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Post by Caesar » 21 Nov 2025, 09:29

The Devil Woke Me Up This Morning

Trell stood at the edge of the yard with the mug warming his hand, the air heavy around him in a way it only got near the bayou. The morning light slid across Bayou St. John in thin strokes. The surface barely moved, just a slow, lazy drag under a breeze that didn’t decide on a direction. He took a sip. The coffee sat bitter on his tongue, still hot enough to coat the back of his throat. He breathed out and watched the steam drift off.

Behind him the sliding door opened. Ant stepped out and eased it shut with one hand, his palm flattening against the glass. He skirted around the pool, shoulders pulled a little lower than usual, face holding a quiet tired that didn’t need explaining. The water behind him stayed still, blue and untouched this early.

Trell didn’t turn, only tipped his chin once when Ant stopped at his side.

“Where y’all put him?” Trell asked. His voice stayed even.

“Off Chef,” Ant said. “Rigolets side the Lake.”

Trell nodded and brought the mug back up. He watched a pelican drift down toward a half-submerged log, wings spreading, the bird landing with more grace than anything that big had any right to. It settled, head turning once toward them.

“We gonna have a problem with Boogie?” Trell asked. “I know that nigga was his baby mama’s brother.”

Ant scratched his jaw with two fingers. “I don’t know. He ain’t seem too bothered about it, but you know niggas keep that shit in they heart for years.”

Trell’s mouth twitched. Just thought moving. He turned from the water and started walking the short run along the fence. Dew sat on the grass in dull flecks, the blades brushing low against his feet. Ant followed a step behind.

“I ain’t never liked that nigga Junebug anyway,” Trell said. “Man gotta have a code and he ain’t have one. Didn’t matter whether the bitch was twenty-six, thirty-six, or sixteen, he’d put her on the corner.”

“Sixteen might be a little older than some of them,” Ant said.

Trell snorted. The sound came quick, rough, a laugh pulled from someplace dry. “Nasty ass nigga. The world a better place with him decaying in the marsh.”

They reached the back corner where the fence met the last post. Trell touched the iron with his free hand, testing it for no real reason, then let it go.

Ant watched him. “What about your girl?” he asked. “You think she gonna say something to somebody? Junebug beat the brakes off her ass.”

Trell shrugged, one shoulder lifted, dropped. “I’ll find out.”

Ant didn’t say anything after that. Just fell into step again when Trell kept moving.

Trell breathed in, the smell of the bayou carrying damp across the yard, and said, “You know, this could be a good thing. A motherfucking blessing in disguise.” He lifted his hand toward the sky, palm up. “Praise the Lord and all that shit.”

Ant raised an eyebrow. “What you mean?”

Trell walked over to him and tapped the back of his hand against Ant’s chest, light but pointed. “Who Junebug bought heroin from?”

“Us,” Ant said.

Trell nodded. “Right. Which means he bought it from Peanut.”

Ant gave a small nod, the dots settling the same way Trell laid them out.

“A wild nigga like that?” Trell said. “Not really balling? Always asking someone to front him? He’d definitely kill a nigga trying to run off on him.”

Ant took in what Trell was saying. “People gonna say you did that shit because he whooped ol’ girl, though.”

Trell waved that off like it didn’t matter enough to land. “I did that shit because that nigga didn’t understand respect, hierarchy. Order gotta be maintained.”

“I know that,” Ant said. “I’m just saying.”

Trell didn’t let that branch grow. He veered back toward the center of the yard, steps slow through the grass. “Text that nigga Boogie and ask him where Junebug lived,” he said. “Then go get Peanut’s Jesus piece out the storage and bring that shit over there.”

“Alright,” Ant said.

Trell nodded to himself, small, satisfied the way a man looked when the morning finally clicked into place. He lifted the mug again, expecting heat. The coffee had gone cold. Flat. He tilted the mug once, checked the muted sheen of the liquid, then tipped his wrist and let it fall in a loose pour into the grass.

