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Post by Caesar » 01 Sep 2025, 21:40

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The horn had barely died when the band punched back in, brass cutting through the heat like a clean edge. Bleachers clattered, whistle lanyards snapped against chests, somebody dumped a cooler and water ran into the painted dust at the sideline. The scoreboard held the only thing that mattered to the crowd—4-0—numbers bright enough to stain the night.

Caine rolled the tape off his wrist and felt the sweat turn tacky in the air. Grease and powdered sugar drifted over from the concession stand, fighting with the bite of bleach from a mop bucket someone kicked near the gate. He scanned like he always did—exit points, who was looking at who, a cluster of alumni in polos, a cop leaning on his heel near the fence pretending he wasn’t clocking faces.

“Caine?” a voice said, close enough to be friendly, not close enough to be presuming.

He turned. A man in a red script polo, visor tucked into his belt, laminated credential swinging off a lanyard. Hand already out, easy smile that looked practiced but not cheap.

“Tim Leger,” he said. “UL.”

Caine wiped his palm quick on his towel and took the shake. “Yes, sir.”

“Good win,” Leger said, eyes on Caine’s face more than the scoreboard. “Y’all handled your business.”

Caine gave the smallest nod. “We did what we supposed to.”

They stood sideways to the flow of bodies shuffling off the track—parents corralling little kids, somebody laughing loud into a phone, a teammate sprinting past barefoot with cleats in his hand. The band’s tubas thumped hard enough to rattle the metal rail under Caine’s fingers.

Leger’s voice settled low, steady. “I won’t keep you long. I just wanted to make sure you know—South Alabama ain’t gonna be the only folks in your ear. We’re in it. We like you. A lot.” He let that sit, all confidence, no rush. “We’d like to get you over to Lafayette. Official.”

Caine’s mouth went tight on one side, eyes flicking once toward the family gate like habit. Close enough to drive. Close enough to get back if somebody called about Camila. Close enough to not feel like leaving everything. He kept his voice mild. “When you thinking?”

“Couple weeks,” Leger said. “We’ll work around your schedule. Friday through Sunday is the usual, but we can flex. I know you got… a lot.” He didn’t say more, didn’t nose into what wasn’t his.

Caine appreciated that more than he’d say out loud. “I’ll need to check a few things,” he said. “But I can look at it.”

Leger nodded like that was the answer he expected. He slid a card from the small pocket on his sleeve—name, number, the block U/over L in the corner. “Call or text. If your mama wants to talk, give her my number too. We’ll do it right—no confusion, no pressure.”

A teammate yelled Caine’s name from ten yards away, already forgetting whatever he’d shouted when he saw who Caine was standing with. Leger clocked the interruption, didn’t compete with it.

“Here’s our pitch, plain,” Leger said, voice easy. “You’re a fit in what we do. We’ll put the ball in your hands, let you be you. And you don’t gotta be five states over to do it. Your people can come. You can go home for a Sunday dinner. Close enough to matter.”

Close enough to matter. The words landed in the space Caine kept taped off in his chest, the part that did math on gas money and court dates and daycare, the part that remembered the weight of Camila asleep against his forearm and the scissor-snap of Roussel keeping him on a tight leash. He watched Leger’s face the way he watched a safety creeping down—angles, tells, whether the smile matched the eyes.

“What about timing?” Caine asked. “Season stuff.”

“You get here, you’ll see it,” Leger said. “We got a room full of competitors and a staff that ain’t scared to play the best one. We’re not scared of work. You don’t look like you are either.”

“I’m not,” Caine said, and it came out easy because it was true.

The PA squealed, somebody’s uncle tried to start a chant and failed. Leger shifted half a step so he wasn’t blocking Caine’s view of the field. Respectful. Clocking the same things Caine was, just from a different life.

“I know everybody says the same stuff,” Leger added, a short shrug toward the noise. “That’s recruiting. I ain’t gonna sell you a dream. I’m telling you we want you, we see you, and we’re close. That matters for folks—especially folks who got folks counting on them.”

Caine’s thumb rubbed at the edge of the card, feeling the raised ink. “You talked to Coach?” he asked, not specifying which one. The ones that mattered knew who they were.

“We’ll touch base,” Leger said. “I wanted to look you in the eye first.”

A whistle blew short, three chirps. The field lights hummed like bees. Caine’s phone buzzed in his pocket—one buzz, then quiet. He didn’t check it. If it was urgent, there’d be more. He put the card in the zipper pouch where he kept the things that couldn’t get lost.

“I appreciate you coming out,” he said.

“Get used to it,” Leger said, not cocky so much as sure. “You keep stacking wins, folks gonna keep showing up.” He tipped his chin toward the family gate. “I know you’ll make the best call for you. Let us be in that conversation.”

Caine nodded. “Yes, sir.”

Leger stuck his hand out again. Caine took it. Firm. No squeeze games. When they let go, Leger tucked the visor back onto his head and slid sideways into the human river heading toward the parking lot, answering a dad who had already started talking at him like a cousin.

Caine exhaled slow and let the hum of the place fold around him. The sweat cooled on his skin and left a salt line at his hairline. He touched it with the back of his wrist and tasted metal in his mouth—adrenaline tapering off. A little kid in a too-big Karr tee latched onto his shin and said something that sounded like “good job” with three syllables. Caine grinned down, patted the boy’s head, and the kid’s mama scooped him up with an apology Caine waved away.

He looked up at the scoreboard one more time. 4-0 in white light, Holy Cross already fading to the part of memory where names become noise and only the feeling stays. He picked up his bag and slipped the strap across his shoulder. The band shifted into a song every New Orleans kid knew by muscle memory; the drums ricocheted against the metal under his feet. Close enough to matter kept repeating, a phrase he couldn’t shut off even if he wanted to.

~~~

The bleachers rattled with every stomp, kids shaking metal like it was part of the music. Brass rolled out heavy from the band, the drums snapping fast enough to keep the crowd loud between plays. Heat still clung to the night, sticky and restless, carrying fried dough sugar and fryer grease on top of sweat.

Tyree slipped into an open spot halfway up, fries balanced in a paper boat on his knee, salt dusting his fingertips. A couple girls in jean shorts glanced back at him, whispering behind their hands before one leaned forward.

“You greedy, huh? Didn’t even ask if we wanted some.”

Tyree didn’t look up from his food right away. He let a fry hang between his fingers, then smirked. “Y’all want fries. You got fry money?”

Her friend nearly spit out her Coke laughing. “Boy, please. They charge seven dollars for those little-ass fries.”

“Then y’all broke and hungry. Don’t make that my problem.” He popped the fry into his mouth, chewing slow.

Behind him, the bleachers shook harder when the band hit a brass line. Somebody’s dad a few rows down cursed at the ref, voice cracking from yelling all night. Kids ducked under legs to squeeze through the rows, shoes squeaking, perfume clouding behind them.

Tyree’s pocket buzzed.

He fished out his phone, thumb dragging across the cracked screen.

Ramon: say lil’ bih. Got that jog in slidell set up.

Another text slid in right under it.

E.J.: where you at?

Tyree smirked, typed one word—cooling—and sent it. He slid the phone back into his hoodie and went back to his fries.

“Damn, those mine now,” the girl behind him said, reaching over and snatching one before he could stop her.

He gave her a look sharp enough to sting, but he didn’t snatch the fry back. “That’s interest. Next one cost you a kiss.”

Her eyes widened, then she laughed, shoving her friend. “He think he smooth.”

“You still eating my shit though,” Tyree said.

His phone buzzed again.

Ramon: stop playing with them schoolgirls, nigga. We live.

He ignored it.

The boy sitting next to him leaned over, smelling like too much cologne. “Bruh, where you get them 97s? My cousin been hunting for those.”

Tyree stuck his leg out so the shoe caught the stadium lights. “Came straight out the store. Like normal people do.”

“Cap. Them sold out.”

“Not if you know who to call.” He said it flat, no explanation. The boy sat back, nodding slow, like he’d just been checked.

More kids shuffled up the stairs with trays of nachos, their cheese sloshing over the edges. A girl tripped on a bleacher step, caught herself on Tyree’s shoulder.

“My bad,” she said, breathless.

“You good,” he answered, brushing at his hoodie where she left a handprint.

Buzz.

E.J.: nigga clock ticking

Tyree cracked a smile, typed: yall got it. i’m coolin tonight. He sent it before he could think twice.

The row of girls behind him started arguing about who got caught sneaking out last weekend. One bragged she made it back before sunrise; the other swore her mama found out anyway. Their voices tangled with the band’s horns until everything felt like one big hum.

Tyree leaned back, balancing his tray on his chest. Salt stuck to his lips. He licked it off, then tapped a rhythm against the side of the tray with his thumb, keeping time with the drumline.

The girl who stole his fry leaned forward again. “So you just gon’ sit there all quiet, acting like you don’t see me?”

He tilted his head toward her, deadpan. “I already saw you. That’s enough.”

She laughed harder this time, covering her mouth. Her friend shook her head. “You a fool.”

His phone buzzed one more time.

Ramon: 10-4. Get up with us tomorrow.

E.J.: send one of them catholic bitches this way. And tell ‘em bring the skirt

Tyree chuckled, slid the phone back into his pocket. His knee bounced once, then stopped.

A little kid with a cowbell clanged it out of rhythm, sitting two rows down. He leaned back and hollered up at Tyree, “You even watchin’ the game?”

Tyree leaned forward, elbows on his knees. “I’m watchin’ everything.”

The kid nodded like that was the right answer and went back to ringing the bell until somebody smacked him on the back of the head.

Tyree finished the last of his fries, wadded up the greasy paper, and tossed it into the aisle. Some freshman stepped over it like it wasn’t even there. The bleachers kept shaking. The band kept playing. His phone stayed quiet for once.

For the first time in a while, Tyree didn’t move. He just sat there, hoodie sticking to his neck, hands loose on his knees, crowd noise buzzing so loud it drowned out everything else.

