12 Aug 2025, 22:25

Sa Ki Fè Nwit, Fè Jou

The swing chains creaked every time Camila floated forward, her little sneakers skimming the air. Mireya kept one hand wrapped around the warm metal, giving the seat a steady push, her other hand shading her eyes from the late-afternoon sun bleeding low over the rooftops. The air was thick enough to taste—cut grass gone damp in the heat, the faint sweet of a snowball stand down the block, and underneath it all, the river’s slow, dirty breath.

Angela sat sideways on the next swing, both feet dragging lines in the dirt. Paz leaned back against the rust-flaked pole of the swing set, sipping the last of a melted Big Shot from the corner store. The park wasn’t crowded—just a couple of kids at the jungle gym, their shouts cutting through the steady whir of cicadas.

“So,” Angela said, pulling at a loose thread on her shorts, “how’s your little ACT hustle going? Paid help and all that.”

Mireya shrugged, eyes still on Camila’s braid swinging like a pendulum. “It’s fine. I guess. Better than when I was just using the school’s practice books.”

Angela smirked. “Girl, watch—you gon’ find some open admission school outta state and skip the whole stress.”

Paz laughed, tilting her head back against the pole. “Long as it got a beach, I’m good. I’m not tryna freeze my ass off somewhere just ‘cause they give out scholarships.”

Mireya gave a small snort. “I just wanna go somewhere. Anywhere but here.” The words came out flat, no lift at the end, like the dream was already worn thin from being said too many times.

The chain-creak was the only sound for a beat. Then footsteps scuffed over the cracked walkway, the sound of voices low, then sharper when they caught sight of them.

“Aye,” one of the boys—Darius, tall and wiry—called, his voice cutting across the empty stretch of grass. “What’s up with your girl?”

Angela’s brows pinched. “Huh?”

The shorter one, Reggie, jerked his chin toward Mireya. “We hooked y’all up, and ain’t one of y’all hook us up.”

Mireya didn’t stop pushing the swing. “Y’all got something for Angela, or you just talking shit?”

Reggie shook his head slow, like he was setting her up for the punchline. “Nah, ’cause you don’t hold up the end of your bargains.”

Mireya finally looked at them, dead-on. Rolled her eyes so hard it was almost theatrical. “You thought I was gonna fuck you for a point five?” Her voice was sharp enough to carry past them. “Be for fucking real.”

She turned back to Camila, gave the swing another push. Camila laughed, kicking her feet out, oblivious.

Paz’s laugh cracked the air, a quick burst she didn’t bother to hide. That did it—Darius’s face tightened, embarrassment flashing before he looked away. Reggie tried to mask it with a muttered insult as the two of them started walking toward the far side of the park.

Mireya’s fingers flexed once on the chain before settling again, metal imprinting into her palm. Her jaw shifted, slow, like she was working something out of her teeth. She kept her eyes forward, on the slow rhythm of Camila’s hair catching the light, letting the boys’ footsteps dissolve into the hum of the park.

Angela’s swing squeaked as she turned toward her. “You good?”

Mireya shrugged again, the movement small. “They the ones pressed, not me.”

The cicadas filled the space the boys left behind, loud enough to almost blot out the sound of the traffic a few blocks over. Camila dragged the toes of her sneakers in the dirt, slowing herself down. “More, mommy,” she said, and Mireya pulled her back into motion without missing a beat.

The metal was warm under her palm, sun-baked. Sweat tickled down the side of her face, caught at the corner of her jaw. She let it roll.

Paz was still grinning to herself. “Point five,” she repeated under her breath, like the absurdity of it was the funniest thing she’d heard all week.

Mireya didn’t laugh.

The sky was shifting toward that syrupy gold, shadows from the chain-link fence stretching long over the grass. Mireya pushed the swing a little higher, felt the strain in her shoulder, the bite of the chain’s vibration in her hand. She could still hear their voices—Darius, Reggie—and the way they’d said “bargains,” like she was supposed to owe them for a decision they made.

Camila’s hair whipped back against her arm as the swing came forward again. Mireya caught the chain, slowing her down this time, letting the seat rock until it stilled.

“You ready to go?” she asked in Spanish.

Camila shook her head hard, gripping the sides of the swing. “No.”

Mireya exhaled through her nose, half a smile ghosting there, and gave her one more push.

From the sidewalk, a car horn popped twice, somebody waving out the passenger window at Angela. The sound bounced around the little park, then faded.