The dark arc soaked straight in. The last drop hit without sound.

~~~

Mireya sat on the couch with one knee bent in, the other stretched out so her ribs didn’t pull. A small pile of Camila’s shirts sat to her left, warm from the dryer. She folded slowly, palms smoothing cotton flat, turning edges in until they held clean lines. The swelling along the side of her face pulled when she blinked. Her lip pulled, too. The split there had gone darker overnight. The bruise under her eye had settled into a full bloom, heavy and purple. Every shift of her body reminded her that the bruises wrapped farther than what she could see.

Her phone lay screen-down beside her. She lifted it and tapped the side button, checking the time. She needed to get ready soon. Sara expected her, and Mireya had to cover all of this before she went to get Camila. She slid the phone back to the floor and reached for another one of Camila’s shirts.

A sudden pounding hit the door. Hard. The frame vibrated. Mireya didn’t move. She kept folding, smoothing the tiny sleeves down with her thumbs. The pounding came again, louder, someone’s fist hitting fast, no pause between.

She pushed up to her feet, careful, slow, not twisting too far. Each step toward the door sent a dull ache through her side. She didn’t bother with the peephole. She unlocked the door and pulled it open, already turning back toward the couch.

Ramon walked in and slammed the door so hard the few pictures on the walls shook. “Why the fuck aren’t you answering my texts?”

Mireya lowered herself onto the couch, legs stiff. She reached into the laundry basket and held up a shirt no bigger than her forearm. “Laundry.”

Ramon stepped closer into the room. His eyes caught her face, lingered on the swollen cheek, the bruise, the split lip. “Fuck happened to you?”

She shrugged once, winced, and kept folding. “You asked me to let you know where Junebug was, didn’t you?”

Ramon’s mouth pulled tight. “And you didn’t. You was on some bullshit just sending ‘it’s done.’”

“Because it is,” Mireya said.

Ramon came farther in, shoes brushing the edge of the laundry pile. “So where is he at? That was the fucking deal. I’ll call Caine right fucking now, Mireya.”

She didn’t react. She grabbed Camila’s little Georgia Southern jersey from the hamper, the dark blue bright where the number ten sat clean in white on the front. She lifted it, held it between her hands. “This is her favorite fucking shirt,” she said. “Would wear it every day if I let her.”

Ramon let out a long breath. “Stop stalling. Where the fuck is Junebug?”

Mireya placed the jersey across her lap and started folding it. “I found him like you asked.” She kept her voice steady. “I went to talk to him… like you asked. Tried to figure out where he hangs … like you asked. Then he beat the shit out of me because of what you asked.”

She set the jersey gently on the pile, lifted her hand and pointed to the bruise around her eye. “Punched me.” She pointed to the other side. “Slapped me.” She tapped her lip. “Threw me against a wall.”

She pushed herself up from the couch, moving slow. She lifted the hem of her shirt to show the mottled bruising spread across her ribs, deep and uneven. “Slammed me on the floor. Kicked me. Probably would’ve killed me.” Her eyes didn’t waver. “But well… I don’t think that’s gonna be a problem again.”

She stepped toward him until her finger was in his face. “All of this because of what you asked. You almost got me killed, Ramon.”

Ramon leaned back a little, nostrils flaring. “I ain’t do shit. All you had to do was text me his lo.”

Mireya nodded once, the motion pulling the cut on her lip. “When you call Caine, make sure you tell him what happened to me because of you.” Her voice stayed even. “Tell him a man tried to kill his child’s mother because you sent her running behind a pimp.”

Ramon let out a sharp laugh, empty of humor. He pointed at her. “I see the play.”

Mireya turned from him, went back to the couch, lowering herself slowly. Camila’s jersey shifted on the pile and slid a little. Mireya moved it back into its place, palm staying on the number.

“So,” she said. “Do you want to call him? We can do it together.”

Ramon took two steps backward toward the door, eyes on her. His hand found the knob. He held it but didn’t turn it yet. “Who did Junebug then?”

Mireya gave a short snort of a laugh. “Isn’t it against some kind of code to talk about that?”

Ramon’s mouth twitched. He chuckled once and pulled the door open. He stepped out and let it slam behind him.

Silence filled the room again. Mireya looked down at the jersey, her fingers brushing over the raised white number, slow and careful.

~~~

Caine walked the sidewalk with his hands in his pockets. Laney had told him to park at the convenience store and walk the rest. So he did. The air was already warming even though the sun hadn’t fully cleared the tops of the pines yet.

He reached the side door and pulled on it. Locked. He leaned in a little, listening. Nothing but the hum of the AC through the wall.

Footsteps moved on the other side of the door, fast and uneven. The lock twisted and the door cracked an inch. Laney slipped into view, hair pulled back quick, eyes wide in a way that didn’t match her usual calm. She yanked it open just enough for him to slide in before shoving it closed and locking it again. Her shoulder hit the door, holding it, her breath catching as she looked through the narrow pane of glass.

“You good?” Caine asked.