~~~

The cab of the truck smelled like sweat, smoke, and the stale lemon wipe Leo used when he bothered to clean it out. Kayla leaned back in the passenger seat, hair clinging damp at her temples, wiping the corners of her mouth with the back of her hand. Her nails were chipped with faint blue polish, the kind that peeled easy. She didn’t look at Leo when she reached for the visor mirror, just enough to check her face before snapping it shut again.

Leo zipped his pants, the teeth of the zipper loud in the cramped space. He leaned across her without asking, popped the glove box, and thumbed through the roll of money shoved inside. The rubber band around it was stretched thin, bills soft from too much folding. He peeled a couple twenties free like he was skimming cards, dropped them in her lap.

Kayla pinched the edge of one, tucked it into the pocket of her jeans, and kept the other in her hand. “Can I get a little extra?” she asked, voice thin but steady. “I need to buy something for school.”

Leo cut his eyes at her, already tucking the roll back into the glove box. “School? You ain’t in college.”

Kayla just shrugged. Her shoulder brushed the door. “Still need stuff.”

He stared at her a beat too long, lips pressing like he was deciding how much patience he had left. Then he pulled out another twenty, flicked it at her chest. It slid down into her lap. “There. Don’t say I don’t take care of you.”

She picked it up without smiling, folding it into her fist.

“Bus money too?” she asked after a pause. Her eyes flicked toward the windshield, not at him.

Leo sucked his teeth, shaking his head slow. He dug a ten out like it hurt, slapped it against her thigh. “That’s it. Don’t get greedy.”

Kayla tucked it all together, folded tight like she was scared it’d vanish. She stuffed the wad down the front pocket of her hoodie, then popped the handle and pushed the door open. The outside air rushed in thick with heat and trash rot from the dumpster nearby.

“Thanks,” she muttered, half out of the truck already.

“Don’t thank me,” Leo said, straightening his shirt and running a hand across his jaw like he was checking for stray marks. “Remember who you call.”

Kayla’s sneakers hit the gravel. She shut the door harder than she meant to, making the frame shudder. She didn’t wait for him to say more, just slung her backpack higher and started walking fast toward the bus stop at the corner.

Leo watched her go until she slipped past the fence line. He pulled the rearview toward himself, checking his hair quick, then clicked the glove box shut. He grabbed his phone from the cup holder, swiped across the screen, and shoved it into his pocket before stepping out.

The night air clung heavy. A moth smacked against the buzzing bulb above the back door of the building, wings frantic against glass. Gravel crunched under his boots as he rounded the corner.

The roll-up door was half open, shadows spilling out. Inside, the smell shifted—less smoke, more old wood, and the sour tang of mildew. Leo called out as he stepped in, voice easy like he owned the place.

“Yo, Mr. Willie! You got my uncle’s money or what?”

An older man’s voice came from deeper inside, gruff with age. “You late.”

Leo smirked, brushing dust off his shirt. “I’m here now, ain’t I?”

His silhouette cut sharp against the light behind him as he walked in further, the sound of bills being counted carrying through the open space.

Outside, the bulb kept buzzing, moths beating themselves to death against the glass.

~~~

The concrete yard breathed heat even after sunset, the kind that stuck to the back of your neck and made paper feel damp at the edges. Diesel hung in the air with the bite of something chemical; a forklift beeped lazy in reverse on the far side of the lot. Mireya had her hip pressed to the bed of the flatbed while the driver—Terry, red ball cap sweat-stained white at the brim—dug around in a glove box for the bill of lading he swore he had.

“There,” he said, producing a wrinkled stack. “Got two drops on this ticket, but they only signed one time.”

Mireya took it without a word. Pen in her fingers, clipboard steady against her palm, she read quick, eyes skimming for bad handwriting and missing initials. Her hair stuck to her temple. She blew it away with a tight puff of breath, kept writing.

Behind her, from near the trailer steps, Kike’s voice came oily and loud: “Mireya.”

She didn’t turn. The name floated past like a gnat. She put her nail to a smudged number and re-wrote it, neat.

Kike again, closer. “Mireya.”

Terry tipped his chin toward the office. “You want me to—”

“I’m good,” she said, quick. “Sign here. Date it. And put your truck number in this box.” She tapped the spot with the pen, the way she’d tapped a hundred times this month, the motions living in her hand even when her brain was too tired for anything else.

Kike’s boots scraped the gravel as he came down to the lot. Mireya flipped to the second page. “You missing the PO. What’s the number?”

Terry checked his phone with grease-black thumbs. “Uh, 4487-B.”

She wrote it in, clean block print. “Initial where you changed it.” She set her finger on the margin and waited. He scrawled, pen tearing the damp fiber a little.

“Mireya, oye,” Kike said, now at her shoulder. “Guerita.”

She kept her eyes on the paper. “Make it quick.”

Terry shifted his weight, aware now that he was standing in something that wasn’t about him. He handed the clipboard back like it might bite him.

Kike fell into step on her other side when she moved toward the office door. “I gotta talk to you.”

“You talking.” She didn’t speed up. Didn’t slow.

He leaned in, breath sour with coffee and cigarettes. “When you gon’ let me fuck, huh? Since you fucking el gringito.”

Gravel popped under her boot. The fluorescent over the office door buzzed, a moth tapping itself stupid against the lens. Mireya avoided the doorway light and stopped in the shadow beside the ice chest. She turned just enough to show him her face, not enough to give him the full of it.

“I’m not fucking anyone,” she said, each word even, “but Caine.”

Kike smiled like a crack opening in concrete. “Yeah? I know you did.” His voice got soft in the way men used when they wanted to bruise without leaving a mark. “And I’ma start telling people you did. See if CPS like a little girl’s mama fucking random men behind the shop.”

The words clicked into place like a safety coming off. Heat moved under her skin, not shame, not fear—calculation. She put the clipboard down on the ice chest lid slow, set the pen across it, and finally gave him the full of her face.

“If you do that,” she said, voice low enough that Terry—hovering by the flatbed, pretending to check a strap—couldn’t hear, “I’m calling ICE and telling them you used to sneak into your little sister’s room and sniff her chones.”

Kike’s jaw twitched. “Watch your mouth.”

“I’ll call them right now. Speak real slow, slow enough for the lady on the phone to type it right.” Her hand didn’t shake. “They’ll be happy to deport you. Real happy.”

He stepped closer, chest almost touching hers, breath fogging the space between like the night had gotten colder. “You lying.”

She didn’t blink. “Fucking try me.”

He flinched at the word—not the curse, the verb.

“You think they won’t check?” she went on, softer now, dangerous. “They don’t like pedos in Mexico either.”

For a second his eyes went flat. Then he glanced past her, toward the office window where the blind was never fully closed, where shadows moved if anybody inside cared to move them. He clicked his tongue. Played at a laugh.

“Ain’t nobody care. You ain’t shit,” he said, too casual.

“Then it shouldn’t matter what I say, right?” she answered.

The forklift beeped again in the distance, backing up, backing up, like the whole yard had decided at once to make space. Sweat ticked from her hairline down the side of her neck into the collar of her hoodie. She didn’t touch it. Wouldn’t give him the satisfaction of watching her fidget.

Terry cleared his throat behind them, trying to return the world to the one with signatures and stamps. “You need me to—uh—drop this back there, miss?”

Mireya didn’t look at him. “Leave it on the counter.” Her eyes stayed on Kike. “¿Ya terminaste?”

Kike’s jaw flexed, but he stepped aside, just enough.

Mireya didn’t flinch. She lifted the clipboard, pen steady in her grip, and walked straight past him. His shoulder shifted like he wanted to block her again, but he didn’t.

The yard air clung hot and sour as she crossed back toward the trailer. Gravel popped under her boots, every step louder than it should’ve been. She didn’t turn to see if he was still watching.

At the door, she pulled it open hard enough to make the hinge shriek. Inside, the hum of the AC was weak, stale. But it was quiet. Away from him.

She let the door swing shut behind her and didn’t look back.

~~~

The Landry house breathed cool air into the heat that clung to Sara and Caine’s skin from the walk up the block. Ashley opened the door with a practiced smile, but when her eyes landed on Sara, the expression flickered — surprise cutting through before she smoothed it over.

“Hi. Come in,” she said quickly, stepping aside.

Sara nodded once, steady. “Thank you.” Caine shifted his backpack higher on his shoulder, lifted two fingers in a small wave, and followed his mother inside.

Quentin’s voice came from the kitchen. “Y’all made it?”

“We here,” Caine said. Then, softer: “Yes, sir.”

Quentin came around the corner with a towel over his shoulder, smiling, and put a hand on Caine’s arm, steering them toward the dining room. “Come on, food’s hot.”

The table was set clean — plates, glasses, a sweating pitcher of water. The hum of a ceiling fan cut through the quiet as they found their seats. Sara sat straight-backed, her work clothes neat, hair pulled into a low bun. Caine followed her lead, keeping his head down but his eyes moving — a habit he couldn’t shake, scanning doorways and windows even here.

Ashley set a serving spoon down, then poured water into glasses. Her eyes returned to Sara, almost against her will. “I didn’t expect… how old are you?”

Sara’s fork paused, but she didn’t bristle. “Nineteen when I had him,” she said evenly. Her tone was matter-of-fact, not defensive. “Life didn’t wait on me to be older.”

Ashley opened her mouth, then closed it again, guilt flashing across her face.

