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Post by Caesar » 21 Jul 2025, 20:48

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A little more than a year since the sirens and the cell, Caine stood on the edge of Behrman Stadium’s turf, helmet in hand, breath threading out slow and tight. The stadium lights came up hard, bouncing off the fresh paint, turning everything bright and strange. He flexed his fingers and rolled his neck, nerves buzzing in his legs, surprised by how bad he wanted to do right.

The stands were alive—kids chasing each other up the aisles, parents shouting over the rumble of the band, the greasy smell of Popeyes and spilled soda everywhere. Coach Joseph’s voice carried above it all: “Let’s go, Karr! Heads on a swivel!”

A few yards down, Jay stretched with the starters, his jaw locked, eyes cutting over at Caine but never holding. There was no handshake, no greeting. Jay didn’t have to say anything—his body said enough: this is my job, don’t forget it. Caine met the look, nothing friendly in it, then let it pass.

But the rest of the team was different. As Caine jogged to the sideline, Tyron grinned and dapped him up. “Let’s get it tonight, G.”

Corey clapped him on the shoulder. “You ready? Feels like a movie, huh?”

Jayden bumped Caine’s fist, laughing. “Show out, bruh. Don’t let that boy outshine you.”

Caine let the noise and affection settle into him, letting it fill some space he’d almost forgotten he had.

The captains went out for the coin toss. Destrehan looked crisp in maroon and silver, but the energy on Karr’s sideline was rowdy, alive—shoulder pads clapping, helmets swinging, the younger guys crowding the fence for a better look.



Caine lingered near the sideline, helmet rocking in his hands as Jay lined up with the ones, Destrehan’s defense stacked tight across the ball. Coach Joseph’s voice echoed in his ear: Watch the pressure—they like to bring heat on third.

Third and six. The stadium buzzed, restless. Jay barked out the cadence, eyes darting, nerves masked by that cocky posture. As the ball snapped, Destrehan sent the house—both linebackers crashing in, edge rusher coming free.

Jay didn’t panic. He rolled right, drifting wide and quick, buying an extra second as the pocket collapsed. Caine could see it from the sideline—Jay’s eyes flicking downfield, shoulders squared, feet chopping light. At the last second, he snapped his wrist, dumping the ball off to Corey just shy of the sideline, not even five yards past the line.

Corey caught it with room to breathe—Destrehan’s safeties caught flat-footed, biting on the blitz. He turned upfield, sprinting past the corner, cutting across the grain with blockers swinging out. The crowd exploded as Corey juked the last man and tore down the far hash, the whole sideline chasing and hollering.

Caine watched it play out, stomach tight. Jay never looked his way, just jogged behind the play, face stone. Fifty yards on a simple dump-off—sometimes that’s all it took to tilt the stands.



Caine lined up behind center, sweat sliding down his back beneath the pads. The stadium felt smaller now, the noise pressing in. Coach Joseph flashed the signal from the sideline: spread right, watch for the blitz off the edge. Caine took a slow breath and barked the cadence, eyes scanning for tells in Destrehan’s defense.

Snap. The pocket tightened up quick—one of their linebackers came screaming in, stunting off the edge. Caine’s heart thudded, but he stayed light on his feet, shuffling up, sliding through the traffic. He could feel the pressure—breath on his neck, a hand clawing for his jersey—but he kept climbing, stepping up just enough to find daylight between the guards.

Tyron broke across the middle, hands flashing. Caine squared his shoulders and let the ball rip—fast and low, threading it between two defenders. The ball popped into Tyron’s chest in stride, and Tyron did the rest—turning upfield, slipping a tackle, streaking for the open.

Caine barely heard the crowd erupt, barely felt Derrick slap his back. All he could see was the ball’s perfect flight and Tyron running wild, the whole field tilting his way for a change.



Jay trotted out again, jaw set, glancing toward the sideline only once. Caine watched from behind his helmet, tracking every movement, every adjustment Jay made under center.

Second and long. Destrehan loaded the box, showing blitz, corners creeping up. Caine could almost feel the defense itching to tee off. The ball snapped—Jay dropped back, scanned quick, but the pocket collapsed in a heartbeat. One of their tackles whiffed, and a linebacker shot through the gap.

Jay didn’t even blink. He juked left, spun out of a hand on his shoulder pad, and darted toward the sideline, legs pumping, defenders grasping at air. He turned the corner, burst upfield, and hit another gear—faking out a safety and tight-roping the line just long enough to dive for the marker.

The crowd roared, coaches shouting, Jay popping up, pointing downfield as the ref signaled first down. He flashed that cocky grin—just for a second—then jogged back to the huddle, chest heaving, never looking Caine’s way.

Caine swallowed his own frustration, watching the team swarm Jay, knowing that every highlight like this was another reason he had to be perfect on his own turn.



It was third and long, late in the third quarter, the game still close. Caine jogged into the huddle, feeling sweat bead at his temples, nerves settling into focus. Coach Joseph signaled from the sideline—trips right, look for Tyron, but be ready to check down.

At the line, Caine glanced at the defense—Destrehan sending pressure again, safety shading up, linebackers twitchy. He snapped the ball and dropped back, scanning left. Instantly, the pocket caved in, bodies flying, a defender flashing right into his lane.