She held up one finger without looking at him. “Hold on,” she said. She pushed off the door and moved through the day care, her boots soft against the tile. She reached the kitchen door, unlocked it, opened it just an inch, looked through, then shut it again and relocked it.

She waved him forward with a sharp flick of her hand.

He followed her through the little maze of cubbies and laminated posters. She went straight to the biggest supply closet, opened it, and stepped in. When he followed, she closed the door behind them and hit the light. The bulb hummed, throwing white across shelves stacked with diapers, paper towels, and bins of art supplies.

“Laney,” he said. “Are you good? The fuck are you doing?”

She dragged her hand through her hair, fingers catching for a second before sliding free. She took a breath that shook at the end. “Tommy is home.”

Caine nodded once. “Okay? He was gonna come home eventually. Right?”

“He’s home,” she said again, lower, as if the word carried something else in it. She started pacing, three steps forward, three back, arms folding and unfolding. “I think Blake knows.”

Caine lifted his hands a little. “Blake is on drugs.”

“That don’t matter.” Her voice pitched up, vowels bending tight. “If he says somethin’ then Tommy’s gonna be watchin’.”

“He doesn’t pay attention to you,” Caine said. “Everybody knows that. You know that. I get it. It’s a bit of an issue but c’mon, Laney.”

She stopped and turned, eyes sharp. “No. No, no, no. He’ll know. He might already know. Blake might’ve told him already. The way he looked at me yesterday? This mornin’? He knows.”

She started pacing again. Caine stepped forward and reached out, hand closing around her arm to stop her. “Lane—”

She ripped her arm away so hard her elbow banged a shelf. “No! I’m fuckin’ married!”

Caine lifted both hands, palms out, giving her space.

She stood there breathing fast, chest rising under her T-shirt. She said it again, softer. “I’m fuckin’ married.”

He let the quiet settle before he spoke. “What do you want to do then?”

Laney looked at him, eyes running over his face, his shoulders, the door behind him. The silence stretched until she shook her head. “This is it,” she said. “This ends now. We cain’t do this anymore. We should’a never done it in the first place.”

Caine ran his hand through his dreads, letting it fall at the back of his neck before he dropped it. He nodded once. “You want me to keep working here or nah?”

Laney leaned forward onto a shelf, both hands planted, head hanging down. “You ain’t got a choice ’cause your probation. I’ll just have Mrs. Ethel tell you what to do from now on.”

“Alright, Laney.”

He turned toward the door. At the threshold he glanced back. Her lips were moving in a whisper, thumb rubbing over her wedding ring in tight circles. Her shoulders trembled just once before she steadied them.

Caine shook his head and stepped out into the hallway, moving back through the day care toward the exit.

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Post by Soapy » 21 Nov 2025, 10:33

I'm no street nigga but ain't planting evidence against a nigga like ratting?
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Post by redsox907 » 21 Nov 2025, 13:53

Soapy wrote:
21 Nov 2025, 10:33
I'm no street nigga but ain't planting evidence against a nigga like ratting?
they ain't plating it so he gets caught up with the law. Its so they can pin him for killing Peanut to make his wife happy. Since they slid on P for the business. I thought they was going to pin Ramon with it.

Mireya smart, twisting it like June tuned her up for asking questions lmao. she right, now even if he calls Caine she can turn it right back around on him and the fallout would be worse for Ramon than Mireya.

Steep price tho. How she gonna strip when she can barely walk lmao

Laney paranoid like she guilty or somethin :curtain:

I don't think Tommy knows, she just paranoid. But Blake definitely does

same Cherry that got Nina looking into June there when he got murked? She gonna go to Nina about it thinking she was involved? How's Nina going to feel being involved in a murder. I know she asked him to do it, but its different now that it happened
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Post by Caesar » 23 Nov 2025, 09:47

Soapy wrote:
21 Nov 2025, 10:33
I'm no street nigga but ain't planting evidence against a nigga like ratting?
What sox says below. They're not trying to get the law involved. This a hood thing.
redsox907 wrote:
21 Nov 2025, 13:53
Soapy wrote:
21 Nov 2025, 10:33
I'm no street nigga but ain't planting evidence against a nigga like ratting?
they ain't plating it so he gets caught up with the law. Its so they can pin him for killing Peanut to make his wife happy. Since they slid on P for the business. I thought they was going to pin Ramon with it.

Mireya smart, twisting it like June tuned her up for asking questions lmao. she right, now even if he calls Caine she can turn it right back around on him and the fallout would be worse for Ramon than Mireya.