Sara softened the edge with a small, tired smile. “Don’t worry. I’m not ashamed of it. Caine’s the reason I keep moving.”

Ashley nodded, relieved. “I’m sorry, I didn’t mean—”

“I know,” Sara said, voice calm. “It’s fine.” She turned toward Quentin then, her eyes holding. “But I do need to thank you. You didn’t have to put your neck out, convincing Markus to take his case. I know what that means.”

Quentin leaned back, serious now. “Didn’t want to see another young man lost in the system.”

Sara gave a faint smile, weary but real. “I know. And I appreciate you seeing him as more than just a case file.”

Caine shifted in his seat, discomfort clear in the set of his jaw. Quentin, maybe sensing it, shifted the conversation toward him. “You started thinking about college yet? Deadlines sneak up.”

Caine kept his eyes low. “Been looking,” he muttered.

“You’ve got time if you start now,” Quentin said. “We can lay it out — dates, what they ask for. Pick a few schools that make sense.”

Sara’s hand touched Caine’s wrist under the table, a quiet signal. “We’ll figure it out,” she said. “Paso por paso.”



Ashley refilled Sara’s glass herself. “Here,” she said softly. “Thank you both for coming.”

Sara nodded. “Thank you for having us.” Her voice caught slightly, but she steadied it. “And… I owe you an apology too, Ashley. For before. I wouldn’t know how to react if someone had committed a crime against me either.”

Caine raised his head just enough. “I’m sorry, too.”

The table went quiet for a breath. Then the sound of silverware picked up again, grounding them. The ceiling fan whirred overhead.

From the hall, socked feet slapped wood, and a Landry child slid into the doorway. “Mama, can I have water?”

Ashley stood, flustered. “I’m sorry—excuse me.” She poured a small glass, crouched, and passed it carefully. “Two hands, remember.”

Caine smiled faintly. “It’s fine. Everybody at this table a parent.”

Ashley let out a quiet laugh, shoulders loosening. “True.”

The child gulped half the glass and darted back down the hall, leaving the adults with the echoes of small chaos.

The conversation drifted into easier ground. Quentin sketched deadlines onto a scrap sheet, noting testing dates and application windows. Sara leaned closer, reading upside down, nodding as though committing each number to memory.

“Paperwork is violence,” she muttered, almost to herself.

Ashley’s mouth tugged in agreement. “Feels like it, most days.”

Quentin slid the page closer to Caine. “Write a couple schools down. Places you’d want.”

Caine’s hand hovered over the pen, then moved slow. He printed carefully, one letter at a time. Sara watched him with quiet pride layered under exhaustion.

“Good,” Quentin said. “We’ll keep building.”

Sara folded her hands, looked between the couple. “Gracias. For giving him this chance. For seeing him.”

Ashley shook her head lightly. “Mamas gotta help mamas.”

Caine capped the pen, left it on the paper. “I appreciate this,” he said. “Both of you.”

Ashley met his eyes. “We’re trying,” she said. “All of us.”

The hum of the fan filled the pause. Outside, the heat pressed against the windows, but inside the cool held for a little longer.
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Post by Captain Canada » 02 Sep 2025, 10:37

Finally, Caine around some good ass people (still waiting for that other shoe to drop).

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Post by redsox907 » 02 Sep 2025, 22:03

Captain Canada wrote:
02 Sep 2025, 10:37
Finally, Caine around some good ass people (still waiting for that other shoe to drop).
Its coming soon. Caesar can't let too many good things happen
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Post by Caesar » 02 Sep 2025, 22:33

Captain Canada wrote:
02 Sep 2025, 10:37
Finally, Caine around some good ass people (still waiting for that other shoe to drop).
redsox907 wrote:
02 Sep 2025, 22:03
Captain Canada wrote:
02 Sep 2025, 10:37
Finally, Caine around some good ass people (still waiting for that other shoe to drop).
Its coming soon. Caesar can't let too many good things happen
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Post by Caesar » 02 Sep 2025, 22:33

Anba Chalè Lou

The apartment was already hot, the kind of slow heat that crept under the door and sat on your shoulders. Mireya woke to the scrape of a pan and the wet whisper of oil catching—then the smell found her: onion, garlic, a little burnt egg. Camila slept starfish on the far side of the mattress, thumb half in her mouth, baby breath warm against the sheet.

Mireya slid carefully, easing the blanket back like pulling tape off skin. She tucked the corner under Camila’s small fist and watched her for one beat—soft, noisy, safe—before pushing up. The floor was cool first, then sticky where someone had mopped yesterday and the bleach never fully left. A siren rolled somewhere far off, then died, like it changed its mind.

In the hallway the light flickered once—buzz, click, buzz—and steadied. Her mother’s back was to her in the kitchen. The stove hood rattled like it had a cough. A pot sweated on the back burner, rice thickening. Eggs popped in the pan, edges browning into lace.

“Morning,” Mireya said, voice still caught on sleep.

Maria didn’t turn. “Morning.” The spatula slid, metal on metal. “You’re going to wake that baby if you stomp like that.”

“I’m not,” Mireya said, softer. She stood in the doorway a second longer, hands tucked into the sleeves of her hoodie. Sweat prickled under her arms anyway.

Maria glanced just enough to clock her, then back to the stove. “You need something?”

Mireya swallowed. The words she’d practiced in her head all week felt wrong in her mouth, too sharp or too soft. “Can I ask you… something?”

Maria cut the burner, lifted the pan to let the oil settle. “Ask.”

“I, um—” Mireya’s eyes went to the open window. Outside, a gull yelled like a child. “I was talking to Sara.” She said it small and fast, like if she kept moving the words couldn’t get stuck. “About, like… help. With Camila. Just—making it easier.”

Maria went still, only the steam moving between them. “Help how.” Not a question. A weighing.

“Like… if she put Camila on her taxes.” It sounded clumsy now. “Just for the year. So we could get some benefits. Food. Daycare vouchers, maybe. She said she could—she would—if we wanted.”

Silence sat down at the table between them. Maria set the pan back on the coil and finally turned. Her mouth didn’t move at first. Her eyes did.

“You think we can’t provide for your daughter?” she asked, each word flat, even. Dangerous.

Mireya shook her head fast. “No, I didn’t say that. I just—everything is—” She pressed her thumbs into the seam of her sleeve. “I want it easier for everybody. For you too.”

Maria laughed without humor. “Easier.” She set a plate on the counter too hard; it clacked like a warning. “You went to Sara? Con la cabeza agachada, begging like we don’t know how to stand on our own two?”

“I wasn’t begging.” The heat rose to Mireya’s face before she could push it down. “She’s Camila’s abuela too—”

“Not mine,” Maria snapped. “And not the one feeding you, neither.” She shook her head, disgust small and precise. “You embarrassed me. Going to that woman like we—like I—can’t manage.”

Mireya opened her mouth, closed it. “I’m trying, Ma. I’m at school, I’m working—”

“For what?” Maria cut in. “To sit in some class and pretend? You got a baby. You want easy? Work harder.” She flipped the eggs, the motion sharp, like she was slicing the air between them. “Nadie te dijo que te embarazaras.”

The words hit like a slap she didn’t see. “I know what I did,” Mireya said, quieter. “I know.” Her palms itched. She rubbed them together, felt the tack of bleach still there from yesterday’s scrub.

“I’m already juggling,” she pushed on. “I haven’t even started college yet.” The last word felt fragile, like glass she had no business holding. “Work. Studying—”

Maria snorted. “Maybe college isn’t for you.”

“Please,” Mireya said. It came out raw. “Ma, please.”

“For what?” Maria put the pan down and finally faced her full. Her face was tired, but pride sat on it like bone. “To cheat some system and call it help? For what. A few stamps? A little check?” Her lips thinned. “Eso es rebajarse. That’s beneath us.”

“It’s not cheating.” Mireya heard the thinness of her own voice and hated it. “It’s just… it’s what people do to survive.” She felt the city in her throat—the price of gas, the daycare lady’s late fees, the way the application fee number had sat on the paperwork like a dare. “I’m drowning, Ma.”

Maria’s eyes flicked toward the bedroom. “You drowning, but that baby still sleeps, no? Roof still here. Food still on this stove.” She tapped the spatula against the rim, a small metronome to her anger. “If you can’t swim, you get stronger. Not softer.”

Mireya breathed in, held it. The kitchen smelled like oil and old water and something close to burning. “Sara said—”

“I don’t care what Sara said.” The name fell like something bitter. “She can run her house how she wants. In mine, we don’t put our child on anybody else’s papers like she’s a ticket.”

“Ma—”

“No.” Maria wiped her hands on a towel, then folded it neat, as if order could fix the heat in the room. “I’m not doing that. Y ya. End of discussion.”

The hum of the fridge felt louder. Mireya looked at the floor because if she looked at her mother she might say something she couldn’t get back. On the wall, the clock ticked with that hollow school-clock sound, plastic and patient.

“I just wanted to make it easier,” she said again, but it sounded smaller now, less a plan than a wish she knew was ugly.

“Then work,” Maria said. “And stop bringing me shame.” She turned back to the stove like there was nothing left to say, like the conversation was a fly she’d finally swatted.

Mireya stood there a second more, heat swelling up behind her eyes. She tried to blink it back. She failed. She nodded even though nobody asked her to and backed out of the kitchen slow, the way you leave a room with a sleeping child and a dog you don’t trust.

In the hallway, the light flickered again. She pressed her fingers to her eyelids till colors popped. When she breathed out, it scratched.