He spun away, rolling back, feeling cleats slip just a little on the churned-up turf. A linebacker lunged and Caine juked, reversing course, weaving a yard behind the line of scrimmage—eyes always up, still searching for a window. The crowd noise peaked, coaches barking, defenders closing fast.

Tyron broke late, flashing open near the sideline. Caine didn’t set his feet—he sidearmed the ball around a rusher, threading it low and fast just past the outstretched hands.

Tyron snagged it on the run, tiptoed the sideline, and picked up another ten before getting shoved out of bounds. The sideline erupted, teammates shouting and pounding helmets, Derric hollering, “He slippery too! Y’all see that?”

Caine caught his breath, grinning in spite of himself as he jogged back to the huddle. For a moment, he let the thrill settle in his chest—proof to everyone, including Jay, that he could move and create too.



Jay broke the huddle with swagger, lining up under center as the band blared and the crowd started to rise. Caine watched from the sideline, arms crossed, helmet pressed tight to his chest, every muscle wound up. The defense was showing man coverage, safety shaded over the top—exactly the kind of look Jay liked to attack.

The ball snapped. Jay dropped back, smooth and quick, eyes locked downfield. Destrehan’s end came free off the right, but Jay sidestepped, buying an extra second, and let it fly—a perfect spiral, high and arcing.

Corey was sprinting up the seam, defender glued to his hip. Jay’s ball dropped just over the DB’s fingertips, landing right in Corey’s hands as he crossed the goal line, momentum carrying him through. The stadium exploded, purple and gold everywhere, teammates swarming the end zone, Jay jogging up with his fist in the air.

On the sideline, Caine watched the celebration, jaw tight. Jay grinned for the crowd, nodding up at the stands like he owned the night. For a second, all the noise was just proof—another reminder that if Caine wanted this spot, he’d have to take it from someone who expected it to be his.



They were on the Destrehan 35, third and long, the kind of down you’re supposed to play safe. Coach Joseph’s signal from the sideline: zone read, trips right. Caine relayed it, feeling the twitch in his legs, hungry for something bigger.

He took the snap, sold the fake to the back, and kept the ball tucked in tight, eyes upfield. The edge rusher bit hard on the handoff, giving Caine a seam outside. He turned it up, felt his cleats dig into the turf—space opening for just a heartbeat.

Jayden cracked down on a corner, Tyron blocked a safety, and Caine burst into the second level, the sideline erupting as he flew past the 25. A linebacker lunged; Caine stiff-armed him, spinning away, barely losing speed.

At the 15, another defender dove low—Caine hurdled him, knees scraping the air, landing off-balance but staying upright. The noise was a wall now, footsteps and pads clapping behind him. Ten yards out, a DB angled across, arms spread. Caine cut inside, lowered his shoulder, feeling the helmet smack his thigh, but kept his balance.

At the five, another maroon jersey crashed in high. Caine braced for the hit, then left his feet, stretching his arms and the ball toward the pylon. Bodies collided midair, but he felt the ground scrape past and the football break the plane. The ref’s arms shot up—touchdown.

Caine rolled to his back, lungs burning, heart ready to punch a hole in his chest.



The final whistle blew and the last bursts of purple and gold drifted down from the stands. Players slapped backs and helmets, coaches gathering their units near the fifty. Caine unclipped his chinstrap, sweat stinging his eyes, legs still humming from the run. Jay stood a few feet away, helmet dangling from his hand, face blank as he stared at the scoreboard.

Coach Joseph found them both as the crowd began to thin, voice low but carrying the weight of every lesson he’d ever barked. “Both of y’all—come here.”

Caine and Jay stepped in, silence thick between them.

Coach Joseph looked them up and down, not smiling, not mad—just business. “Y’all both played your ass off tonight. Made some plays, took some hits, kept your heads. That’s what I needed to see.” He nodded at Jay. “Jay, you ain’t scared to tuck and run. Sometimes you hold it too long, but you turn nothin’ into somethin’.” He turned to Caine. “Caine, you moved the pocket, kept your eyes up, made throws when it got tight. That run? That was grown man shit.”

He scanned between them, making sure they both got the message. “This ain’t settled. We got a season to play, and I need both y’all ready. Competition makes winners. Don’t get comfortable.”

He clapped them each on the shoulder, hard. “Celebrate the win, but remember—ain’t nothing promised.”

Coach Joseph turned and walked down the line, already shouting for everyone to grab their gear.

Jay walked off without a word. After a moment, Caine walked toward the tunnel, helmet hanging loose, legs humming with adrenaline. He scanned the stands until he saw them—Mireya in a jean jacket, Camila balanced on her hip, Angela and Paz beside her, all waving hard. Mireya pointed, and Camila’s little arm shot up, face lit by a gap-toothed grin.

