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Post by Caesar » 09 Apr 2026, 05:48

Tami Kal / Tlalli Miktok

Fredo Bang knocked through the speakers with the bass turned low enough to feel but not enough to carry past the windows. Ramon had the seat pushed back, one hand on the wheel even though the car sat parked and cold, engine off, the lot spread out in front of them under yellow light that made everything look sick. Tyree leaned against the back door with his hood bunched behind his neck, knees wide, scrolling his phone with his thumb moving in long pulls.

Caine sat in the passenger seat with arms crossed over his chest. He watched the lot through the windshield. A rig idled two rows over with its running lights on and nobody in the cab. The video poker room across the street had its neon half-dead, the P and the R flickering out of time with each other so the sign read _OKE_in stuttered pink.

"Son, I hate niggas that’s always lying about time," Tyree said. He didn't look up from his phone. "That nigga Zo said he was gonna text me back in ten minutes twenty minutes ago."

Ramon shifted his jaw once but didn't answer. He tapped the steering wheel with two fingers, keeping time with something that wasn't the song.

Headlights swept the far end of the lot and turned in. A sedan nosed between two parked trucks and rolled to a stop near the curb closest to the poker room. The engine cut. A man stepped out, zipped his jacket to his throat, and crossed the street without looking back. The poker room door opened and swallowed him in a band of light and the muffled punch of a slot machine cycling.

Ramon looked at Caine as Caine looked at the sedan.

Caine pulled the gloves from the pocket of his hoodie and worked them on, tugging each finger tight until the leather sat flush against his knuckles. He reached up and pulled the hood over his head, settling it forward until it cut the top of his vision. He opened the door and stepped out.

The cold hit his face as his shoes found the asphalt and he moved across the lot in a straight line, shoulders loose, stride even. A semi shifted gears somewhere on the highway overpass above and the sound rolled down through the dark like distant thunder.

He came alongside the sedan. It sat alone in the space, paint catching the yellow lot light in dull streaks. He reached for the handle and pulled. Locked. He let it go and reached into the front of his hoodie, fingers closing around the thin metal shim he'd tucked flat against his ribs.

He slid it into the doorjamb, working the flat edge down between the rubber seal and the frame. His hands moved with patience. The shim found the latch mechanism and he angled it, pressed, and felt the catch give. The lock popped and he pulled the door open.

The alarm hit the lot, high and shrill, the horn cycling fast, headlights flashing in rhythm. Caine was already inside, knees on the pavement, his upper body folded under the steering column. He gripped the plastic panel beneath the wheel and ripped it down. The screws stripped and the panel cracked along a seam and came free in his hands. He dropped it on the floorboard.

Wires hung in a loose bundle, color-coded, some taped together in pairs. He found the alarm harness first, a thicker cluster running to the left. He grabbed it and pulled hard. The connector resisted, then tore loose with a dry pop. The alarm died mid-cycle, cutting out so fast the silence felt louder than the noise had been.

His fingers sorted the remaining wires by feel. He stripped two with his thumbnail through the glove leather, twisted them together, and held the connection. The dash lights flickered on. He found the starter wire, touched it to the pair, and the engine turned over once, caught, and settled into an idle that shook the steering column against his forearms.

He pulled himself up into the seat and adjusted the mirror. The rig still idled two rows back. The poker room sign still stuttered. Nobody had come to a window. Nobody had stepped outside.

He put the car in gear and rolled it across the lot to where Ramon's car sat. He pulled alongside and left the engine running.

Ramon and Tyree got out of Ramon's car in the same motion, doors opening and closing with two flat sounds that overlapped. Tyree slid into the back seat of the stolen car and pulled the door shut. Ramon came around to the passenger side, opened the door, and dropped into the seat.

Caine's hand rested on the wheel. The engine hummed under them, steady now, the shake worked out.

"You got the address?" Caine asked.