Mireya kept her eyes forward, on the motion of the swing, the steady weight in her hands. Every push was the same, even, unbothered.

~~~

The ball slapped against the concrete, each bounce a sharp echo off the cinderblock walls. Heat shimmered above the yard, baking down on bare shoulders and the chain-link shadows that crawled across the court. Dre’s T-shirt clung to his back, damp from the run-and-gun pace, his breath steady in the way you only learned after years of playing outside with no timeouts.

Trash talk floated back and forth — lazy, biting, familiar.

“Nigga, you couldn’t hit the rim if I taped you to it.”

“Keep talkin’, watch me drop one on your head next possession.”

It was easy, for a minute, to pretend this was just another run at the park back home. Same jostle under the hoop, same barked laughs when somebody air-balled, same quick dap after a good pass. The fence might as well have been chain-link around a neighborhood park, not razor wire.

Then the air shifted.

A group of white inmates cut across the far baseline, slow on purpose, eyes locked on the players like they were waiting for someone to flinch. Their boots scuffed through the dust, slicing the court in half. No one stopped moving at first — just glances traded, the game slowing on its own.

Dre caught the ball on a rebound, held it at his hip. “Y’all lost or somethin’?”

One of them smirked, didn’t break stride. “Court looked open to me, sambo.”

“It ain’t,” somebody else said, stepping forward.

The white boys kept coming, their bodies a moving wall. Shoulders bumped. Words sharpened.

“You blind, or you just stupid?”

“You gonna make me move?”

The ball felt solid in Dre’s hands, the pebbled rubber biting into his palms. He kept it there, eyes flicking between the men in front of him, reading angles like he’d read a defense — who was bluffing, who had weight on their front foot, who was itching for it.

The first shove came quick. Then another. Voices jumped an octave, spilling over into shouts. A punch cracked the air, and the court exploded.

Dre’s shoulders were in it before he could think. Elbows, forearms, the taste of dust as shoes scraped and bodies slammed together. A figure broke from the cluster — white, lean, eyes bright with something ugly — and in his hand, a flash of metal.

The shiv caught the sun for half a second. Dre’s stomach pulled tight, the yard around him flattening to heat and empty space. No cover, no out, just him in the open and that blade closing the distance.

Then he was on Dre.

Instinct took over. Dre swung the ball hard, smashing it into the man’s wrist. The blade wavered, missed his side by inches.

They collided, both hands scrambling for the handle. The rubber of the ball rolled away, bumping to the fence. All Dre could feel was the thin, taped grip of the shiv under his fingers, the heat of the other man’s sweat slick against his knuckles.

A heel caught the edge where concrete turned to dirt. Dre’s balance went, his shoulder slamming into the ground. The white boy surged over him, bringing the blade down.

Dre twisted, felt the wind of it pass his ribs. His boot found the man’s thigh, shoving him sideways. They rolled, the shiv jerking between their hands, each pull opening the skin across Dre’s knuckles.

The yard erupted with another sound — the thunder of boots, barked commands slicing through the chaos. Riot gear clattered, shields and batons in a wall that closed fast.

“Down! Down now!”

No one went down.

The white boy’s knee dug into Dre’s side. Dre wrenched at his wrist, felt the shiv give a fraction. Pain bloomed at the back of his head — the first baton strike — but his grip didn’t loosen.

Another blow caught his shoulder, then his ribs. The white boy grunted under his own set of strikes. The batons didn’t stop until the blade clattered free, skittering across the dirt.

The yard smelled like dust baked into sweat, sharp with the tang of blood from somewhere close. His ears rang from the strikes, every breath tasting faintly of rust. Somewhere past the fence, a voice was still yelling, but it came to him like it was underwater.

Hands hauled Dre up by the back of his shirt, shoving him toward the fence. His breath came in short, sharp pulls, chest tight, blood running down his fingers. The shouts of the other inmates blurred into one steady roar.

Through it, Dre kept his eyes on the ground where the shiv had fallen, already swallowed by the shuffle of boots.

The heat pressed in. Sweat stung his eyes. Somewhere in the noise, a whistle blew long and hard, the sound dragging the moment out until it felt like the whole yard was holding its breath.

Then the cuffs bit his wrists, and the world moved again.