Caine grinned back, raising his hand, letting the lights and the noise wash over him. For a moment, it felt like being home again—like being chosen, even if the rest was still up in the air.


~~~

The crowd spilled out beneath the stadium lights, voices and laughter echoing against the concrete, parents rounding up little kids sticky with sweat and powdered candy. Mireya shifted Camila on her hip, ankles sore, as Angela and Paz walked beside her. The night air felt dense—half fry oil and kettle corn, half cut grass and dust from the parking lot.

Paz was scrolling through her phone, thumbs moving fast. “You think Arelle might give you extra hours this week?”

Mireya shrugged, lips pressed tight. “She ain’t said nothing, but I’m gonna ask tomorrow.”

Paz shook her head, already defeated. “Girl, none of us get more than fifteen. Even the managers don’t get overtime. If they see you working extra, they’ll just cut your hours next week to fix the schedule.”

Angela glanced over, sympathy and warning mixed in her eyes. “If you find another job, let me know. I might be right behind you.”

Mireya let out a breath that felt stale before it left her chest. “It’s always something. Can’t even keep the lights on with fifteen hours.”

Camila wriggled, reaching for Angela’s earrings. Paz tried to get her to say her name, but Camila just buried her face in Mireya’s neck, eyes heavy from the noise and the late hour.

Mireya looked up, scanning the crowd as the last of the players trickled out from the locker rooms, duffel bags slung over their shoulders. She spotted Caine—jersey traded for a compression shirt, duffel bag dangling from his fingers—working his way through a group of teammates, the edges of a tired smile caught under the field lights.

As he got closer, that same girl from the parade and the house party—braids, gold nose ring, the kind of bold you couldn’t fake—stepped right in his path, talking fast, smiling like they had a secret. Mireya caught the look, recognized the type, and felt her jaw clench.

Angela nudged her. “You know who that is?”

Mireya just shook her head, set her jaw, and adjusted Camila higher. She crossed the pavement with purpose, the sound of her sneakers scuffing sharp in her own ears.

Caine looked over, face lighting up the way it always did when he saw Camila. The little girl squirmed in Mireya’s arms, stretching her fingers out. “Papi!” she called, voice tiny but clear.

Caine dropped his bag and reached for her, burying his nose in her curls as she squealed and babbled in Spanglish. Mireya let herself breathe for a moment as she watched them.

The girl with the braids blinked, caught off guard, but recovered with a smile. Mireya stepped forward, offering her hand, voice even but with that little edge that said she missed nothing. “Hey—I’m Mireya. Caine’s girl.”

The girl paused, then shook her hand. “Janae,” she said, giving Mireya a quick once-over but offering nothing more.

Mireya held her gaze a beat, then gave a half-smile. “I like your eyes. And your body? Tea. I know somebody don’t play about you.”

Janae’s lips curled in a surprised grin. “Thanks, I guess.”

Caine leaned in close, whispering in Spanish, “Te ves un poco verde, nena.”

Mireya smirked, just as quick in Spanish: “Eso suena como si esto fuera una competencia. Tú sabes dónde está tu casa.”

Camila tugged on Caine’s sleeve. “Ice cream, papi? Helado?”

He grinned, nuzzling her cheek. “Yeah, baby, we can get ice cream.” He glanced back at Janae, nodded. “I’ll see you around.”

Janae waved, her eyes lingering on Mireya a second longer before she turned away.

As they walked off, Mireya slipped her arm around Caine’s waist. The crowd noise faded behind them; the glow from the field still lighting the edge of everything.

Caine’s voice dropped low. “Coach said there were scouts in the stands. Couple asked about me. JUCOs and some D3s, but… I think I could turn football into a scholarship, Reya.”

The hope in his voice pressed heavy on Mireya. She thought of her ACT score, the bills waiting at home, the way work never stretched enough. But she kept her voice light, letting none of it show even though her grip on Caine’s waist tightened.

“That’s good, Caine. I’m proud of you.”

He smiled, believing her.

Camila squirmed between them, chanting, “Ice cream! Ice cream!” like she could make it true just by saying it.

~~~

Galvez Street was alive, dusk deepening but the block still loud—bass shaking the windows, smoke curling up from the circle of boys passing blunts, the scent of weed mixing with fried chicken and spilled Crown. Old heads leaned against parked cars, gold teeth glinting in the streetlight, eyes half-closed but watching everything.

Ramon sat on the edge of a busted milk crate, shoulders loose, one foot tapping out a nervous rhythm. Tyree and E.J. were nearby, half-talking, half-watching a dice game that had already gotten too loud. Everyone was young, reckless, but nobody wanted to look scared. In the background, you could hear somebody’s cousin rapping over a beat on a phone speaker, words half lost in the laughter and trash talk.

Duke came out of the trap, his build heavy in the glow of the porch light, face serious, jaw flexing. Everybody straightened a little—some respect, some habit. He cut through the crowd without looking at anyone else, walking straight up to the trio. The block got a little quieter.

Duke stared at them, his eyes hard, then broke into a wide, toothy grin. “That’s for you, lil’ niggas. Y’all put in work with that lick y’all pulled,” he said, pulling out three fat, rubber-banded rolls of cash. He slapped one into each of their hands. “Them bricks alone gonna feed the streets for a minute.”

Tyree couldn’t help but grin. “On my mama, I told y’all we wasn’t just talking.”

E.J. flicked the band off his roll, counting quick, trying not to look too eager. “Man, we need more like that. Shit was too easy.”

Ramon dapped up Duke, voice low. “Good looking, Duke.”

Duke started to turn away, but paused, scanning the circle, voice dropping with a warning edge. “I heard that nigga Tee Tito ran straight to his daddy—but that old ass nigga retired.” He looked from Tyree to E.J., one eyebrow up. “Still, y’all know them Melph niggas never let shit go easy.”