Ramon nodded once. "Yeah, I got it."

~~~


Mireya pulled to the curb across from the traphouse and put the car in park. The engine ticked under the hood, the heat gauge already climbing from the drive across the bridge. She leaned forward and looked through the windshield at the driveway. Trell's car wasn't there.

She shook her head and cut the engine. The keys bit into her palm as she pulled them free and dropped them into her purse. She pushed the door open and stepped out, the cold pressing through her jeans where the fabric pulled tight at her thighs.

She crossed the street and took the steps up to the porch two at a time then pushed the front door open and walked in.

A woman sat on the floor near the couch with her back against the wall, her legs folded under her. She had a belt cinched around her left bicep, the leather pulled tight with her teeth while her free hand worked a needle into the crook of her arm. Her face had the architecture of someone who'd been pretty once, cheekbones still sharp under skin that had gone sallow, hair that might have been thick pulled into a knot that was mostly rubber band. The needle found its mark. She pressed the plunger and her eyes fluttered, lids heavy, her head tipping back against the plaster. The belt slipped from between her teeth and hung loose from her arm.

Two of Trell's guys stood over her, arms folded, watching. One of them had a toothpick pinched between his front teeth. The other leaned against the wall to the hallway with his shoulder, his eyes running over the woman.

The woman's head rolled forward. She blinked twice, slow, her pupils swallowing most of the color in her eyes. She looked up at the two of them and nodded, the motion loose and uncoordinated.

"Alright," she said. "I'm ready."

She got to her feet in pieces, one hand bracing on the wall, one knee straightening before the other caught up. She swayed once and steadied. The two guys didn't reach for her. They just waited until she started walking toward the back of the house where the bedrooms were, her steps uneven on the floor, and then they followed, smiles pulling at their mouths as they disappeared down the hallway.

Mireya watched them go, her jaw shifting once and she turned away from the hallway.

Yola and Shad stood at the far end of the living room around a folding table covered in loose cash and a digital scale. Yola leaned over the table with both palms flat on the surface, his chain swinging forward from his neck. Shad sat in a chair on the other side with his elbows on his knees, hands pressed together between them. They were deep into something, voices low, heads close.

They noticed her at the same time. Yola straightened first, his palms lifting off the table, his face opening into a grin.

"I ain't expect to see your fine ass in here today," Yola said. "You come to let a nigga get some of that mouth?"

Shad shook his head, one hand coming up to rub the bridge of his nose. "That's a wild way to talk to people, bruh."

He looked at Mireya and held his hands up, palms out, fingers spread. "I ain't trying to be Dez or nothing. Just saying it's crazy."

Mireya waved the comments off with a flick of her wrist, her fingers cutting the air and dropping. "Y'all know where Trell is?"

Yola shook his head. "He went to Lafayette with Ant and Scotty the other day. Don't know where he at now."

Shad leaned back in his chair and crossed one ankle over his knee. "He probably back. Just call him."

Mireya glanced down at the phone in her hand.

Yola's eyes dropped to it, then came back up to her face. His grin stretched wider. "Damn, that nigga blocked you?" He spread his hands. "So, you a free agent now?"

Mireya didn't give him anything back. "Can y'all tell him that I passed by here when y'all see him?"

The two of them looked at one another. The glance held for a beat, Yola's grin flattening into something more honest, Shad's mouth pressing into a line that said the same thing.

Mireya left that where it lay.

Shad nodded. "Yeah, I got you."

"Thanks," Mireya said.

She turned and started for the door. Her hand was on the knob when Yola's voice caught her from behind.

"Mireya."

She stopped and angled her head enough to see him over her shoulder.

"You ain't answer if you was gonna let a nigga hit," Yola said. He spread his arms wide, palms up, chest open. "I been on a drought for a lil' minute. What's up?"

Mireya's mouth pulled to one side. She let a beat pass before she answered, her voice easy. "I got some things to take care of right now. Text me later and I'll come see you."

Yola smiled, his tongue pressing against the inside of his cheek. "Bet."

Mireya opened the door, stepped through, and closed it behind her. The latch caught with a soft sound and the noise from inside went muffled.

She walked to her car and opened the driver's door, dropping into the seat, pulling the door shut. Cold pressed in from every surface, the steering wheel icy under her fingers when she wrapped both hands around it.

Her right hand started first. A tremor that began in her fingertips, small enough to miss, then moved into her palm, the muscles jumping on their own, then climbed to her wrist where it stayed and shook against the leather of the wheel. She watched it. Her left hand tightened on the other side, knuckles pressing pale against her skin.

She breathed in through her nose, held it, let it go through her mouth. Then again, slower. The air in the car tasted stale and cold.

She reached up and flipped the rearview mirror down. Her own face looked back at her. She held the stare for a long second, searching whatever she found there, and then shook her head once.

She flipped the mirror back up. The trembling had stopped. Then she jammed the key into the ignition and turned the car on.