Steep price tho. How she gonna strip when she can barely walk lmao

Laney paranoid like she guilty or somethin :curtain:

I don't think Tommy knows, she just paranoid. But Blake definitely does

same Cherry that got Nina looking into June there when he got murked? She gonna go to Nina about it thinking she was involved? How's Nina going to feel being involved in a murder. I know she asked him to do it, but its different now that it happened
Mireya playing the "he loves me, you're just a homeboy" strategy :smart:

Guess she's gonna have to lean on her side hustle :pgdead:

You know how much them church teachings hitting when that paranoid starts popping up. Blake knows "something" but does Blake know "the thing?" :hmm:

As we discussed, the hooker's name was Candy.
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Post by Caesar » 23 Nov 2025, 10:26

Count Your Sins

Caine sat on the couch with his heel hooked on the edge of the coffee table, the pen light in his fingers. The apartment was still enough that he could hear the AC push through the vent over his head in a thin, steady rush.

The box sat open on the table, cardboard edges fuzzed from being pulled out and put back. A stack of black-and-blue composition books filled most of it, spines soft from use. One lay open in his lap. He tapped the pen against the margin twice, then set the tip down.

I think, no, I know, that I’m the way I am because of how I grew up, mija.

The letters came out slower than the thought. He watched his hand make the strokes and let the words land before he dragged his mind back over them. The page already held days’ worth of ink, little blocks of his voice.

He sat back an inch, feeling the cushion give under his shoulders.

I spent my entire life fighting for scraps, whether it was food, money or love.

His jaw worked once. Scraps made him think of plastic plates at his grandmother’s table, the way rice stuck to the bottom of the pot, the way she scraped it with a spoon so nothing went to waste. Or his mother skipping meals.

Abuela did the best she could but one person only has so much to give before you start draining them.

He paused with the pen tip resting in a tiny pool of ink.

When I look at mi mama now, I know that she long ago reached the point that she was running on fumes. That’s the difference between fathers and mothers, I think.

He stopped, crossing out fathers once and writing it again. The word looked wrong either way.

Men pull on other’s love more than we give. Women? Mothers?

He punctuated the question mark with more pressure than he needed. The tip scratched.

They get taxed harder than a dude trying to flip his first bird.

The comparison made him huff out a small breath that never turned into a laugh. It was stupid and true at the same time.

Mi mama? Tu mama? The other mothers I’ve met along the way, most of them anyway. They’re giving from a well that empties as soon as it’s filled.

He shifted his foot on the table. The early quiet pressed in.

Yet even though I know this, I still find myself looking for it. Looking for that affection, that softness, because all I’ve ever known is bad, tough, hard living.

He stopped again, eyes on the sentence. His hand went loose around the pen.

It’s crazy how life works.

He scratched that out and rewrote it, cleaner.

It’s crazy how life works, how you can know better and still chase the wrong kind of feeling because it’s the only kind you recognize.

He heard his own hypocrisy in it and let it stand.

I hope when you get to the age that you’re looking for a dude to spend your life with, you don’t find one that crushes you and what love you have to give.

He sat with that last line hanging on the page. The room hummed around it. The AC kicked off and left a quiet so thin he could hear the distant rush of a car on the main road outside the complex. His hand stayed on the paper, fingers resting in the groove of the spiral.

Movement rustled behind him.

Caine turned his head enough to see down the short hall. Mackenzie stepped out of his bedroom with sleep still on her face, eyes half open, one hand pushing her hair out of the way. She wore only a pair of pink boyshorts, the elastic sitting low on her hips. Her steps were soft on the carpet as she padded toward the kitchen.

She didn’t look at him at first. She pulled the fridge open, the light catching on the curve of her shoulder, and grabbed the first bottle of water she saw. Plastic cracked in her grip as she twisted the cap off. She tipped her head back and drank deep at the sink, throat working, one hand braced on the counter.

The faucet dripped once beside her wrist. Somewhere in the building a door shut. Caine watched her, pen still balanced between his fingers, the journal open on his lap.

Mackenzie set the half-empty bottle on the counter and turned.

She caught him looking. “Why you up so early?” she asked, voice rough with sleep, words dragging just a little.

Caine shrugged, one shoulder lifting and falling. “This always when I get up.”

She squinted at him for a second like she was trying to do the math on that. Then she shook her head, lips pulling into a crooked smile.

“That’s fucking crazy, bro,” she said, grabbing the bottle again.