Back in the bedroom, the air was different—cooler, quieter, like the walls knew better than to echo. Camila had rolled to her belly, knees tucked beneath her, mouth open in a tiny O. Mireya sat on the edge of the mattress and the springs sighed. She pulled her knees up and made herself small, forehead on her forearms.

~~~

The house had its bones open—old cypress showing through where the siding had come off, a skin half-peeled. The air was glue-thick with humidity and that sweet-sour bite of latex paint. Gnats did their lazy orbit around the rim of the five-gallon bucket, landing and dying like they were choosing it. Sweat salted Caine’s upper lip. He pinched the brush through the roller tray and knocked off the extra with the edge—tap, tap—then stretched on the plank, calves tight, toe finding the soft sag in the board he didn’t look at.

The scaffold creaked like a tired throat. Three cinder blocks under the near leg, a scrap of 2x4 under the other, a prayer under both.

He’d slept maybe four hours. The game from the day before was still in his body—hips sore from option keeps, shoulder from one bad fall on the sideline chalk that had turned to dust. The crowd noise had been high and hot; afterward it drained out of him and left the ache. He painted to a rhythm he made up in his head so he didn’t have to think about anything else. Upstroke, roll, feather. Breathe. Again.

“Caine!” Mr. Lucas’ voice rode the yard noise—compressor wheeze, a nail gun pop, the swish of a broom against grit. Caine turned his head first, then his body. The plank shifted under his heel. He locked his knees and looked down.

Mr. Lucas was walking with Roussel. Even from up here Caine felt the man’s look—measuring, already finding him small.

Lucas caught Caine’s eye, gave a short chin lift that said, This ain’t my idea, then peeled off toward the driveway, whistling for somebody to shift pallets.

Roussel set one palm on the upright of the scaffold like he was testing a fence. The structure shivered. Caine’s stomach tightened.

“Morning,” Roussel said, like it bothered him that the sun had even come up. “Just checking up on you. Making sure you’re working.”

Caine kept his voice even. “I’m working.” He angled his gaze at the hand. “Don’t lean on that. Shit’s gonna fall.”

Roussel took his hand off as if he were being polite. He looked up at the paint line, squinted like he knew anything about level. “You should probably get used to this kind of work anyway.” He smiled without teeth. “But you probably already are.”

Caine killed the flinch before it could show. He turned back and rolled another strip, slow, making the coverage clean so the man would have one less thing to mention. The roller hummed dull against the stucco.

“I need to go to Lafayette,” he said, not turning. “Recruiting visit.”

Below, Roussel clicked his tongue. “I’m not sanctioning that.” He rested his hand back on the scaffold, casual. The plank vibrated like a plucked string.

Caine looked down again, face blank. Roussel moved his hand like he’d forgotten. Again.

“It’s only a couple hours,” Caine said. “Still Louisiana. We go that far for games.”

“Not my problem,” Roussel said. “And I’m not letting you step foot on any college campus outside New Orleans. I don’t feel like filling out the paperwork when you violate.”

He said when, like the future had already happened.

Roussel laid his palm on the brace again. This time Caine set the roller in the tray, stood to full height, and took a breath that filled his ribs. He crouched, hand on the post, then climbed down the crosspieces slow enough the wood didn’t fuss. Dirt stuck to his palms when his shoes hit ground.

“Boss ain’t gonna like you stopping,” Roussel said lightly. “Hope you don’t get fired. That’s a violation.”

Caine worked his jaw once. “How I’m supposed to manage my recruitment if I can’t go on visits?”

Roussel gave a shrug that felt like a shove. “Give up on those dreams.” He pointed past Caine’s shoulder with his clipboard. “Missed a spot.”

Heat crawled up Caine’s chest, not from the weather. His hands itched for something to hold that wasn’t a roller, a ball, a neck.

“Drug test tomorrow,” Roussel added, already turning toward the driveway. “Seven forty-five. Don’t be late.”

Caine watched him walk off like the ground owed him smooth. The man moved through the jobsite without looking at anyone, stepped over a hose someone had coiled wrong, and found his way to a sedan with state plates that had seen better tires. He slid in. The engine coughed, then caught. Gravel popped under the wheels as he reversed.

Caine stood there long enough to memorize the angle of sunlight on the windshield, the exact sound the transmission made shifting from R to D, like any of it could matter later. The car nosed to the street and was gone into the heat shimmer.

Behind him, Mr. Lucas said, “You good?”

“Yeah,” Caine said.

Lucas nodded like that was all he needed and moved on, hollering about tarps.

Caine wiped his palms down the thighs of his work pants and looked up at the wall. The section Roussel had pointed at wasn’t missed. It just needed a second pass to hide the old water stain no one had bothered to fix right. That was this whole house, he thought. That was this whole city. Paint over rot and pray the rain forgets you.

He climbed back up. The scaffold spoke in its wooden language—complaint, warning, memory. He set the roller, caught the edge of the last swath, and pulled down. Paint laid on smooth, heavy, obedient. A breeze tried to happen and then didn’t.

He worked like that for a while—breath, stroke, breath—until the heat slicked behind his knees and his shirt stuck to his spine. When he switched rollers the new nap took the paint cleaner, like it had more hope left in it.

A gnat dizzied in front of his eyes, chose poorly, and got laid into the wet white. Caine flicked it out with the tip of the brush and smoothed the scar it left. He stepped back on the plank. The scaffold answered with a noise he’d learned to understand as not yet.

He dipped the roller again and kept going.

~~~

The lot behind the restaurant was a rectangle of broken shells and bottle glass, steam lifting off it like the city had a fever. Out front, Chef Menteur cut past in a low, hot rush—diesel whoop, mufflers ticking, a stray horn yelling once and letting it go. Back here it was quieter. It smelled like fish sauce and fryer oil and the kind of bleach that never really left. Fans thumped somewhere on the roof, pushing air that felt like it had already been breathed.

Ramon killed the engine and let the old sedan settle into its groan. Tyree rolled his shoulders once, like loosening a fight out of the joints. E.J. stared out the window for a second too long, clocking the four of them on the crates—three dudes, one girl, all young, all bored in that way that meant not bored at all.

“Little Vietnam, huh,” Tyree said, dry. “You got us way out this bitch.”

“Like we coming get a fucking king cake from Dong Phuong,” Ramon said, not looking at him. His thumb tapped the wheel twice, quick. “They straight.”

“Them bitches good though,” E.J. said.

They stepped out into the heat. It wrapped around them and pressed. Tyree and E.J. shifted like it was nothing, hands falling casual to waistlines, shirts tugged just-so. The woman on the crate clocked the movement with her eyes and didn’t move otherwise, a straw between her lips going flat on one side where she’d been chewing it.

“Kev,” Ramon called, voice lifted just enough to travel, not enough to read as eager.

The dude in the middle cracked a grin. “Ramon?” The tone had question, the body didn’t. He stood up and they met halfway over a line of spilled rice that had dried to little pebbles. Dap, pull, shoulder bump—like middle school hadn’t been a decade and a half ago. “Where your ugly ass been?”

“Outside,” Ramon said, which covered everything. “You still got them bad ankles?”

“Still broke your boy in seventh grade with ’em,” Kevin said, already laughing. “He fell like a refrigerator.”

Tyree smirked. “Damn, you out here telling tales, huh?”

“Ask Coach Boudreaux,” Kevin said. “He cried.”

They let the laugh live a second. The woman’s eyes slid from Ramon to Tyree to E.J., then back again. The other two guys stood now, leaning into the shade line like that half-inch mattered. Nobody’s hands were empty, really, even when they were.

Kevin’s smile tucked itself away. “You got it?”

Ramon glanced once over his shoulder. E.J. lifted two fingers and tapped his front pocket—small rhythm: got you. Ramon nodded and turned back.

Kevin tipped his chin toward the woman.

She stood, the straw falling to the ground, and reached under the crate where she’d been sitting. A taped brick came up in her hand, dull green through layers of plastic, corners squared and neat like a geometry problem. She held it, not offering yet. The other two shifted wider, a subtle kite string tightening.

Ramon lifted his palms a little, open, polite. E.J. already had the roll in his hand—bands tight. He tossed it to Ramon without looking at it. Ramon caught it, peeled one edge just enough to show he knew what he was holding, and passed the weight to Kevin. No flourish. Just balance.

Kevin let it drop once in his palm. Then he nodded at the woman. She crossed the space and set the brick into Ramon’s hands. He felt the heft, gave it back to E.J.

“Same count,” Kevin said. “Same as last time.”

“Aight,” Ramon said.

Kevin looked past him, toward the driveway slit to the street. A truck downshifted out there, brakes complaining. He dropped his voice. “Word is Tee Tito asking about y’all.”

Ramon’s face didn’t close, but you could hear the hinge creak. “For what.”

Kevin lifted one shoulder. “Don’t know. That’s a y’all problem.” He tapped his face with the back of his hand. His eyes flicked once to Tyree, then E.J., then back to Ramon. “I’d stay strapped if I was you.”

“Ain’t we always,” Tyree said, cheerful like a dare.

“Good looking out,” Ramon told Kevin. “We’ll be in touch.”

“Watch how y’all leave,” Kevin said. “Y’all not from over here.”

Ramon gave him one last dap. “I know.”

They peeled back the way they’d come. The car had heated up a shade in the time it took to do business; the steering wheel bit Ramon’s palm when he grabbed it. He cracked the window. Fish sauce and salt air argued in the cab.

“Behind the seat,” he said, handing the pack to Tyree.

Tyree popped the back cushion and slid the brick into the dead space, the sound of plastic against metal a low scrape that sat wrong in the teeth. He dropped the seat and looked out the rear window like he expected the sky to change.

“Sound like Young Melph got wind,” Ramon said. “They know we hit they stash.”

E.J. sucked his teeth. “That shit was months ago.”

“Ain’t no time limit on getting your lick back,” Tyree said. He shrugged, mouth ticking at one corner. “When they broke, too.”