Tyree sucked his teeth, shaking his head. “They always been pussy out the Melph. Ain’t nothing new.”

Duke barked a laugh, nodding. “That’s facts. Even when I was coming up. But I’m telling y’all—keep your heads up. Tito or Tee Tito might come sniffing around. Shit get hot, don’t act surprised.”

E.J. sucked his teeth, tucking his roll in his waistband. “Man, we never leave home without the pole. Ain’t nobody touching us, big brudda.”

Duke eyed him, amused but dead serious underneath. “That’s what all y’all say till somebody send a drop. Don’t get caught slipping, you hear me?” He took a final drag off his blunt and melted back toward the trap house, a couple little kids scattering out of his way.

The block’s energy snapped back, but a little sharper. Ramon peeled the rubberband off his stack, thumbing off a crisp $100. He held it up. “Look, y’all. Caine gotta get a cut. You know that.”

E.J. made a face. “Man, for what? All he did was watch.”

Tyree shook his head, voice mocking. “If it was you, you’d be crying about your cut too. Run that shit.”

E.J. glared but pulled off a bill, slapping it into Ramon’s palm. “$200 enough for watching. I ain’t trying to give away my payday.”

Tyree laughed, pushing E.J.’s shoulder. “Then you give him some of yours.”

Ramon shoved Tyree back, but he was grinning. “Both y’all niggas giving him a bill. Stop acting broke.”

Finally, with some reluctance, Tyree and E.J. each peeled off a hundred and handed it to Ramon. The three of them counted their money, the sweet-and-sour rush of fast cash making everything feel brighter—danger humming underneath, but nobody willing to say it out loud.

Somewhere down the block, tires screeched and somebody let off a firecracker, but nobody flinched. In the city, you learned not to show nerves. Not here, not now, not ever.

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Post by redsox907 » 21 Jul 2025, 22:16

I didn’t put the connection together before - just thought it was a similar name.

Tee Tito likely knows Caine and going to tell Tito. Which didn’t he put Ramon’s crew and Tito in connect while he was locked up? Someone going to put the pieces together pretty quick and they ain’t gonna care Caine was just looking out

So much for worrying about ball

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Post by Soapy » 22 Jul 2025, 09:14

the sun finally starting to peak through
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Post by Captain Canada » 22 Jul 2025, 10:58

Glad that Caine got to finally have a good moment with football
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Post by Caesar » 23 Jul 2025, 21:25

redsox907 wrote:
21 Jul 2025, 22:16
I didn’t put the connection together before - just thought it was a similar name.

Tee Tito likely knows Caine and going to tell Tito. Which didn’t he put Ramon’s crew and Tito in connect while he was locked up? Someone going to put the pieces together pretty quick and they ain’t gonna care Caine was just looking out

So much for worrying about ball
:yep: Tee Tito being short for Petite Tito, a typical way for juniors to get nicknames. Caine did in fact put them in contact with Tito while inside.

We'll have to see what happens.
Soapy wrote:
22 Jul 2025, 09:14
the sun finally starting to peak through
Soap de la Ghetto
Captain Canada wrote:
22 Jul 2025, 10:58
Glad that Caine got to finally have a good moment with football
See, it's not all bad
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Post by Caesar » 23 Jul 2025, 21:25

Toujou Gen Je Ki Ap Gade

Caine pulled into the lot half a minute after Markus, killing the engine but leaving the windows cracked, the sticky morning air barely moving through the car. The stretch of Chef Menteur was quiet for once, just the distant thump of a bass line two blocks over, a dog barking in a yard behind chain link. The building in front of him—Lucas Drywall & Finish—looked tired: flaking blue paint, iron bars across the glass, a rusted sign swinging on a chain.

Markus was already out, checking his phone, sunglasses glinting, suit jacket slung over his shoulder. Caine sat for a second, hands braced on the wheel, watching the way Markus scanned the lot—always looking twice, like habit. Then Markus glanced his way and nodded: let’s get it.

Caine climbed out, wiping his palms on his jeans. He met Markus between the cars, tension strung tight in his back and jaw. He tried to sound casual, but it came out flat: “Appreciate you, man. You ain’t gotta do all this.”

Markus shook his head, the corner of his mouth pulling up just a little. “It’s not done yet. Your PO’s still breathing down your neck?”

Caine gave a hollow laugh, barely more than breath. “Man, Roussel said the concession stand job don’t count now that school out. I need real work or he gonna violate me. He been talking that shit for weeks.”

Markus gave him a side-eye, part warning, part concern—the same look he’d given in the courthouse, before every plea, every bad piece of news. “I know how it goes. That’s why we’re here. Just remember: you do your part, Lucas won’t call me complaining. Don’t make me have to suit up for nothing dumb.”

Caine managed a half-smile. “I hear you.”

Markus jerked his chin at the door. “Come on. Let’s see if you still got any luck left.”

Inside, the door slammed behind them—metal on metal, a sound that felt like a habit Caine couldn’t shake. The air was heavy, hot with dust and paint, the scent sharp and layered—old sweat, cut wood, the underlying tang of something chemical, maybe bleach or thinner. Somewhere in the back, a radio played Bobby Blue Bland, a song Caine recognized from his grandmother’s kitchen but never learned the name of.