She padded back down the hall the same way she’d come. He listened to the soft thump of her feet, the springs in the mattress protesting when she flopped back onto the bed. The apartment settled into quiet again, the kind that left him alone with what he had just written.

He looked back at the journal. The ink on the last line had dried shiny and then gone flat. He read the paragraph once more from the top, then closed the notebook with a soft slap and let his palm rest on the cover a beat longer than he needed to.

The pen slipped into the wire binding. He leaned forward and set the journal gently into the box with the others, the stack shifting just enough to make room. Cardboard rasped under his fingers. He nudged the lid closed.

~~~

Ramon pulled up to the community center and let the car idle a second before he killed the engine. Morning sat heavy on the block. Heat already climbing, making the air over the pavement shimmer in a way that promised worse by noon.

He sat with both hands on the wheel for a beat, fingers curled around it, jaw working. The last few days had been more motion than rest.

Junebug was dead.

He had run the words different ways in his head, trying to decide which version belonged to Nina. None of them sounded right. He could hear her asking again, the way she had in the apartment, needing a win, needing something to land different for once. He could still hear Mireya too, the way she said he almost got her killed. Both voices sat in the car with him, crowding the space.

Ramon blew out a breath, reached for the door handle, and stepped out into the thick air. The smell hit him quick. Old grease from the little kitchen inside. Mop water somebody had thrown out earlier. A sour edge drifting from the alley. Somewhere close by, a bus wheezed as it pulled off.

He locked the car with a short chirp and crossed the sidewalk. The front door stood open, box fan jammed in the frame, rattling as it pushed warm air around. Inside, the lobby felt emptier than it usually did. No kids at the computers. No ball bouncing faint in the gym. Just a volunteer at the desk scrolling on her phone, the quiet making every move sound louder.

“Morning,” he said, just enough voice to carry.

She looked up, blinked, and gave a small nod back, then went right back to the screen. He kept moving, sneaker soles squeaking once on the waxed floor as he made his way down the hall. The bulletin boards were full of flyers about after-school programs and free lunches.

He stopped outside Nina’s office and knocked twice on the doorframe before leaning in. Papers sat in a loose stack on her desk. Nina was behind them, head bent, pen in hand. Her braids were pulled up today, the ends brushing the crown of her head. A mug sat near her elbow, coffee ring on a notepad.

She looked up fast, eyes narrowing in that way she had when she was trying to read a situation before it walked all the way in. “What you doing here?” she asked.

Ramon kept his hand on the frame. “Can I talk to you for a minute?”

Something in his face must have given him away. Her expression shifted, the muscles around her mouth tightening. She capped her pen and set it down, then stood.

“Come on,” she said.

She stepped past him into the hall, closing the office door behind her with a soft click. He fell in a half step behind her as she led the way toward the back. Their footsteps echoed off the cinderblock walls. A kid’s voice floated faint from somewhere deeper in the building and then faded. The back door groaned when she pushed it, light cutting in sharp as they moved outside.

Out behind the center, the concrete slab ran along the building, stained from years of rain and whatever else had been thrown out here. A dumpster sat wedged near the corner, lid cracked.

Nina turned to face him, folding her arms over her chest. “What’s wrong?” she asked.

Ramon looked at her and didn’t rush it. His tongue pressed against his teeth once. Then he let the words drop.

“Junebug dead,” he said. “You can tell Candy she ain’t gotta worry about him no more.”

Nina’s mouth opened, but nothing came out at first. Her eyes moved over his face, searching for something there, then past him toward the parking lot, like maybe she expected to see proof. A whole mess of reactions crossed her features faster than words could. Shock. Relief. Something close to dread. Her hand twitched at her side and she dragged it up, fingers pushing into her hair.

He let her have the moment, standing still, shoulders loose, watching her work through it.

“Did you…” She stopped and swallowed, throat tight. “Did you ki—did you kill him?”

Ramon shook his head once. “Nah,” he said. “I ain’t do it. From what I heard, he was kekeing about the wrong niggas. You know how shit go in the streets.”

The answer didn’t settle anything in her eyes. She narrowed them, studying him harder now. The morning light picked up a sheen of sweat at her hairline.

“I feel like you’re lying to me,” she said.

He huffed a small sound, not quite a laugh. “You know I wouldn’t lie about not killing a nigga selling bitches on the corner,” he said. “I’m mad I ain’t kill that nigga myself, but life like that sometimes.”

Nina blew out a long breath through her nose. Her shoulders dropped and then rose again as she dragged her hand all the way through her hair, fingers catching for a second. She looked past him toward the street, then back.

“So, what now?” she asked.

Ramon rolled one shoulder and let it fall. “You forget that nigga ever existed.”

Her mouth pulled to the side. “But it’s kinda my fault that—” She cut herself off. “Ain’t it?”

He shook his head, slow. “How? Plenty of niggas you know some way get killed. Just because you asked me to find him don’t mean you connected to his ass getting murked.”

Nina stared at a crack in the concrete between them. Her foot nudged a loose pebble, sending it skittering. “He probably had family, though,” she said, voice lower.

“So?” Ramon asked. “So do the bitches he had turning tricks, doped up, dying from fent. He ain’t care about they families. You shouldn’t care about his.”

Nina nodded once, then again, like she was trying to make her body agree even if her face couldn’t catch up. It was clear the words sat heavy anyway. She turned toward the door, fingers finding the handle, and paused.

“Do you feel bad about it at all?” she asked, not looking back yet.

Ramon didn’t hesitate. “No,” he said. “Fuck that nigga. He can rest in piss.”

She stood there another second, shoulders tight, then pulled the door open and stepped inside. The frame caught the sound when it closed behind her. The hum from the fan swallowed whatever noise she made once she was gone.

Ramon stayed where he was and drew a breath deep enough that it pushed his chest out. The air tasted stale and hot. He dug into his pocket, fingers finding the joint he had twisted earlier. He slipped it between his lips, sparked it up, and pulled until the paper crackled.

Smoke burned in his throat, then eased on the exhale. He started walking, circling around the building toward the lot where his car waited.