~~~


Sara had her feet tucked under her on the couch, coffee mug balanced on her knee, the ceramic warm through the fabric of her jeans. Nicole sat on the other end with one leg folded beneath her and the other stretched out, her heel resting on the edge of the cushion. Light pushed through the blinds and striped the carpet between them.

"I'm so glad Markus was able to get things to move so quickly this time around with getting Caine's probation transferred," Sara said. She brought the mug to her mouth and took a sip, her thumb rubbing the handle.

Nicole nodded. "Louisiana didn't have a leg to stand on. Demanding that he return for one year after letting him spend two years in Georgia just sounds stupid."

Sara laughed, the sound quick and loose, her shoulders lifting once. "Is that the legal term for it?"

Nicole laughed too, her hand coming up to press against her collarbone. "Yeah, it's one of the first things you learn in law school. 'Don't tell the judge something that sounds stupid because they hate that.'"

Sara shook her head, the last of it fading from her mouth. She took another sip and set the mug on the coffee table, pushing it back from the edge with her fingertips. Nicole's laugh settled into a breath and then nothing. The refrigerator hummed from the kitchen. A car passed below the window, bass thumping once through the floor and moving on.

Nicole looked over at Sara. Her fingers drummed once on her own knee and stopped.

"Are we going to talk about the elephant in the room?" Nicole said.

Sara kept her eyes on the mug she'd just put down. "I had no problem just letting it hang around until it died of starvation in the corner."

Nicole rolled her eyes, her head tilting with the motion. "I'll just say it then." She squared her shoulders and turned more fully toward Sara on the cushion. "I don't think being with women is in your DNA."

Sara snorted a laugh through her nose. "I feel like I should take that as an insult."

Nicole's hands came up fast, palms out, fingers spread. "No, no, no. You were good. It was good." Her hands dropped back to her lap and she paused. "You just don't have that..." She waved one hand in a loose circle between them. "I don't know. You can just tell."

Sara's eyes narrowed. She held the look, her chin dipping a fraction, letting the words sit in the air between them without touching them. Nicole's hand finished its circle and fell to the cushion.

Then Sara laughed, her whole face opening with it. "Glad you said it because I was gonna say the same thing." She pulled her feet out from under her and planted them on the carpet. "We're too soft. I need solid. A man's solid."

Nicole put her hand to her chest, her shoulders dropping, a long breath pushing out of her that she'd been holding since she'd opened her mouth. "Girl, you had me thinking you about to throw me out."

Sara tilted her head, one eyebrow lifting. "I mean, I'm still going to keep you around just in case I change my mind."

Nicole's laugh came from deep in her chest. She pressed both palms to her knees and leaned back into the cushion. "Happy to hear that I'm at the top of the list for the extremely unlikely possibility that you start playing for the other team."

Sara pushed herself up from the couch, her hands pressing into the cushion on either side of her thighs. "C'mon. Let's go get something to eat. I need to be moving around with Caine leaving tomorrow or I'm gonna start getting into my feelings."

Nicole straightened up, already reaching for her phone on the coffee table. "Oh, we should try that new place on Vets."