Ramon nodded once. He’d felt the air do that thing—how Kevin’s joke turned into weather, how the shade suddenly felt temporary. He checked the mirrors. Nothing but a family van limping past with a bumper half-torn and a fishing pole hanging out the back window. He put the car in gear.

E.J. looked toward the crates and then away, quick. “That Viet bitch fine as a motherfucker.”

Tyree laughed. “I thought you only liked white bitches.”

“I like who like me,” E.J. said, grinning. “Equal opportunity employer.”

“Boy went affirmative action overnight,” Tyree said, shaking his head.

“Don’t worry,” E.J. said, still watching the mirror. “I ain’t touching your little collection of Catholic school hoes.”

Tyree hollered at that, loud enough the woman’s head turned up and then away like a reflex. Ramon let the chuckle slide out of him, low. The city liked noise; it made it harder for the wrong ears to hear the truth. He eased them out into the lane. Tires crunched shells. The heat sat back down in his lap.

They took the long way to Chef, threading past rows of narrow houses with aluminum awnings and shrimp nets drying like ghosts. Flags he didn’t recognize drooped off porches, sun-faded to softer colors. Old men in plastic chairs clocked them with the same bored, hungry eyes he’d seen on blocks across the river. Kids chased each other barefoot, turning the ditch into a balance beam. Somewhere a small dog lost its mind at absolutely nothing.

He pulled onto Chef. Traffic swallowed them whole.

~~~

The couch held a groove shaped like two people who kept coming back. Zoe’s legs were thrown over Saul’s, bare shin warm against his jeans, toes nudging the seam at his ankle like she was testing for loose threads. The AC hummed tired in the corner and never quite got there; the box fan in the window did the real work, chopping the air so it felt less like soup. Somewhere outside a siren started and then didn’t pick a direction. The living room smelled like her hair oil and a candle that said Gardenia but didn’t have the range.

“…and then Mia gon’ look me dead in my face like she ain’t text his phone first,” Zoe said, eyes bright with the story. “Like I’m just supposed to shrug, you feel me? ‘Oh okay, sis, go ’head, take my time, run down my battery with your little drama.’ Nah.” She made a face, half laugh, half disgust. “I told her, ‘You reaching.’ And she gone say, ‘I’m just asking questions.’”

Saul had been nodding on beat—uh-huh, for real, that’s crazy—but his head had drifted without his permission. He could feel it. The gap between what he meant to hear and what he was actually hearing widened like a slow crack in glass.

Zoe squinted at him. “You far away.”

He tried a smile. “I’m here.”

“You not,” she said, softer. She pushed herself up on an elbow, the couch giving a small sigh under the shift of weight. “What’s going on?”

He bought two seconds by pulling her calf closer, palm sliding over the sheen of lotion. It was a good leg to hold onto, a reason to stay in the room. “Just been thinking,” he said.

“’Bout what?”

He swallowed. The words had sat behind his teeth for days like a chipped tooth you can’t stop tonguing. “I been feeling bad about how I treated Caine,” he said. “Like… just went along with whatever my dad said. Whatever he did, I did. Didn’t really think for myself.”

Zoe’s mouth tugged to one side. “Wasn’t it his gun you found in the shed?”

He stared at the TV, black screen reflecting a ghost of their shapes. “I think so,” he said. “I mean… I ain’t talk to him in weeks.” He heard his own voice try to level itself and fail. “I’m a little—” He exhaled a short laugh that wasn’t one. “—I’m a little scared of him.”

Zoe blinked like she didn’t expect that answer. “Why you scared of your cousin?”

“’Cause he went to jail for a year,” Saul said, words flat to keep them from shaking. “Carjacking people. I know he’s out, and he ain’t… you know. But I think about it. Like, what he did. What I said.”

The fan clacked once against its own cage, found its rhythm again. Zoe watched him, the sharp in her eyes not unkind. For a beat the only sound was the AC trying its best.

“Everybody do dumb shit,” she said finally. “When they young especially. You can’t drag that forever.”

He looked at her, wanting to borrow her certainty for a minute. “Yeah,” he said. “You right.”

“I am,” she said, the corner of her mouth lifting. She leaned in, kissed him slow, the kind of slow that asked if he believed her and gave him time to decide. He let his hand rest against the back of her knee, little circle with his thumb, the soft skin there warm and alive and not complicated at all.

She pulled back just far enough to see his face. “Anyway,” she said, rolling back onto her side so they fit again, puzzle pieces that had learned each other’s edges. “So Mia, right? She swear she not messy, but then she gone post that sub like nobody can read.”

“Mm,” he said, which could mean I’m listening or I’m somewhere else. He wanted it to mean both.

She kept talking, voice bending around the words with that cadence he liked, all bounce and smart. He loved the way she did little impressions when she told stories, the way her face shifted and she was Mia for a second, then the dude for a second, then back to Zoe, like she could hold every role and nothing would leak. It should’ve been enough to keep him here. Sometimes it was.

Not then.

Everybody does stupid shit, she’d said. He could feel the sentence try to pass through him like rain through a gutter that hadn’t been cleared. He wanted to believe the water would just move on.

~~~

The hood still held the day’s heat. The Buick ticked as it cooled, tiny pops under the metal. Beyond the guardrail, the Mississippi shoved itself forward, brown water slick with light. A towboat groaned its horn, deep enough to vibrate through bone, dragging barges that looked like floating apartment blocks.

Camila sat between them, her legs swinging, a greasy paper boat in her lap. She held up a fry like proof. “Big boat!” she shouted, pointing with her other hand.

“Big boat,” Caine echoed, keeping his voice steady.

Mireya tilted her head to follow the ship upriver, the breeze pushing hair across her face and sticking it to her lips. She pulled it back and broke a fry in half, slipping one piece into Camila’s hand. “Look,” she said softly. “One, two, three, four stacks.”

Camila jabbed her fingers at the air, missing the count but satisfied anyway. She kicked her heels, thumping the Buick’s chrome. “Boom!”

Caine smiled at that — small, tight, almost automatic. The sound of her joy didn’t quite reach his eyes. He still felt the weight of Roussel’s hand pressing down on the scaffold earlier, the way his words had landed like wet paint that wouldn’t dry. Give up on those dreams. The sentence still clung.

Mireya’s silence pressed just as loud. She had cried in her room earlier, turned into a child again under her mother’s tongue. Shame on you for even asking. That hadn’t left her, either.

“Camila,” Mireya murmured, “wipe your hands.”

Camila wiped them down her shirt, leaving dark streaks. “Clean!” she announced.

“Close enough,” Caine said, fixing her collar with quick fingers. She leaned into his touch, unbothered. He dropped his hand back to the hood, palm burning against the metal.

The three of them sat there for a stretch, watching the river move like it always would, whether they did or not.

Finally, Caine spoke, his voice low. “Can you do me a favor?”

Mireya didn’t look at him. “What kind.”

“Go to Hunt.” He kept his eyes on the water. “See Ricardo. See Dre. Put eyes on ’em.”

The word Hunt stuck in her throat before she even answered. Camila stuffed a fry in her mouth and made a small motor noise, oblivious.

“Am I even allowed?” Mireya asked after a long pause.

“I ain’t.” His tone cracked sharp, the bitterness bleeding through. “You can. I can’t set foot out there. Not with probation and an arrest record.”

She glanced at him now, eyes tired, mouth drawn thin. “What you want me to tell them?”

“Nothing.” It came too fast. He exhaled hard and tried again. “Nothing they can hold on to. Just… I need to know they’re alright. Eating. Still themselves.” He stopped, because saying more would make it sound like begging.

Another ship passed, horn dragging out a note so loud it shook Camila’s laugh loose. “Loud!” she squealed, covering her ears too late.

“Loud,” Mireya repeated, but the smile she gave her daughter didn’t touch the rest of her face.

“Are they even gonna want to see me?” she asked finally.

“They will,” he said, rougher than he meant. “They know you. They know if you’re there it’s because I can’t be.”

Her lips pressed together. She didn’t argue, but she didn’t nod either. Camila licked her fingers noisily, then flipped the paper boat upside down. “All gone!” she shouted.

“I’ll do it,” Mireya said.

Caine turned his hand until it brushed hers, then laced their fingers together. It wasn’t soft. It wasn’t playful. It was heavy, tired, necessary — a tether more than a touch. She didn’t look at him, didn’t squeeze back, but she didn’t pull away.

“Appreciate you,” he said quietly.

Her eyes stayed fixed on the river. “I know.”

Camila whined, shaking the empty boat. “Mo’ fries!”

Caine took it. “What’s the magic word?”

Camila brightened. “Now!”

Mireya barked a laugh despite herself. “Girl.”

Camila giggled and tried again, garbled. “Peez.”

“That’s my girl,” Caine said, sliding off the hood. He pulled another paper boat from the sack and set it in her lap.

“’Gras,” she mumbled through a mouth already full.

“You’re welcome, mi vida,” he said, leaning back against the car beside Mireya. The river kept rolling, the ships kept moving, and they sat with it — the silence between them carrying everything they hadn’t said.
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Post by Captain Canada » 03 Sep 2025, 11:19

At this point, Maria is just too bitter for her own good. Genuinely has forgotten to be a mother.
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Post by Caesar » 03 Sep 2025, 22:44

Captain Canada wrote:
03 Sep 2025, 11:19
At this point, Maria is just too bitter for her own good. Genuinely has forgotten to be a mother.
Whoa?! Is that Captain Canada saying that Mireya's struggles may have some outside influences?!
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Post by Caesar » 03 Sep 2025, 22:45

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The ball came off the back rim and popped straight up like it had a mind of its own. Dre slid under it, boxed out on habit, and felt the rubber drop into his hands with a soft smack. Heat made waves over the blacktop; the cinderblock walls held it like a trap. His shirt stuck between his shoulder blades, sweat salted into the cotton, breath even the way you learned playing outside when the game didn’t stop just because your body wanted it to.