~~~

Mireya walked the last stretch of the path with the wind pushing off the lake and cutting across her skin. The sun hit the water in hard flashes, the surface rolling in broken sheets that slapped the stone steps just below the concrete ledge. The air tasted faintly of brine and old metal. A gull cut across the sky and settled on one of the posts near the edge, flapping once before it dug its claws in.

Trell sat on a bench facing the water. One ankle rested across his knee, sunglasses on, shoulders set low. He didn’t move when she came up the path, but she saw the quick shift of his head, that small flick of awareness he never turned off. The breeze caught the edge of his shirt and pushed it against his back.

She eased down next to him, careful with the movement. Her ribs tugged when she bent, a dull pressure under the skin. It had been a few days, just long enough for the bruises to fade under the makeup and the ache to settle into something she could work around. Not gone. Just manageable.

Trell glanced at her from the corner of his eye. “You good?”

Mireya shrugged. “As good as I expected to be.”

Trell nodded once, then faced the lake again. His knee bounced once and stilled. “You got a problem with what happened to you?”

The question landed with no weight on his voice. She kept her eyes on the water. The lake pushed up against the bottom step, each wave rolling over the lip and pulling back. A couple jogged past them without looking.

“No,” she said. “I hope they catch the dickhead that t-boned my friend’s car.”

Trell turned his head fully toward her. He pulled his sunglasses off with two fingers, letting them hang. He stared at her long enough that she felt the focus settle on her face, then lower. He was checking for any wobble, any slip.

She met his eyes without shifting.

“When’d that happen?” he asked.

“Sunday morning,” she said, voice steady. “We were coming back from Baton Rouge. Happened on the River Road.”

Trell snorted a laugh and pushed his sunglasses back on. He leaned back into the bench, shoulders loosening. “Hopefully you not fucked up too bad.”

She breathed through the soreness in her ribs and kept her gaze on the water. “Fucked up enough that I can’t go to work.”

“Why you can’t go to work?” he asked.

Mireya lifted her hand and gestured toward her ribs. The motion tugged again, sharp enough she had to tighten her jaw for a second. “Kinda hard to spin on a fucking pole and shake your ass when you can’t move your body.”

Trell shrugged and let his arm stretch along the back of the bench behind her. His fingers hung near her shoulder. “You don’t need to move your body to lay on your back and you for damn sure don’t need it for your mouth.”

She didn’t look at him for that. The lake sent another wave up the steps, spraying a thin mist that drifted past them.

“It’s fine,” she said. “I got midterms this week, anyway. I could use the extra sleep.”

Trell leaned closer, just enough that she could feel the shift of air near her. “You’re getting money already, Mireya. You not meant for no fucking school. You meant for bigger shit than that. Look at how you handle yourself.”

He jerked his chin toward the campus behind them. “Go find me any chick on that campus that does what they need to do to make it happen. No, they gonna go cry to mommy and daddy for the credit card.”