~~~

The roller moved in slow, steady passes, the hiss of paint against wood almost lost under the steady thump of music drifting down from the roof. Caine’s arm ached from the repetition, forearm flecked with white, sweat tracking the inside of his elbow before falling to the plank beneath his feet. The siding drank the fresh coat quick, thirsty from years of heat and rain.

The sun was sitting high enough to burn, heat pressing against him from all sides — from above, from the siding still warm from the morning. The scaffolding gave a faint groan every time he shifted his weight, metal warm against the soles of his sneakers.

From somewhere above, a tuba blared over the rapid pop of an accordion. Narco corrido — full and loud, tinny from the cheap speaker, but still carrying the whole block.

“Man, cut that off,” somebody on the ground called, voice pitching over the beat. “We in New Orleans, not fuckin’ Sinaloa.”

Laughter drifted down from the roof crew. “Don’t be mad ‘cause we got better music.”

“That ain’t better — that’s noise.”

“That’s culture, bro. Learn somethin’.”

The back-and-forth started to roll, voices overlapping — half in English, half in Spanish.

“You can’t even dance to that.”

“Better than that bounce shit. All y’all play is the same song.”

“I’ll take bounce over this any day.”

Caine kept his focus on the siding, letting the bristles pull smooth over the grain. He felt the eyes on him before one of the ground crew actually called out.

“What about you, Caine? This shit or bounce?”

He didn’t look down, just smirked. “Don’t matter to me. I ain’t got no dog in this fight.”

That earned a mix of groans and laughs, the argument spinning off without him. He wasn’t about to pick a side in somebody else’s tug-of-war.

From the edge of the yard, a woman’s voice cut through.

“Caine, you mind giving me a hand?”

He glanced over his shoulder. Taylor stood by the curb, one hand shading her eyes against the glare, the other holding a clipboard and a manila envelope.

“Yeah, I got you,” he said, setting the roller in its tray. The metal rungs of the scaffolding were hot in his hands as he climbed down, two steps at a time, boots hitting dirt with a soft thud.

They walked toward her SUV, parked nose-first into the sun. The street was quiet except for a passing bus a block over, the faint whine of its brakes cutting across the neighborhood’s background hum. Heat radiated off the hood, that smell of hot metal and faint exhaust lingering in the still air.

“How’s your little one?” she asked as they walked. “You mentioned her last time.”

“Yeah,” he said, the corner of his mouth ticking up. “Terrible twos right now. Real terrible.”

Taylor smiled like she understood. He doubted she did, not really. The tantrums, the constant motion, the way a kid that age could flip from laughing to screaming in one breath — that was a whole other job.

“Thought you were just here for the summer,” he said. “You still around?”

“Not for long. I’m leaving next week.”

They reached the SUV. She popped the hatch, and the slow lift revealed a stack of thin concrete pavers wrapped in plastic.

“Those need to come out?”

“Mm-hmm.” She pointed with the pen from her clipboard.

Caine stepped in, hooked his fingers under the edge of the stack, and lifted. The weight settled into his arms, pulling at his shoulders, the plastic slick under his grip.

“Where to?” he asked.

Taylor’s eyes flicked over him for a beat, and he caught it — the half-second linger before she shrugged. “Wherever. I was just told to drop them off with the checks.”

He carried the pavers past the sidewalk and set them down just over the driveway’s edge, the plastic making a soft scrape against the concrete.

When he turned back, Taylor had pulled a leather portfolio from the trunk. “Would it be too much to assume your kid’s mom is white?”

He laughed, shaking his head. “Nah. She’s Latina. Una Mexicana.” He glanced at her. “I give off fucking a white girl vibes or something?”

“You never know who is a Robert Griffin in the dark,” she said, flipping open the portfolio, fingers thumbing through a neat stack of bills.

Caine’s mouth pulled into a grin, but there was a sharpness under it. “I know I don’t give off that corny ass shit. I’m in these streets.”

Taylor laughed, the sound light, and kept counting.

“Well, just make sure that wherever you end up in college, you don’t forget that. Snowbunnies are everywhere. Waiting for you to slip up and take your money,” she said, her tone teasing.

He took the folded bills from her hand, the paper dry and stiff from the heat. “Don’t worry. I’m locked down. Nobody’s gotta worry about me around snowbunnies.”

Taylor gave a small nod, eyes catching his for a second before she stepped back toward the open hatch. “Guess I’ll see you around.”

Caine tucked the money into his pocket, the weight of it settling there. He turned back toward the house without looking over his shoulder.