Sara grabbed her keys from the side table and Nicole followed her off the couch, the cushions rising back to level behind them. They crossed the room together, Nicole tucking her phone into her back pocket, Sara pulling the door open with the keys already threaded between her fingers.

~~~


Saul swung into the parking spot next to Zoe's car and killed the engine. The outlets in Gonzales stretched out ahead of him, storefronts running in a long curve under an overcast sky, shoppers moving between the buildings with bags pulling at their arms. He pushed his door open and stepped out, the cold catching his face and his knuckles where he gripped the doorframe.

He reached into the car and pulled the safety vest off over his shoulders, the reflective strips catching what light came through the clouds. He balled it up and tossed it onto the passenger seat, then shut the door. His hoodie smelled like cardboard and the chemical tang of the packing line, sweat dried into the collar from the first half of his shift.

Zoe sat behind her steering wheel, watching him. She lifted two fingers off the wheel and pointed toward the passenger side of her car. He walked around the hood and opened the door, dropping into the seat and pulling it shut behind him.

The heat in her car hit him first. The vents blew steady and warm, pushing air across his chest and his hands where he rested them on his thighs. His own heater barely worked past a lukewarm wheeze that fogged the windshield more than it did anything for his body. He let his shoulders drop and pressed his back into the seat.

Zoe gestured at him, her eyes moving over the hoodie, the dust on his jeans, the creased line the vest straps had pressed into his shoulders. "You got a job?"

Saul nodded. "Yeah, up the road. Doing packing for the plants."

"That's good." She turned the wheel of the volume knob on the stereo until the music dropped to nothing. "How's your kid and your baby mama?"

"Good. Can't complain."

He rubbed his palms together, working the warmth from the vents into his fingers. He looked at her, his head tilting against the headrest. "What you just showing up here for?"

Zoe's hands settled on the bottom of the steering wheel. Her thumbs tapped the leather once and stopped. "To tell you I don't know where Kayjuan and Maine went. They disappeared after the shooting."

Saul's jaw pulled tight. He turned his head toward the windshield, watching a woman push a stroller past the hood of the car, a shopping bag swinging from the handle. "After your boyfriend and his friend shot your friends, you mean."

Zoe's hands came off the wheel. "Don't put that on me." Her voice hit the inside of the car hard enough that the words seemed to bounce. "I ain't start selling weed then set your plug up to get robbed."

"He was trying to extort me," Saul said.

"You know how you don't get extorted?" Zoe turned in her seat, one knee pulling up onto the cushion, her body angling toward him. "Don't be a fucking criminal."

Saul looked at her and his mouth pressed into a line and he let the air in the car fill the space where his answer would have gone.

"I don't know what you're telling me this for," he said.

Zoe's head dropped back against her headrest. She closed her eyes for a second, opened them, and looked at him long enough for the silence to do all the work. "So you fucking know that ain't nobody coming to look for you. God damn. You're slow as fuck."

Saul rubbed the back of his neck, his fingers digging into the muscle there. "Sounds like you trying to set me up or something."

Zoe shook her head, chin sweeping left and back. "Nah. I can't be bothered with that." She pulled her knee back down and faced the windshield, both hands returning to the wheel, gripping it now instead of resting on it. "I'm just done considering you a friend because your cousin's boys had me face down in the dirt with a gun to my head, too."

Saul's eyes dropped to his lap. His thumb worked the seam of his jeans, pressing the denim flat against his thigh, finding the stitch and running along it. "I didn't know they were going to do all that."

Zoe shrugged, one shoulder lifting and falling. Her grip on the wheel loosened and she let her hands slide to the bottom of it, fingers lacing together. "When you ask hood niggas for solutions, they're gonna give you hood nigga solutions."

~~~


Ramon held the pistol out across the center console, grip first. Caine took it and checked the magazine, slapped it back in, and racked the slide. He pulled his hood up over his dreads and tugged the neck gaiter from around his throat up over his nose and mouth, the fabric settling against his cheekbones.

Ramon and Tyree flipped their hoods up. They pulled ski masks down from where they'd been bunched at their foreheads, the fabric stretching over their faces and tucking into the collars of their hoodies. Ramon adjusted his until the eye holes sat right. Tyree did the same and flexed his jaw under the material.