“Run it back,” somebody called, voice stretched thin by sun.

Shoes squeaked dry on dust. Palms slapped forearms. The talk was light, then not. The younger guys were louder than they needed to be—laughing with that pitch that said they’d decided the day was regular, and they were daring you to say otherwise.

Dre let the ball hang on his hip and turned his head like he was wiping sweat with his forearm. Far side, by the fence, the Latinos were stacked in their usual corner. Ricardo had a shoulder on the wall, one ankle crossed over the other, face half-shadowed by his hood. He was looking like he wasn’t. When Dre’s eyes hit him, Ricardo lifted his chin a fraction—enough. Dre gave it back. That was the whole conversation.

He checked middle. Malik and DeShawn were two courts down, not actually hooping, just drifting—mouths going, hands cutting the air like blades.

Dre bounced once, twice. “Ball up,” he said, but the rhythm was off now, the game slowing itself like a song easing into a break. On the far baseline, two white boys peeled out of a walk toward the pull-up bars, cutting through like nobody else existed. Boots scuffed concrete. One of them smiled too much. They didn’t look at anybody; they looked through.

Dre slid a step to his left, angling the pass that wasn’t coming yet. He watched shoulders, feet, where the weight sat. A picture framed itself, ugly and familiar. Last time, the shine had caught him by surprise. He felt the memory on his ribs where the baton had found bone. Not today.

Malik and DeShawn drifted the other way. Not fast. Not slow. Just there, closing the angle from behind the walking whites with a casual curve like men heading nowhere. Dre heard Malik laugh at nothing—too loud, too easy.

“Ball up, nigga,” DeShawn said to nobody, head tilting like he’d seen a cloud shaped like a joke.

Dre didn’t call out. He put the ball down soft, let it roll toward the sideline like he’d forgotten it for a second, and stepped out of the lane. The court made a hollow in the heat. Somebody said, “What we doin’?” under their breath. Nobody answered.

The move when it came was quick, wasteful, young. A hand hit a waistband. Metal flashed dull—tape-wrapped handle, scrap sharpened to intention. The shank went in with a sound Dre felt more than heard; the white boy’s mouth made an O before the air found his scream.

“Yo—!” tore loose from the court and died on concrete.

The second white boy whipped around and swung wild, catching Malik’s shoulder, then air. DeShawn danced back and came forward again, face set like he was proving a math problem. The stabbed boy stumbled and grabbed his own side and looked surprised his hand came away red.

Then everything shouted at once.

Guards at the gate, boots hammering. The loudspeaker coughed awake and barked, “DOWN! DOWN NOW!” The yard flattened like a body under a blanket—dominoes stopped, heads ducked, people melting to stone. Dre spread his hands, kissed the pavement with his cheek. Heat snapped at his skin. Pebbles bit into the edge of his jaw. His heart didn’t sprint; it locked into the slow drum he trusted when things went sideways.

“Hands where I can see ‘em!” a CO yodeled from somewhere too close.

Dre opened his fingers wider, palms flat like he was offering the ground back to itself. His eyes cut left, not up. In that slice of sightline he kept, the white boy’s legs shook under him. Blood threaded out in a thin red line toward the rain gutter, mapping the slope of the slab. The sound he made changed keys—less boy, more animal—each breath shorter than the one before.

Malik was down now, legs splayed, fingers laced behind his head, lips pressed tight against dust like he was trying not to spit grit. DeShawn had flattened out before the first baton landed anywhere near him. The shiv vanished.

A knee dropped hard into Dre’s shoulder blades. He swallowed the grunt.

“I’m down, shit,” he said, voice level. The knee dug harder anyway.

“Search ‘em! Weapons!” another voice snapped, baton clacking against the fence to make noise behave.

Rubber rolled and kissed Dre’s wrist—the ball he’d let go finding him like it always did. He didn’t move. The smell of spray came thin, chemical-sharp. Somebody coughed until it turned to gagging. The loudspeaker repeated itself like it liked the sound.

“On your feet if I tap you.”

The broom of authority moved down the line—tap, tap, tap—men rising hunched, hands laced. When Dre’s turn came, he stood slow, dust printed across his temple, palms open above his skull. The ball rolled away, bumped a shoe, and stopped.

They walked them crooked to the wall, then straightened the line with shoves. Dre kept his gaze pinned to a flake in the paint in front of his nose. He could still see the bleeding kid without looking—just that edge of a leg jerking, the shoes scuffed to hell, the noise that had stopped being a scream and turned into breathing shaped like one.

A gurney wheel squealed. Boots shuffled around the red. Commands kept coming like rain: turn, hands, don’t look, move. Somebody muttered, “Stupid-ass kids,” too low to belong to a CO.

“Face the wall!”

He faced it. The paint had bubbles where the sun had blistered it and flakes where the cold had made it give up. He breathed in the chalk of it, the ghost of old bleach under new sweat.

He stood. He held. He let the wall be his whole sky.

Behind him, the gurney squeal faded. The red on the concrete didn’t.

~~~

The library hummed with that strained kind of quiet that wasn’t silence, just kids pretending they had work to do. The fluorescent tubes overhead buzzed constant, one flickering in a tired rhythm that made the shadows twitch across the ceiling. The air smelled like old carpet, dust caught in vents, a faint tang of bleach left over from the janitor’s mop that morning.

Mireya sat at the back table where the chairs always rocked uneven, her backpack slouched beside her, one strap hanging by a thread. The school laptop was open in front of her, its screen full of tabs that had nothing to do with the assignment she was supposed to be finishing.

She scrolled through a thread she’d found the week before: How did you pay for college if you were broke?

The answers stacked in uneven blocks.

“Took two classes at a time. Took me eight years but I finished.”
“Got a sugar daddy.”
“Worked night shifts, slept three hours a day, graduated broke anyway.”
“Didn’t. Dropped out. Best choice I ever made.”

Her eyes skimmed line after line until the words blurred together. Every story sounded like a warning: even if you managed to finish, you came out bleeding. Even if you pushed, the world took more than you had to give.

She rubbed the heel of her hand across her forehead. The math sat heavy no matter how she turned it—boutique hours stretched thin, shifts at the yard grinding into her skin, Camila’s daycare, gas, food. Every dollar already spoken for before it touched her account.

Her stomach tightened. She clicked out of the thread and stared at the blank search bar. For a second, she thought about closing the laptop altogether. Instead, her fingers typed a name.

Caine Guerra.

The site loaded slow, the fan in the laptop hissing like it might give up. The header popped up plain, black font on white:

Caine Guerra – Quarterback – 6’3” – 185 lbs – Edna Karr High School.

Her throat closed. She remembered the first time she saw it—Donnie waving his cracked phone, grin wide, showing her the single line of text like it was proof of something. Back then it had been just Alcorn State. Bare bones. Enough to light a flicker in her chest she crushed down before it could grow.

Now the list had multiplied. Arkansas State. South Alabama. UL-Lafayette. UL-Monroe. Texas State. And under them, the smaller Louisiana schools—Nicholls, Southeastern, Northwestern, Southern, McNeese.

The logos lined up down the page like a roll call of exits, each one another place farther from here.

She didn’t click the highlight reels. Didn’t need to watch him throw touchdowns to know how it would twist inside her. Pride, hot and sharp in her chest. Anger right behind it. Resentment she hated admitting was there. He had a page. A profile. A list of schools asking about him. She had—what? Two jobs that barely covered bills, grades sliding, no scholarships waiting on the other side.

The glow of the screen showed her own face back at her—eyes rimmed with exhaustion, mouth pulled tight like she was bracing for a hit. She pushed her hair back from her face, fingers tangling in the knots at the crown until her scalp stung.

For a second, she imagined him on those fields, wearing colors that weren’t theirs, coaches promising new beginnings, his name printed clean on rosters. She saw herself still here, fighting the same bills, Camila bigger now, asking questions she couldn’t answer. The thought pressed like a weight on her chest.

Her hand hovered over the mouse. The cursor blinked steady on the page, the highlight link glowing blue. She closed her eyes, exhaled slow through her nose, and clicked the X instead. The list vanished.

The screen went back to white, reflection faint in the glass. She stared at it until her eyes watered, then shut the laptop with a dull clap. The sound carried farther than she meant, and a couple kids at another table glanced her way before turning back to their work.

Mireya folded her arms across the laptop lid, pressing down hard until her knuckles blanched. She stayed that way for a long beat, the buzz of the light overhead drilling steady into her skull. Then she slipped the laptop into her bag, swung the strap over her shoulder, and stood.

Her knees ached like she’d been sitting for hours. The chair scraped against the floor, loud enough to cut the room’s hush in half. She didn’t look back at the table. She didn’t have to. The list would still be there, growing.

~~~

The field bled heat even in the setting sun. Chalk dust lifted with each step, the air holding that cut-grass bite and the sour of old Gatorade left in a trash can too long. Caine rolled his shoulders and tugged at the collar of his tee, pads long gone, sweat still cooling under cotton. Matt clattered along beside him, helmet dangling by the facemask, grinning like he’d stolen something.

“Bruh,” Matt said, already laughing. “Tell me why shorty tried to trap me by the gate. Big girl. I’m talkin’ heavy like a double plate.”

Caine smirked without looking over. “You love them fat bitches, huh? Bitches with them tee tee arms.”

“Man, chill. She said she like athletes. I said I’m in recovery.” Matt snorted at his own joke, bumping Caine with his elbow. “I can’t do it. She was like, ‘You play QB?’ I said, ‘Naw, I play hard to get.’”