At a long, battered table stood an older Black man, big in the shoulders and hands, heavy in his stance. He wore faded blue coveralls, a Saints cap turned backward, pencil stub behind his ear. He was measuring out a sheet of drywall, eyes narrowed, shoulders set. He didn’t look up right away. The whole building seemed to revolve around his movements—the scrape of the blade, the whisper of drywall sliding, the way he stacked it to the side with a grunt.

Only after he’d set the board down did he turn, slow and deliberate, eyes sweeping from Markus to Caine. There was something flat in his gaze—not unkind, but like he was waiting to see if either of them would waste his time.

“Morning, Mr. Lucas,” Markus said, voice smoothing out, respectful. Caine recognized the shift. It was the way you talked to men who held the keys.

Lucas just nodded. “You the lawyer?”

Markus grinned. “Sometimes.”

Lucas let that sit for a second, then nodded at Caine. “That him?”

“Yeah. This is Caine. He’s the young man I told you about—needs work for the summer. Got skills. Got sense.”

Lucas grunted, eyes moving over Caine, from his shoes to the spot where his hands fidgeted at his side. “You ever do real work?”

Caine straightened, not meeting Lucas’s eyes at first. “Worked with my uncle and cousin. Demo, clean-up, sometimes painting or patching. Nothing fancy, but I ain’t scared to sweat.”

Lucas just watched him, silent, then glanced at Markus. “You told me he speaks Spanish.”

Caine stepped in before Markus could. “Fluent, sir. My mama from Honduras. I grew up talking it.”

Lucas cocked his head, considering. “You ever haul board? Mix mud?”

Caine nodded. “Both. My uncle taught me. I can learn whatever else you need, too.”

Lucas grunted, still unmoved. “You ain’t gonna get rich here. It’s honest, but it’s work. Don’t come in here asking for no advances, don’t bring no attitude. We got men who don’t play. You show up, you do what’s asked, you get paid. You don’t? You’re gone.”

Caine nodded, throat tight. “I just need a job, sir. I’ll show up.”

Lucas finally stuck out his hand, grip rough and dry as old rope. “My granddaughter run the office. She’ll get you on payroll, get your paperwork. You got a bank account?”

“Yeah,” Caine said quickly. “If not, I’d figure it out.”

Lucas squeezed once, then released, watching Caine like he could see every street and scar in him. “Alright then. I’ll call you when we got jobs lined up. You’ll get the address and time. Don’t be late.”

Caine swallowed, the relief coming quick and heavy, mixing with something else—resentment, maybe, that it had to be like this, that even now he was being measured for what he might break.

He turned to go, Markus already halfway out the door. But Lucas cleared his throat, one eyebrow cocked.

“And let me say this, young blood,” Lucas said, voice edged with something hard but almost teasing. “Don’t be trying to play up under none of my granddaughters’ clothes. They got enough of you street boys chasing behind them. I don’t need no mess.”

Caine’s face burned. He put his hands up, palms open, a little smile forced out by embarrassment and the need to show respect. “I’m just here to work, Mr. Lucas. That’s it.”

Lucas grunted again, lips twitching, like he wanted to believe it but had learned not to.

Outside, Markus leaned against his car, watching Caine with something between pride and warning. “See? That wasn’t so bad.”

Caine rolled his shoulders, letting the tension leak out. “You know he was gonna say yes?”

Markus shrugged. “Nope. But I knew he’d listen. And your PO’s gonna be happy now.”

Caine nodded, jaw set. “He better. I ain’t tryna go back behind them walls, not for nothing.”

Markus’s expression softened, just for a second. “Then don’t slip. Show up. On time. Every time. Don’t get in with the wrong crowd on those jobs, neither. You know how it goes.”

Caine nodded again. “I know.”

Markus gripped his shoulder, quick but sincere. “You got this, Caine. Just don’t forget what you had to fight through to get here.”

He watched Markus drive off, the lawyer’s taillights flashing red, then gone. The street felt hot and empty, sweat prickling at the back of Caine’s neck, the memory of cell bars and cold floors crawling in his bones. He pulled out his phone, added “Lucas Drywall” and the start date to his notes, even took a photo of the building for proof—paperwork for Roussel, evidence for anyone who needed it.