The corrido was still playing, maybe even louder now, voices from the crew folding into it — half singing, half arguing, the rhythm of work never really breaking.

He climbed back onto the scaffolding, picked up the roller, and pressed it to the siding. The paint went on smooth, each stroke erasing the faded gray into a clean, uniform coat. Above him, the roof crew kept the beat going, the bass line vibrating through the boards under his feet.

~~~

The afternoon heat was the kind that clung to skin and wouldn’t let go. Saul had been leaning against the sun-baked brick of the Cane’s for so long that the warmth had seeped through the back of his T-shirt, making it stick to him in patches. The air smelled like fryer oil, salt, and sweet tea — thick enough that every breath carried a faint greasy tang. Somewhere behind the counter, a timer beeped over the low hum of a drive-thru order being shouted into a headset.

Trent stood beside him, picking apart a piece of Texas toast like he was stripping it for parts. “So you really not gonna tell us?”

“Tell you what?” Saul asked, pulling at his drink straw until it squeaked against the lid.

“Don’t play,” Trent said, flashing him a grin. “Zoe. We know it was good.”

Saul shook his head, looking out toward the parking lot. “I’m not talking about her like that. I actually kinda like her.”

Javi leaned back against the wall, one sneaker propped on the brick. “She probably got a lot of bodies. I wouldn’t date her.”

“That’s ‘cause she won’t fuck you,” Trent shot back without missing a beat.

Saul smirked. “Facts. You just mad.”

Javi made a face, about to say something else, but his eyes cut toward the sound of an approaching engine. A beat-up sedan rolled into the drive-thru, its muffler rattling under the steady idle.

Pedro was behind the wheel, elbow resting on the open window, a cigarette hanging between his fingers. He was already grinning by the time he saw Saul. It wasn’t the kind of grin that meant hello.

The car inched forward, then braked harder than it needed to. Pedro flicked the cigarette to the pavement and ground it under his palm before yanking the wheel and cutting across the painted arrows, going against the flow. The move earned a honk from a car behind him, but he didn’t look back.

He rolled up alongside them, tires hissing on the asphalt, parking crooked on the side of the drive-thru lane. His friend in the passenger seat leaned forward just enough to see past him.

“Where you been at?” Pedro asked, voice casual but his eyes locked on Saul. “Ain’t seen you around. You still running from me?”

Saul straightened his back but didn’t move from the wall. “Ain’t nobody running from you.”

Pedro’s grin widened, slow, like he was savoring it. “Then we can run it back right here, if you ain’t scared.”

Trent and Javi both turned toward Saul at the same time, their faces open with expectation. The fryer alarm went off again inside, sharp and insistent, but no one moved.

Saul let the moment stretch, his tongue pressed to the inside of his cheek. “Not fighting in public,” he said finally.

Pedro laughed, head tipping back, and his friend joined in — both of them loud in a way that made it clear they wanted the sound to carry. “Let me know when you man up,” Pedro said, already shifting the car back into gear.

The sedan pulled away slow, the smell of exhaust mixing with the grease-heavy air.

Saul watched the crooked taillights shrink toward the exit, the rattle of Pedro’s muffler fading under the fryer alarm inside. The smell of his cigarette still hung in the air, sharp and stale, like it was daring him to breathe it in.

“That’s why I wouldn’t fuck with Zoe if I was you,” Javi said, shaking his head. “You scared to fight.”

“Shut the fuck up,” Trent told him, shoving the empty toast box into the trash can by the door.

Saul smiled like none of it mattered, a short pull at the corner of his mouth that didn’t reach his eyes. Inside, his ears felt hot, the skin tight, his pulse settling too slow.

He picked at the crust of bread still in his basket, nodding along to whatever Trent was saying now about some party, but Pedro’s laughter was still there — not in the lot anymore, but hanging around in his head, sharp and ugly, like it had left something behind.

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Post by Soapy » 13 Aug 2025, 08:29

So she would fuck for weed, just more of it

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Post by Captain Canada » 13 Aug 2025, 11:20

Soapy wrote:
13 Aug 2025, 08:29
So she would fuck for weed, just more of it

:viola:
Thought the same damn thing :rg3:

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Post by redsox907 » 13 Aug 2025, 13:18

Soapy wrote:
13 Aug 2025, 08:29
So she would fuck for weed, just more of it

:viola:
If I said it once, I'll say it again

Its all shes got going for her

Soon she gonna be dancing for that money

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