Caine shook his head, lips pulling to the side. “You playing find the pussy.”

“You just gotta lift up the rolls,” Matt shot back, then glanced forward. “Ay—Coach Smith lookin’ like he on business.”

Coach Smith stood in the shadow of the locker entrance, arms folded, whistle cord cutting a dark line across his shirt. He gave a chin up at Caine, then flicked his eyes toward the hallway that led to the old film room.

“Guerra,” he called. “Film room. Coach wants a word.”

Matt raised his brows like, oh? and started to say something messy. Caine shrugged.

The hallway had that school smell—bleach over sweat, old cinderblock holding a day’s heat like a grudge. His cleats knocked echoes he could feel in his shins even in just socks and shoes. He put a hand to the door, breathed once, and pushed in.

Lights low, projector hum. The film room’s stale carpet sucked at sound. Coach Joseph sat front row, elbows on knees, eyes steady. Next to him, a man Caine didn’t know—thirties, clean polo, school colors on the sleeve, posture relaxed like the chair belonged to him.

“Caine,” Coach Joseph said, voice easy. “This is Coach Aplin.”

The stranger stood and reached a hand across the aisle. “Ryan Aplin,” he said. “Offensive coordinator and quarterbacks at Georgia Southern. Appreciate you coming by after practice.”

Caine took the hand—firm, one shake. “Yes, sir.”

Aplin nodded at Coach Joseph like they were picking up a conversation they’d already started, then back to Caine. “We caught your last couple games on film. Couple throws off play-action—nice. Pocket’s muddy, you climb, reset your base, ball out on time. You see it.”

Caine kept his face smooth. “Try to.”

“You do,” Aplin said. “You do. We had to make the drive out to see you in person.”

Had to. Caine filed the word where he kept the ones that mattered. He slid his eyes a half-inch to Joseph; Coach was stone—proud without smiling, the way he always held it.

Aplin settled back into the seat, easy. “I’ll give you the short version so I’m not stealing your evening. We like your tape. We like your processing. You’re not perfect—nobody is—but your feet stay married to your eyes. That’s teachable and you’re already ahead of the curve. We’re building something that fits you—tempo, RPO tags you already speak, protection rules you’ll learn fast. Early opportunity’s there. Real development. Not just words.”

The projector fan whirred like breathing. Caine let the coach’s sentences run through his head and tried not to think about Roussel’s voice flattening the sound of every door before it opened.

“You got questions for me?” Aplin asked.

Caine pulled a breath in. He felt Coach Joseph watching without watching—there, present, neutral like a good ref. Caine lifted a shoulder. “What you wanna know from me?”

Aplin smiled like that answer made sense. “I wanna know if you want to be coached hard. I wanna know if you want to compete day one. I wanna know if you can handle being told no and still find a yes. And—” he tipped his head— “I wanna know if you’re interested enough to come see us. Meet the room, watch how we work.”

Silence folded over the projector hum. Caine tasted dust in it. He kept his face neutral and let the words come out level. “I ain’t gon’ be able to visit. Got… family stuff.”

He said it like a fact, not an apology.

Coach Joseph’s glance slid over—one beat, a small muscle in his jaw working. He didn’t say a thing.

Aplin didn’t flinch. He nodded once, like he’d heard worse from better players. “Okay. We can work with family stuff. We get it. Some guys can’t travel mid-season, some got things they can’t get around. We do school visits. We do Zooms. We send installs. Whatever keeps it moving.”

Caine kept his face quiet. The room felt smaller for a second, like the walls had leaned in to listen.

Aplin leaned forward, forearms on his thighs, voice softening. “Look—this is not a hard sell speech. You’ve heard ‘em all, I’m sure. Early playing time, best fit, family atmosphere.” He let a small laugh out at his own list. “I’ll say this instead: we tell the truth in our room. If you come to us, you’ll get told exactly where you stand every day. You’ll get coached. You’ll either earn it or you won’t, and we’ll keep coaching you either way. That’s the deal.”

Coach Joseph finally spoke, just enough to stitch the edges. “Caine’s not afraid of work.”

“I can tell,” Aplin said, eyes never leaving Caine’s. “Your HC keeps you honest on film. I like that.”

A beat. The projector hummed. Someone in the hallway laughed too loud, then the door sound swallowed it.

“So,” Aplin said, palms open now. “Let me put my number in your phone. We’ll set up time this week—call, FaceTime—whatever you got. If you can get to us later, great. If not, we keep building anyway.”

Caine nodded once. “Aight.”

He took the card when Aplin offered it—a rectangle of weight he could feel more than see in the dim. He didn’t promise a thing. He didn’t say yes or no. He slid the card into the side pocket of his bag where the zipper still worked.

Aplin stood. “Appreciate you, Caine. Good to put a handshake to the tape.” He looked to Coach Joseph. “Coach.”

Joseph rose as well. “Safe drive.”

Aplin clapped Caine once on the shoulder—not too familiar—and walked out into the hallway, his footfalls fading into the building’s old bones.

The door clicked shut. The room felt bigger again.

Joseph let the silence rest a second, then: “How you feel about that?”

Caine lifted a shoulder. “It’s the same shit they all say.”

“It is,” Joseph said. “That’s why you gotta figure it out.”

Caine slid his bag strap over his shoulder. The card pressed against the fabric like a secret.

“You let me know what you need.” Joseph’s voice softened, but he didn’t move to fill the air with comfort.

Caine nodded. “Yes, sir.”

Out in the hallway, the cinderblock breathed heat back at him. He walked toward the locker room, sweat gone cool on his skin, the day’s noise settling behind his temples.

His phone buzzed in his pocket and then stopped. He didn’t check it.

At the locker, he sat a second, the quiet louder than practice. He took out the card and turned it once in his fingers. Ryan Aplin. Numbers below. Another path that might be, if the paperwork didn’t slam it shut.

~~~

The center lot was patched blacktop, oil freckles shining in the heat. Ramon cut the engine and the bass in the door died slow. He popped the trunk and lifted the case of Cokes by the plastic yoke, a grocery sack of off-brand chips and cookies pinched in his other hand. He glanced down the block—habit, not panic—clocked a cruiser idling two streets over, then pushed through the glass door.

Bleach and old gym hit first. Inside, the multi-purpose room ran in two currents: a half-court game where a rubber ball thumped and squealed, and a line of folding tables where high-school tutors bent over math worksheets with smaller kids. Voices braided—counting by twos at the tables, a chorus of “my ball” under the rim, the AC coughing on and off.

The older lady at the sign-in table looked up, badge crooked on her shirt. “Set those here, baby.”

“Yes, ma’am.” Ramon eased the sodas down so the cans didn’t rattle, parked the snacks beside them. “Figured y’all could use it.”

“We can,” she said, giving him a measured once-over that landed back on his face. “Appreciate you.”

He nodded and slid along the wall, staying out of passing lanes. On the low stage at the back, Nina sat with her legs swinging, no clipboard, no phone, just watching—face quiet in that way that made kids settle without knowing why.

Ramon climbed the two steps and stopped a half-pace off so his shadow wouldn’t cut across her.

“What you doing here?” she said, eyes still on the court.

“Wanted to see you,” he said. “And put some good karma on my books.” He tipped his chin toward the sodas and snacks.

That got a small look. “You got something on your mind you need good karma for?”

“Always do.”

They watched a little boy heave from his chest, the ball banging front rim and bouncing back into his forehead. He laughed because his friends did. A tutor in slides blew a toy whistle and called travel like it mattered.

Nina’s voice came lower. “I don’t like you coming here.”

Ramon kept his hands loose. “Why not?”

“Because these babies watch everything.” Her gaze slid to him and back to the floor. “Some of the little ones see you and think cool. They don’t know what comes with it. I’m not letting anybody practice that in this room.”

“What’s wrong with being like me?” The words were easy; the metal under them wasn’t.

She turned to him fully now, choosing plain over polite. “You got a gun on you right now?”

He held her eyes and said nothing.

She nodded once, like she’d proven a point neither of them enjoyed. “That right there.”

Silence opened. The room filled it: squeak, thump, pencil scratch, the ice cracking as the older lady broke the Coke case down into a cooler. A kindergartner hovered at the stage, tracing Ramon’s forearm ink in the air with a finger, then ran off when his name got called for homework.

Ramon shifted his weight, slid his hands into his pockets because he didn’t know where else to put them. “Can I see you later?”

Nina didn’t answer. A little girl in pink beads banked one in by accident; her arms shot up, surprise breaking into a grin. The tutors clapped and pretended not to be proud of themselves.

Ramon waited. Waiting was something he was good at; it didn’t mean it ever got lighter.

Finally she nodded, small, like she didn’t want the motion to belong to him. “After I’m done here,” she said. “But you know my rules.”

He dipped his head. “I hear you.”

“Do you?” Her tone wasn’t mean. It tested weight.

“I do,” he said, softer.

They sat with it a beat, both watching the game try to organize itself into something fair. Outside, a motorcycle blatted and faded. A siren smudged the edge of the evening and kept going.

The older lady popped the cooler lid and waved the kids over. “One each,” she said, then sent Ramon a complicated thank-you with her eyes. He answered with two fingers lifted from his pocket.

On his way to the door he stopped under the rim and rebounded for the girl with beads. “Elbow in,” he said, quiet like a secret. She tried, hit front rim, tried again—net. She squealed without shame, then bit her lip to hide it.

Ramon smiled once, brief, and moved on. At the exit he checked the street through the wired glass, rolled his shoulders like he could shed the heat and the eyes that came with it. Behind him Nina’s voice rose steady: “Five more, then homework.”

He palmed the bar and stepped back into the day. The air hit thick and hot, sirens somewhere far, somebody frying something on a porch two doors down.