He looked at his own reflection in the cracked glass of the door, saw the tired eyes, the new lines. This was what freedom cost—always explaining yourself, always needing to prove you deserved it.

~~~

The Guerra’s house always looked tired in the morning, the paint peeling around the porch columns, stray cats slinking between trash cans. Mireya parked under the oak that bent across the curb, tires crunching over gravel and cigarette butts. She cut the engine, the buzz of the radio dropping away, and reached over her shoulder for Camila, who was busy pulling her own curls in the car seat, whispering a nonsense lullaby to her stuffed dog.

“Come on, mami,” Mireya murmured, voice thin. “Let’s go see Abuela.”

Camila clung to her, chubby arms warm around her neck, shoes thumping against Mireya’s thigh as she locked the car. The air was already thick—humidity curling her hair, sweat slicking her back, a wetness that made everything heavier than it should be.

Inside, the house smelled like coffee and last night’s beans. Sara was already up, moving slow but steady in her slippers, head scarf tied tight, rosary beads glinting at her throat. She didn’t look surprised to see Mireya at this hour, just raised her eyebrows and wiped her hands on a faded towel.

“You here early, mija.”

“Had to.” Mireya shifted Camila on her hip, the child’s fingers tangled in her gold chain. “Somebody called out at the boutique. Arelle texted, said I could pick up the hours.”

Sara didn’t say anything about how tired Mireya looked, or the bags under her eyes, or the way her shirt clung damp to her shoulders. Just reached for Camila, who went easy, cheek pressed to her grandmother’s chest.

“Thank you for taking her,” Mireya said. The words always sounded too formal, but she never knew what else to say. “I’ll pick her up after four.”

Sara waved her off, voice soft but firm. “She’s my granddaughter, too. You don’t have to thank me for that.”

Mireya lingered in the doorway, fingers kneading the strap of her bag. Camila squirmed in Sara’s arms, reaching for the faded Our Lady of Guadalupe magnet on the fridge.

“You eaten?” Sara asked, shifting Camila to her other side.

Mireya shook her head. “No, I gotta go—”

“Sit down,” Sara said, already opening the fridge. The kitchen was crowded with Tupperware and old mail, a radio playing quiet cumbia on the window sill. Mireya hesitated, but Sara was already putting Camila down, the little girl toddling to the living room to grab a stray Barbie from behind the couch.

Mireya sat, the vinyl seat creaking beneath her, and watched Sara move. Her hands were quick but tired, the skin over her knuckles rough from decades of scrubbing and praying. She pulled out leftover beans, half a stack of tortillas, a boiled egg. The click of the Tupperware lids, the scrape of a spoon, all of it felt too loud in the close, hot kitchen.

“I don’t have time,” Mireya said, guilt pricking her voice.

“Take it with you,” Sara replied, not turning. She wrapped the tortillas in foil, pressed the beans into a plastic tub, the motions practiced and certain. “You eat it at lunch, or before your shift. You need food, not just coffee and aspirin.”

Mireya nodded, eyes on her hands. “Thank you.”

Sara packed it all into a plastic bag, tying it twice, and set it on the table in front of her. Mireya stared at it, feeling both seen and exposed.

“You know anybody hiring?” she asked, picking at a crack in the table. “I need more hours. Anything. Like now.”

Sara let out a long breath, leaning against the counter. “They always need cleaners at the hotels. But, mija, that’s nights and weekends, early mornings. How you gonna do that and keep up with school? Who gonna watch Camila?”

Mireya closed her eyes. “I don’t know. I just—need money, Sara. I’m trying. I really am.”

“I know.” Sara’s voice softened, her face unreadable. “But you can’t do it all. You’ll break yourself.”

Mireya’s jaw tightened. “I don’t have a choice. I got a red light ticket I still haven’t paid. Camila needs new shoes. I gotta take the fucking ACT again. The store cut everybody’s hours last week. Ma’s still mad I can’t help with rent. Feels like everything’s caving in.”

Sara crossed the room and set her hand over Mireya’s, squeezing once. Her palm was dry, callused, but steady. “I see myself in you,” she said, voice almost a whisper. “I remember when I had Caine. I was tired every day. Still am, truth be told. And I was older than you, Mireya. I didn’t know how to do half the things I needed to do.”

Mireya blinked, the sting behind her eyes growing sharper. She didn’t want to cry. Not here. Not now.

Sara let go, turning to pour Mireya a mug of coffee she didn’t ask for. “Camila don’t care if you have everything. She won’t care when she’s older, either. You love her, you’re there for her—that’s what she’ll remember. That’s a mother’s gift, mija. Not the shoes, not the money. The love.”

Mireya stared at her hands, the chipped pink polish and half-moons of dirt under her nails. She pressed her knuckles to her lips, wiped at her eyes but nothing spilled over.

“I just feel like a failure,” she said finally, her voice small.

Sara slid the mug of coffee in front of her, then sat, rubbing Mireya’s shoulder. “That’s just life. But you can’t let it stop you. We’re not built so soft. You hear me?”

Mireya nodded, the motion jerky.

They sat in silence, the only sound the low hum of the fridge, Camila’s soft giggle drifting from the living room where she stacked her dolls in a crooked line across the rug.

Mireya stood, gathering her bag, the container of food pressed to her chest. “I gotta get to work. I’m gonna be late.”

Sara nodded, rising, too. “Don’t forget your food. And, Mireya—” She waited until Mireya looked up. “If you ever need to talk, I’m here for you. Not just Camila.”

Mireya nodded again, throat thick. “Thank you.”

She crossed the living room, bending to kiss Camila’s head, breathing in the sweet, sticky smell of her. “Mi alma, I’ll see you after, okay? Be good for Abuela.”

Camila nodded solemnly, not looking up from her dolls.

At the door, Mireya looked back—Sara stood in the kitchen, hand to her mouth, watching her go.

Outside, the air felt heavier, the street loud with crows and traffic, a neighbor’s voice shouting after a stray dog. Mireya squared her shoulders, the weight of everything pressing down but her steps steady, one in front of the other.

She would make it work. She had to.