Mireya stayed quiet. Her ribs ached with each slow breath, but it was steady. Trell’s words sat in the space between them. She kept her eyes on the lake even as something in her chest pulled tight at the praise. She didn’t show it. It still landed somewhere inside.

“That’s the sexiest shit about you,” he said. “Ain’t too many bad bitches lowkey hood bitches, too.”

She snorted a laugh, brushing a loose strand of hair off her cheek. “Well, I’ll keep that in mind if I fail these midterms.”

Trell shook his head, a small smile at the edge of his mouth. She pushed her palms against the bench to get up. The motion forced her ribs to drag with it, but she kept her face still. Trell’s arm fell back to his side.

He looked up. “You coming fuck with us this weekend?”

“No,” Mireya said. “I’ll be in Georgia.”

Trell laughed. “Damn, you getting flew out to the A? Rapper? Basketball nigga?”

She laughed once. “I wish it was Atlanta.”

She turned toward the path and started walking back toward campus, the lake wind pushing her hair across her shoulders. The ache in her ribs moved with each step, but she kept her pace steady. The sun climbed higher behind her, bright against the water as she headed back.

~~~

Laney sat on the edge of Taela’s couch with her elbows on her knees, fingers laced together so tight the knuckles showed pale. She shifted her weight, the cushion dipping under her. The air carried the faint smell of whatever Taela had cooked that morning, something sweet that clung to the walls. A slow ceiling fan pushed warm air in lazy circles above them.

From the kitchen came the sound of ice bumping against glass. Taela’s flip-flops slapped against the tile as she moved. She appeared a moment later holding two tall glasses of sweet tea, her belly pushing ahead of her before the rest of her body caught up. The T-shirt she wore had climbed up over her stomach again. She tugged it down with the back of her wrist as she stepped into the living room.

Laney snorted when she saw her. “Look at you turnin’ into a whole homemaker. Guess that baby’s ‘bout to jump right on outta ya.”

Taela rolled her eyes as she leaned forward to set the glasses on the coffee table. A small grunt left her as she straightened. “More like I take any damn chance I get to sit my behind down. This lil motherfucker about to get served an eviction notice today.”

Laney shook her head, a smile tugging at the corner of her mouth. “You ain’t gettin’ no sympathy from me till you pop out two mo’ after that one.”

Taela gave her a tired look before lowering herself carefully into the recliner. The chair creaked as she eased back, hands bracing the armrests. She let out a breath through her teeth. “Bo better go get himself a fleshlight, because these here legs about to be closed for the rest of his life.”

Laney burst out laughing, her shoulders shaking. The laugh softened, fading into a small exhale. Silence crept in after, not heavy, just long enough that the hum of the fridge in the kitchen filled the space. Outside, a bird chirped loud, then quieted.

Laney’s fingers tapped lightly against her knee. She wet her lips, hesitating. “Can I tell you somethin’?”

Taela cocked her head, giving her a tired but amused look. “Laney, we been best friends too damn long for you to think you gotta ask me that.”

Laney drew in a breath and let it leak out slow. Her leg bounced once before she stopped it with her palm. “You cain’t freak out, though.”

Taela pushed herself upright in the recliner with a grunt, her expression shifting to something sharper. “Delaney. You doing a terrible job making sure I don’t freak out. Tell me.”

Laney’s throat worked as she swallowed. “I was havin’ an affair wi—”

“That fucking guy you got working for you,” Taela snapped in, pointing a finger. “I knew it.”

Laney jerked back a little. “What you mean you knew it?”

Taela shrugged like she didn’t even have to think about it. “He’s your type. More your type than Tommy anyway.”

Laney’s brows pulled together. “He’s eighteen.”

“And you twenty-seven,” Taela shot back without missing a beat. “Ain’t like you plucked him out of a high school parking lot.”

Laney rolled her eyes hard, leaning back into the couch, arms folding under her chest. “My type is my husband.”

Taela raised both brows at her, the expression sharp enough to cut through the room’s quiet. “What about Marshall?”

Laney felt her jaw go tight before the words even came. She shifted on the couch, spreading her fingers against her thigh. “That was different.”

Taela leaned back but didn’t look away, eyes narrowing just a touch. The stare wasn’t mean, just long enough to make Laney feel pinned under it.

“Okay,” Taela said slowly. “And Jus—”

Laney cut her off with a quick flick of her hand. “Different,” she said again, sharper this time. She sucked in a breath, shoulders lifting. “This is different.”