They got out of the car. The doors closed in three sounds spaced a beat apart, none of them slammed, all of them pulled shut by hand. They walked down the street together, staying where the trees threw shadows across the sidewalk and the streetlights didn't reach. Houses lined both sides, set back behind iron fences and trimmed hedges, driveways holding expensive cars.

Caine pointed at the side of a house where the gap between it and the fence ran narrow and dark. They moved single file along the wall, ducking under windows, their shoulders brushing stucco. The fence at the back was wrought iron, waist height. Caine grabbed the top rail with both hands and swung over. His shoes hit grass on the other side without a sound. Ramon came next, then Tyree.

The backyard opened up. A pool stretched across the center of the yard, the water dark and still, dimly light from below. Beyond the fence, Bayou St. John ran flat and black in both directions.

Caine crossed the yard to the glass doors at the back of the house. He pressed his face close to the glass and scanned the wall inside, the corners near the door, the space above the frame. He looked for a keypad, a sensor, a blinking light. He stepped back and looked at Ramon and Tyree and shook his head.

"It's probably tempered," Ramon said, his voice barely above the sound of the bayou moving behind them.

Caine nodded.

Tyree pointed at a window above them, smaller, set into the wall at shoulder height. He walked to a planter near the fence and picked up a brick from the border, dirt crumbling from its edges. He came back to the window and hit the glass with the flat of the brick. The pane cracked in a web from the impact point but held. He hit it again and the pieces broke inward, falling onto a surface inside with flat sounds. He reached through the frame and knocked the remaining shards out with the side of his hand, glass tinkling onto tile, then found the latch inside and turned it. He pushed the window up, jumped, caught the sill with both forearms, and pulled himself through.

Caine and Ramon waited. A few seconds passed. Footsteps moved through the house, muffled by walls, then the lock on the glass door clicked and the door slid open. Tyree stood on the other side and stepped back to let them in.

They moved through the kitchen, shoes on white marble that threw their reflections back at them in dark shapes. The living room spread wide, the same marble running through it, furniture low and modern, everything placed and clean. Caine pointed down the hallway that opened off the far side.

"Bedrooms," he said.

They walked down the hall. Closed doors on both sides. At the end, the last door sat cracked, and through the gap came sounds that carried no ambiguity. A woman's voice, pitched and rhythmic. A headboard tapping the wall in a steady beat.

Caine raised the pistol. He stepped back, planted his foot, and kicked the door in. The frame splintered where the latch had held and the door swung open and hit the wall. Caine swung into the room with the gun up and leveled.

Trell looked around the naked woman on top of him. His hand shot to her back and pressed her body flat against his chest, covering himself with her. His other hand reached for the nightstand drawer.

Ramon fired. The shot punched into the nightstand and blew a chunk of wood out of the corner. The drawer jumped in its track. Trell pulled his hand back and held it up, fingers spread.

"Fucking bitch," Trell said.

Tyree walked to the side of the bed and scooped the woman's clothes off the floor, jeans and a shirt balled in his fist. He grabbed her by the arm and pulled her off Trell, her body twisting as she came off the mattress, feet hitting the floor unsteady. He shoved the clothes into her chest.

"Get the fuck out of here," Tyree said. "You ain't see shit."

She clutched the clothes against herself, eyes wide and wet, and ran. Her bare feet slapped the marble down the hallway. A few seconds later, the front door opened and slammed shut hard enough to rattle the walls.

Trell chuckled. He looked from the gun in Caine's hand to the two masked figures flanking him. "That bitch Cass sent another group of niggas to take a shot at me, huh?"

Caine pulled the neck gaiter down from his face. Ramon and Tyree pulled their ski masks up.

Trell laughed. He pointed at Caine, then looked at Ramon and Tyree. "Y'all helping this college ass nigga play gangster?"

Trell threw his feet off the bed and stood. He reached down and grabbed his boxers from the floor, stepping into them and pulling them up over his hips. He turned to the dresser and picked up a blunt from the ashtray, flicked a lighter, and put it to his mouth. The cherry glowed and smoke curled from his lips.