~~~

Yard time hit different in jail. Even with the sky wide and blue above, it never felt free—just exposed. The sun beat down hard, making sweat bead up on every neck and back, concrete radiating heat that shimmered around the fence. Dre stood with a group of other Black inmates in the narrow shade by the far wall, arms crossed, eyes moving but not lingering on anybody too long.

Ricardo watched a minute, chewing at the inside of his cheek. He waited until the noise was up—somebody clowning about a card game, a guard’s voice echoing sharp—and then drifted over, posture loose but eyes sharp. He jerked his chin. “Ay, come here a second.”

Dre slid out from his group, hands in his pockets, walking slow. “What’s good?”

Ricardo didn’t answer until they were a safe distance, near the basketball hoop where the net was nothing but a couple of frayed cords. He glanced around, lowering his voice. “You got a line on Tito? I need to get something in here. Nothing crazy, just enough to last.”

Dre shrugged, stone-faced. “You asking the wrong dude. I don’t know no way to get anything inside. Not from in here.”

Ricardo’s eyes flicked to a cluster of Black inmates posted up near the fence, one of them laughing with a CO. He nodded that direction, voice half-mocking, half-hopeful. “Ain’t none of them fucking a guard or something?”

Dre snorted, shaking his head. “Most the guards in here? They men. Old, mean, and ugly as hell. Anybody fucking them just desperate for a ride home.”

Ricardo didn’t blink, just gestured toward them again, letting the words linger. “Ain’t none of them fucking a guard or something?”

Dre held his gaze now, feeling the meaning click in—Ricardo didn’t care who or what; he was talking about desperation, about how lines blurred when you needed something bad enough. Dre kept his voice flat. “I’ll find out. Somebody always got something going.”

Ricardo made a little sound in his throat, not quite a laugh. “Gotta eat though. Ain’t nothing in here but bullshit commissary and stories. You know how it go.”

Dre shrugged again, more guarded now, but not hostile. “I’ll ask around. But no promises.”

A beat passed. Dre shifted, about to step away, but Ricardo held him a second longer, voice dropping even lower. “You heard about Tito’s kid? Tee Tito?”

Dre nodded. “Yeah. Word is, somebody hit a lick on him. Tito been looking, real loud about it.”

Ricardo tilted his head, a little smile curling his lip. “Tee Tito? He’s Young Melph. Ain’t nobody out here scared of them. Anybody in the city could’ve robbed his ass.”

Dre huffed, almost a laugh, but not warm. “That’s true. But people saying it was 3NG. G-Strip, maybe—some niggas out the 11th Ward.”

Ricardo shook his head, skepticism carved into his face. “Nah. 39 got more problems with 110, Byrd, Dooney—all that. Young Melph ain’t on their radar like that. My money on some dudes from the 11th then. Or maybe some hungry little set nobody talk about ‘til they get caught.”

Dre shrugged, folding his arms across his chest. “I ain’t got no skin in it. Tito’ll figure it out or he won’t. Streets gonna keep moving.”

Ricardo let the silence sit heavy between them, the clank of the basketball and the sharp whistle of a CO marking the passing of time. He finally nodded, sharp and quick. “I’ll hold you to it. About Tito. About the pack.”

Dre jerked his chin, eyes narrowing just a bit. “I’ll let you know what I find out. Don’t come to me on the yard about it again, though. You know how politics go.”

Ricardo flashed a crooked smile, all teeth, all tension. “You got it. Appreciate you, hermano.”

He slid back toward the little knot of Latinos near the bleachers, moving easy but glancing back once, just to be sure nobody followed. Dre watched him go, jaw tight, mind already racing through possibilities—risks, favors, who owed what to whom.

This was how it was in here. Deals and rumors, loyalty that lasted only as long as it was useful. Dre wiped a hand over his brow, feeling the sting of the sun, the grit under his nails. He glanced at the fence, the coils of razor wire above it, and wondered if anybody on the outside would even remember any of this by the time they got home.

He doubted it. But you had to keep moving. Had to eat, one way or another.