~~~

The boutique always smelled like fabric softener and someone else’s idea of expensive—vanilla candle mixed with lemon cleaner, too much gloss on everything. Lights hummed overhead, white and cold, making dust look like glitter when it drifted through the air. Mireya sat on the sales counter with her legs swinging, sneakers barely skimming the shelving. She liked it quiet—no customers, no fake smile. Just the click of hangers as Paz worked through the returns, one shoulder propping the pile, wrists quick and neat.

A soft beat from Paz’s phone bled through her pocket, then died. She didn’t check it. She kept folding. Tag, smooth, stack. Tag, smooth, stack.

“Got my score,” Paz said finally, not looking up.

Mireya’s fingers toyed with the barcode scanner, letting the red line run across her knuckles. “Yeah?”

“Nineteen.” Paz blew air through her cheeks like that number had weight. “Could be worse. Could be better.”

Mireya nodded once. “Mm.”

Paz’s hands paused on a black bodysuit with a plunge so deep it felt like a dare. She set it flat and traced the V with a finger. “You get yours back?”

“Not yet.”

She didn’t say anything at all for a few breaths, like the quiet could be a blanket. Hangers clicked again. The AC coughed through the vent and pushed air that felt tired before it got to them.

“You know what we should do?” Paz said, the playfulness already in her mouth.

Mireya exhaled through her nose. “What.”

Paz held the bodysuit up by the hanger, the fabric spilling like ink. “Become IG baddies. Get flown out by basketball players. ‘Come to Cabo, ma.’” She put on a high voice that didn’t belong to anybody they knew. “All-inclusive.”

Mireya snorted. “Ain’t nobody flying out a girl with a kid and a man.”

Paz raised a brow. “When Caine go off to college, he not gonna know what you doing.”

Mireya shot her a look past the edge of the counter. “You starting to sound like Angela.”

“That a compliment or—”

“It’s a stop it.” Mireya’s voice stayed light, but the edge in it showed. “I’m not following him around like some lovesick puppy.”

Paz shrugged, hands up, bodysuit draped over a wrist. “Wouldn’t be so bad. Can’t be worse than this.”

Mireya let the barcode gun rest and looked at the empty floor, the racks that kept trying to look fuller than they were. “Anything could be better than this,” she said, the words steady. “And it could be a lot worse.”

They let that sit with them. Outside, a car bass thumped past and was gone. Somewhere in back, the mini-fridge compressor kicked on and rattled like it was about to quit. The boutique’s front window showed the street in a warped rectangle—neon from the corner store, a wet smear of light across old asphalt.

Mireya hopped down from the counter, a soft thud on tile. “Let me see that.” She took the bodysuit from Paz and held it up to herself in the mirror behind the counter. The V dove to nowhere. The back was high, fabric straight across like a scold.

She tilted her head. “Wouldn’t wear this,” she said. “Ain’t backless.”

Paz laughed, quick and real, and tapped her finger and thumb together.“

Mireya smiled despite herself, a small thing that didn’t last. She turned the hanger, checked the tag like it mattered. The size numbers meant nothing to her anymore—everything ran small when the racks wanted to call you big.

“You’d kill this,” Paz said, folding another return. “I’m just saying, if I had your back and your face? I’d—” She cut off, grinning. “I’d be insufferable.”

“Sounding like Angela again,” Mireya said, soft enough that it read as affection.

They worked for a minute without talking. Mireya slid the bodysuit onto a return rack, fingers smoothing the fabric like it could make the day easier. A fluorescent buzz hiccupped overhead, then steadied. She felt the fatigue run from her eyes down her spine, the kind that didn’t leave after sleep, because it wasn’t about sleep.

Paz’s voice came lighter again, testing the water. “You think he gonna go far?”

“Who?”

“Don’t do that.” Paz’s smile didn’t push. “You know who.”

Mireya’s shoulders rolled like she was shaking something off. “He’s not leaving us.”

“Coach coming by more now, right?” Paz said. “People talking. You hear it.”

Mireya reached for the lint roller and ran it down a satin dress that didn’t need it. “I hear everything.”

Paz let that lie. She slid the last return into a stack and wrapped the hanger hook around the bar with a practiced wrist flick.

The door chimed when a breeze nudged it, not a person, just air remembering how to move. Mireya straightened a stack of folded shirts that were already straight and felt that click inside—the one that meant the night was almost done, and the next thing was waiting to take its place.

“Backless,” Paz said again, teasing, and Mireya rolled her eyes without turning around.

“Girl,” she said, and flipped the open sign to closed even though they still had ten minutes, because sometimes mercy was small and you had to make it yourself.

~~~

The office smelled like paper and burned coffee, the kind that sat on a warmer too long and turned bitter. Blinds cut the late light into stripes across a wall of framed degrees. When Caine pushed through the outer door, Markus was already there, sleeves rolled, tie loose, weight forward like a man who didn’t wait for things to happen to him.

“You texted,” Markus said.

Caine’s answer was clipped. “Yeah.”

“Come on.” Markus palmed the hall door and let it swing shut behind them.

They passed the waiting chairs and the shelf with law journals nobody read. Inside the office proper, the fan in the corner rattled against its cage and the vent breathed cool that didn’t feel like anything. Markus pointed at the chair. “Sit.”

Caine set his practice bag down by his boot and sat straight. No jitter, no bounce. He watched the room the way he watched a pocket—angles, windows, tells—then brought his eyes back to Markus.

“You got a dollar?” Markus asked.

Caine lifted a brow but pulled a wrinkled single from his pocket and laid it on the desk.

Markus slid it into a drawer, brought out a form, and set a pen on top. “Sign there.”

Caine glanced at the header, then signed. “It ain’t illegal.”

“I know,” Markus said. “Now it’s privileged.”

Caine nodded once. “Schools calling. Official visits. Roussel’s blocking everything. Won’t even let me go to Lafayette.”

Markus didn’t fill the space with noise. He just listened, the way good lawyers and good coaches did—quiet until it counted.

“They want face time,” Caine went on. “I can’t keep saying ‘family issues.’ That’s dead. If I don’t show, they move on.”

Markus eased into his chair, leather creaking. “It tracks. My boy’s getting a pile of letters too. It’s the season for shiny envelopes.”

Caine’s mouth flattened. “Pretty paper don’t mean shit if I’m stuck.”

“We can request an amendment to your probation,” Markus said. “Travel permission for recruiting. That’s the clean route.”

Caine held his stare. “And?”

“They’ll slow-walk it,” Markus said, no sugar. “They know your window. Delay is a tool.”

Caine looked at the desk, then back at Markus. “Motherfucker been trying to violate me since day one.”

Markus gave a single nod. “I know.”

Silence stretched a beat. The fan clicked, clicked, clicked.

“Even if we get a yes,” Markus said, “each visit is its own ask. Then, if you want to enroll out of state, we go back again for another modification. More signatures. More chances to stall you.”

Caine absorbed it without blinking. “Can you file it?”

“I’ll file it,” Markus said. “Tomorrow. But you need to hear the part you don’t want.”

Caine’s expression didn’t change. “Say it.”

“You want my advice?”

“Yeah.”

“If it were me, I’d try to leave Louisiana,” Markus said. “Roussel doesn’t let go. You stay, the pressure stays.”

Caine rolled the words over, steady. “What about Mireya. What about Camila.”

“Schools make things happen when they want a guy,” Markus said. “Girlfriends get scholarships, jobs appear, housing gets found. I’m not promising comfort. I’m telling you it’s possible.”

Caine set his forearms on his thighs, hands loose, head tipped a fraction—receiver open, read the safety, throw on time. “Aight.”

“One more thing,” Markus said. “While the motion crawls, you tell these staffs the truth. Why you can’t visit. Don’t try to hide it.”

“That ain’t gonna knock me off boards?”

“If it does, better today than after a headline,” Markus said. “At least show integrity. Own your mistakes. They’re going to background you anyway—probation, the case, all of it. Better they hear it from you.”

Caine gave a single nod. Agreement, not surrender.

Markus stood, pulling a file from a stack with the ease of a man who knew where his chaos lived. “Keep your head clean,” he said. “No missed check-ins. No heat. Don’t hand him the excuse he’s looking for.”

Caine rose when Markus did. “I won’t.”

Markus peeled off a carbon copy of the form and slid it back across the desk. “For your records. I’ll text when it’s filed. You keep me updated when coaches call. That’s it.”

Caine picked up the paper, folded it and tucked it in his pocket, and looked Markus in the eye. The thanks didn’t need words; they both knew the ledger.

At the door, Markus added, “This isn’t about speed. It’s about staying on your feet long enough to get where you’re going.”

Caine dipped his chin. “Got it.”

He stepped into the hallway. The building hummed the same as when he came in: lights, vents, a copier somewhere starting up. Outside, the city’s heat pressed against the glass, sirens far off like a reminder the world kept moving no matter who got stuck. He adjusted the strap of his bag, squared it, and walked out steady.

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Post by redsox907 » 04 Sep 2025, 00:37

still think something big will have to happen to allow Caine to leave Louisiana with Camilia, cause he ain't leaving without her. May be he leaves with Mireya, but sounds more and more like she'd fight that out of pride more than anything :smh:

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Post by Soapy » 05 Sep 2025, 09:11

redsox907 wrote:
04 Sep 2025, 00:37
still think something big will have to happen to allow Caine to leave Louisiana with Camilia, cause he ain't leaving without her. May be he leaves with Mireya, but sounds more and more like she'd fight that out of pride more than anything :smh:
No way Caine can take care of a child by himself, with no support system since he'd be out of state, while being a college athlete

leave them bums in LA, my boy
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