"You must be here to get your ass beat because you mad I been punching dick in your baby mama," Trell said. He pulled on the blunt and let the smoke roll. "That the problem, nigga? You mad I was nutting in your baby mama face?"

"You really think I ain't been off the porch," Caine said.

Trell nodded at the gun. "I know you ain't about to do shit with that." He shifted his eyes to Ramon and Tyree, the blunt still burning between his fingers. "Those lil' niggas might but I'm too locked in with their big homie."

He gestured at a drawer in the dresser with the blunt, the ember tracing a short line in the dim room. "I got another pistol in there. I'm gonna get that shit and I'm gonna have you looking like the Predator when I peel your shit back." The blunt came back to his mouth. "Then I'm gonna call up your baby mama, fly her somewhere and let 20, 30 niggas run a train on that lil' pussy."

"Man, shoot this nigga, Caine," Tyree said.

Trell laughed through the smoke. "He ain't built like that. Nigga probably don't even know how to use a gun. I'm gonna get my shit now."

Trell stepped toward the drawer.

The shot cracked the room open. Trell dropped, his knee buckling sideways, his body folding as he hit the floor. His hands grabbed the knee and blood pushed between his fingers. He laughed through it, the sound strained and wet, his teeth showing.

"This lame ass nigga really shot me in the knee," Trell said.

Caine walked over to him. He grabbed the back of Trell’s head and yanked his face up. He brought the pistol down across Trell's mouth. The metal connected with bone and Trell's head snapped to the side. Caine pulled him back and hit him again. Trell opened his mouth and Caine hit him a third time before a word could form. The fourth caught him across the bridge of his nose. The fifth split his lip open against his teeth. Caine kept swinging, ten, twelve times in total.

Caine stepped back. Trell sat on the floor with his knee leaking blood onto the marble, his face a mess of broken skin and swelling, teeth cracked and showing pink at the gum line, his chest heaving under ribs that rose and fell too fast. Blood ran from his nose and dripped off his chin.

"Your bitch still took the dick, nigga," Trell said. His voice came out thick, the words catching on split lips and loose teeth. "Niggas was nutting all in that bitch. You lucky she ain't get pregnant."

Caine grabbed Trell's jaw and forced his mouth open. He shoved the barrel of the pistol past his teeth and held it there, the metal clicking against enamel. Trell's eyes looked up at him over the gun, amusement still in them around the swelling.

"You go around her again, I'm coming back down here and finishing what I started," Caine said. "And I got the money to make it disappear."

Caine stood up and pulled the gun free. Trell's head tipped forward, blood and spit stretching from his mouth to the barrel before the thread broke. Trell laughed, the sound gurgling in his throat.

"I ain't worried about your lame ass, nigga. I been ready to die." Blood pooled in the spaces between his words. "I'll have your bitch strung out on the corner, banging dope in her veins while homeless dirty dick niggas fuck her in the ass."

Caine shook his head. "I said what I said."

He turned and walked out of the bedroom, starting down the hall. The marble carried the sound of his shoes, even and steady, growing fainter with each step.

Behind him, Ramon's voice filled the room Caine had just left. "Shouldn't been fucking with the opps, nigga. It's that three over everything."