Behind him, a CO barked orders, and the crowd shifted, the rhythm of the yard never really stopping, just folding one secret into another.

~~~

The house was dark when Caine let himself in, his key slow in the lock. The street outside still buzzed with the last of Friday night traffic—sirens somewhere down the block, a dog barking at nothing. In here, it was quiet, heavy. The only sound was the slow tick of the clock on the wall above his grandfather’s photo, glass smudged, frame cheap and gold. The kind of stillness that never felt peaceful, just tense—like the silence right before rain.

Caine set his bag by the door and dropped his keys in the old coffee can on the side table, the metal clinking sharp and alone. He paused, letting his eyes adjust. The hall was faintly lit by the orange glow leaking in around the blinds. He could smell bleach and fried plantains lingering in the air—his grandmother’s night routine, always cleaning, always praying.

He moved quiet, every step feeling heavy in his shoes, the tiredness from a long day at Mireya’s clinging to him. Camila’s sticky kiss still damp on his cheek. She’d fought bedtime again, clinging to his hoodie, soft curls in her eyes, the way she whispered “No te vayas, papi” as Mireya finally pulled her away. He let himself feel that ache for a moment, then tucked it away.

Caine crossed to the living room, dropped to the floor in front of the sofa with a grunt. The carpet was rough against his knees, dust and crumbs prickling through his sweats. He pulled one of his boxes—worn cardboard, marker faded from too many moves—over to him, thumb working the tape loose. Inside, the contents were a mess. His journals, the ones he’d been writing for Camila, were bent, tossed in crooked, a couple loose pages wrinkled and half sticking out the side.

He felt something harden in his chest—a flush of heat, the old pulse in his temple. He pulled them out, flipping through the bent pages, trying to smooth them. The writing on the first one wobbled from a kid’s grip. The earlier entries—the ones from jail, full of cramped sentences and hope—creased, some ink smudged. He started to straighten them, but his hands were shaking. He stopped.

He stood, box still open on the floor. His jaw worked. He didn’t even think—just moved, steps hard, back to the room at the end of the hall. The one he used to sleep in. Now it was Hector and Saul’s, with Cruz’s little mattress in the corner.

The room was dim, a shaft of city light catching the side of Saul’s face where he slept curled up, hoodie bunched at his waist. Caine went straight to the bed and shook Saul’s shoulder, not gentle.

“Wake up.”

Saul groaned, batting his hand away, rolling to the side. “What, man…?”

“You go through my shit?”

Saul didn’t answer, eyes still half-closed. Caine grabbed his shoulder harder, shaking again. “I said, did you go through my shit?”

Saul squinted at him, the sleep clearing. “What stuff?”

“My fucking box, Saul. All my shit was messed up.”

Saul flopped onto his back, pulling the covers to his chin, annoyed now. “I was just looking for batteries. For the controller. Thought that was Abuela’s old stuff.”

Caine’s voice rose, sharper than he meant but too late to pull back. “So you just left it all like that? Couldn’t put it back right?”

Saul shrugged, rolling his eyes in the dark. “It’s just junk. Chill.”

Caine’s face went tight, breath coming fast. “Just junk? You think I’m playing with you?” He grabbed Saul by the collar, yanking him upright, the sheets tangling in Saul’s legs.

“Yo, what the fuck! Let go!” Saul tried to twist away, swinging a lazy arm, but Caine was bigger.

“Go fix my shit. Now.” Caine’s voice was low, deadly, the kind that didn’t care about the time or who else was in the house.

Saul slapped at his arm. “It’s just junk, man, I’m tired. Let me sleep—”

Caine yanked again, pulling Saul half off the bed. “I said, go fix it. Don’t make me say it again.”

“Fuck off,” Saul spat, wriggling, voice cracking.

Caine snapped. He hooked his arm around Saul’s neck, choking him, dragging him out of bed. Saul flailed, bare feet smacking the tile, kicking at Caine’s shins. “Let go, man, damn—” Caine dropped him, then punched him hard in the stomach, the sound dull and deep.

Saul crumpled, wheezing, trying to curl up. “Stop—damn! You tripping—”

Caine bent low, voice raw. “I said go fix my shit. Touch my box again, see what happen.”

By now Hector was up, voice pitched and angry. “Caine! Get off my son! What’s wrong with you?”

Caine shoved Hector away, catching him in the shoulder. “Don’t touch me, Hector.”

Saul tried to crawl back on the bed, but Caine was on him again, another fist catching Saul in the ribs.

The commotion exploded. Cruz woke up crying, clutching his little blanket. Hector dove at Caine, fists out, but Caine caught him, shoving him backward so he hit the dresser, cursing. Feet pounded down the hall.

Ximena burst in first, eyes wild, Ada behind her, grabbing Cruz and scooping him up. Rosario in her robe, voice rising in Spanish, all sharp edges. Sara last, hair wild, voice hoarse but full of command.

“¡Basta! Caine—stop it! Enough!” Her voice cut through everything. Caine froze, the old habit coming back strong, obeying his mother even when he hated himself for it.

Hector glared, rubbing his arm. “He don’t need to be here. Throwing hands in the house like un animal. You should leave.”

Caine ignored him. Let the chaos die down. He stalked back to the living room, breath heaving, hands shaking so bad he could barely pick up the journals. He knelt on the carpet, tried to flatten the bent pages, voice in his throat but nowhere to put it.

Sara came in, quiet now, and sat on the couch behind him. Her hand was gentle on his shoulder, but he didn’t look up. He didn’t want to see disappointment, pity, anything.

She spoke soft, hand squeezing once. “What happened, mijo?”

He didn’t trust himself to say more than, “He fucked up my shit.”

Sara let her head fall in her hand, rubbing her forehead, fingers trembling a little. The room was silent but for the clock ticking and the sound of Hector’s angry voice somewhere down the hall.

Caine sat there, shoulders hunched, smoothing the letters and notebooks that held everything he couldn’t say out loud. For a while, no one spoke. And even though the house was full, it felt like he was the only one left awake in the city.
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Post by djp73 » 24 Jul 2025, 05:24

Football :blessed:

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Post by Soapy » 24 Jul 2025, 10:40

The message you submitted was too long, please edit it and resubmit.
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Post by Caesar » 24 Jul 2025, 17:02

Soapy wrote:
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The message you submitted was too long, please edit it and resubmit.
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Should've just read it instead of putting it in ChatGPT. It was double pasted.

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Post by Soapy » 24 Jul 2025, 18:56

that's a parole violation. lock him up.
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