Taela eased her hands up in a little surrender, her belly shifting under her shirt as she adjusted how she sat. “You said was, so you cut him off?”

Laney nodded, though the motion came out small, her chin dipping once. Her foot tapped against the rug before she stilled it. “I’m married. I ain’t gon’ ruin my marriage for a lil’ bit of sex.”

Taela tilted her head, lips pressing together as she studied her. She squinted, like she could see more than Laney wanted to show. “I mean…” She paused, letting the words settle between them. “Was it a lil’ bit of good sex, though?”

Laney shut her eyes for a beat, the breath she took lifting her chest slow. Her jaw flexed once before she looked back at Taela. “Taela,” she said, voice low, that rural edge thickening around the vowels, “focus.”

“I am focused,” Taela said, reaching for her glass and pulling it onto her belly as a resting surface. “I’m just saying, if I’m being real with you? Might not be the worst thing in the world for Tommy to divorce you.”

Laney’s head snapped up. “Taela. I cain’t get divorced. Absolutely not.”

Taela shrugged, taking a slow sip of tea. The ice shifted against her lip. “Well, next time you do something like this, tell me from the beginning so I can live through you.”

Laney blew out a breath and reached for her own drink. The glass was cold against her fingers as she lifted it, condensation sliding down onto her palm. She took a small sip, the sweetness hitting her tongue first, then the cold settling in her chest as she swallowed.
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Post by redsox907 » 23 Nov 2025, 15:43

Caesar wrote:
23 Nov 2025, 10:26
“What about Marshall?”
KNEW IT WASNT THIS BITCHES FIRST RODEO ON THE ADULTERY TRAIN :kghah:

#soxstradamous strikes again

We'll see how Nina handles the knowledge that she got someone killed. She didn't put the hit out and her man might not have done it, but she set it in motion. Could it have happened eventually? Definitely. But she sparked it early.

Caine moving on already tracks. Like he hinted at in his journal, he's searching for love to fill the hole he has from childhood. Sara is a great mother, but circumstance forced her to be absent. He gonna keep searching in every hole he can find until he gets it :kghah:

Curious what the depth of the Marshall stuff is for Laney. Almost sounds like Marshall was a fling where as she lost herself in the stuff with Caine. Talea right, Tommy leaving her ass wouldn't be the worst thing. But we all know guys like Tommy, they don't just leave.

More like murder the family and burn the house down with him inside it type beat imo
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Post by Captain Canada » 23 Nov 2025, 18:12

Of course Laney been fucking :drose:

Here we go, the rodeo has officially started.
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Post by djp73 » 23 Nov 2025, 20:40

Caine in his feelings
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Post by Caesar » 23 Nov 2025, 22:31

redsox907 wrote:
23 Nov 2025, 15:43
Caesar wrote:
23 Nov 2025, 10:26
“What about Marshall?”
KNEW IT WASNT THIS BITCHES FIRST RODEO ON THE ADULTERY TRAIN :kghah:

#soxstradamous strikes again

We'll see how Nina handles the knowledge that she got someone killed. She didn't put the hit out and her man might not have done it, but she set it in motion. Could it have happened eventually? Definitely. But she sparked it early.

Caine moving on already tracks. Like he hinted at in his journal, he's searching for love to fill the hole he has from childhood. Sara is a great mother, but circumstance forced her to be absent. He gonna keep searching in every hole he can find until he gets it :kghah:

Curious what the depth of the Marshall stuff is for Laney. Almost sounds like Marshall was a fling where as she lost herself in the stuff with Caine. Talea right, Tommy leaving her ass wouldn't be the worst thing. But we all know guys like Tommy, they don't just leave.

More like murder the family and burn the house down with him inside it type beat imo
"That was different" !!!! We need the details.

Gonna be tough for a civilian

Nooticers would nootice that every time Caine has been rejected, he has immediately gone and smashed someone else (Janae when Mireya first hinted she was going to break up with him and now Mackenzie [plus her friends] twice from Laney). That's just how our guy copes :curtain: But at least he didn't call up Rylee, give him some points for that.

Taela was saying a second name before Laney cut her off. Just FYI.

Yeah those types are always the murder-suicide ones.
Captain Canada wrote:
23 Nov 2025, 18:12
Of course Laney been fucking :drose:

Here we go, the rodeo has officially started.
Completely normal act in life :smh:

:yep: Building toward the season finale now boys.
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23 Nov 2025, 20:40
Caine in his feelings
Can we blame him? :smh:
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