Then guns started firing.

~~~


Von opened the door and Mireya stood on the other side with her weight on one hip, her hair falling loose past her shoulders. She smiled at him and stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, her hand trailing across the front of his sweats as she passed, her fingers dragging the fabric and pressing against him through it. Her nails caught on the drawstring and she let them, the contact deliberate.

His breath pulled in sharp through his teeth. The smile on her face widened and she kept moving, letting her hand fall away as she walked into his apartment. She took in the space without slowing down, her eyes tracking across the living room, the kitchen counter stacked with mail and a cereal box left out, the TV mounted on the wall with a game paused on the screen.

Von closed the door behind her. "You got here fast as fuck."

Mireya looked at him over her shoulder. "I was driving around when I texted you."

Von walked past her toward the sofa in the living room, already lowering himself onto the cushion, his arms spreading across the back of it. "So, what you trying to do?"

Mireya tilted her head. "Why are you sitting there?"

Von's hands stopped on the cushions. "What you mean?"

"Let's go to your bedroom."

Von pushed himself back to his feet, palms pressing off the armrest. "Say less."

Mireya smiled at him as he walked by her, his shoulder brushing hers, and she turned to follow. He led her down a short hallway, his hand finding the doorframe of the last room and swinging through it. She stepped in behind him.

LED lights ran along the trim where the ceiling met the walls, casting the room in a low purple glow that colored the bedspread and the carpet and the skin on her arms when she crossed them in front of her. The bed filled most of the room, sheets twisted. A candle on the dresser had been lit recently, the wax pooled and the wick still smoking, the vanilla cutting through whatever cologne he'd sprayed before she got there.

Von crossed to the nightstand and picked up a small speaker, thumbing the side until music pushed into the room. Tory Lanez. The beat filled the space between them, bass heavy enough to feel in the floor through her socks. He set the speaker down and sat on the bed, scooting back until he reached the middle, his back against the headboard, legs out in front of him.

Mireya's eyes stayed on him. She nodded at his sweats. "Take those off."

Von laughed, the sound loose and warm. "I like a chick who know what she want." He lifted his hips and pulled the sweats down his legs, working them off his ankles and tossing them toward the corner where they landed on a pair of sneakers.

Mireya reached for the hem of her hoodie, pulling it over her head and throwing it aside. She stepped out of her shoes, one foot and then the other, the carpet warm under her soles from the heater running somewhere behind the wall. She hooked her thumbs into the waistband of her leggings, pulled them down past her knees in one motion, and kicked them over toward where the hoodie had landed, her eyes on Von the whole time,. The purple light moved across her stomach and her hips as she straightened.

She got on the bed, knees sinking into the mattress, and settled between his legs. She reached back with both hands and gathered her hair, spinning it into a ponytail and holding it twisted in one fist. She lowered her head and held the ponytail out behind her toward him.

"You mind?" she said.

Von exhaled a laugh that came out closer to a groan. "Shit, girl. You a freak, huh?"

He grabbed her hair where she offered it, wrapping it once around his fist. Mireya laughed, the sound vibrating against him. "You ain't seen nothing yet, baby."

Then her head went down.

~~~


Caine's head rested against the window, his body sunk into the leather of the first class seat, his legs stretched out under the partition in front of him. He had his hood up, his arms folded across his chest, his breathing slow and even. The cabin held the low drone of the engines and the soft clicks of overhead bins being checked by crew moving up the aisle.

A hand touched his shoulder. Light pressure, two fingers, held for a second and then released.

"Sir, we've landed."

Caine opened his eyes. The flight attendant stood in the aisle beside him, her hand already pulled back, a practiced smile on her face. He blinked once and straightened in the seat, pulling his hood down with one hand.

"Thanks," he said.

He reached up and opened the overhead compartment, pulling out a black duffel bag by the strap and swinging it down to his side. The line of passengers had already started forming in the aisle ahead of him, bodies angled sideways, bags bumping against seats and shoulders. He stepped into the gap when it opened and moved with the line toward the front of the plane.

The flight crew stood at the door in a row, their voices cycling through the same phrases for each person who passed. "Thank you for flying with us." "Have a great trip." "Enjoy your stay." Caine nodded at them as he went through, the duffel strap cutting into his shoulder where he'd hiked it up.

The jet bridge stretched ahead of him, the floor ribbed and uneven. His shoes scuffed on the carpet. He yawned, his jaw stretching wide, and ran his hand through his dreads, fingers catching on a tangle near the back before pulling free. The air in the bridge carried the faint chemical bite of jet fuel mixing with the recycled terminal air pushing in from the other end.

He stepped through the threshold and into the terminal. The noise hit him in layers. Announcements rolling over one another from speakers mounted in the ceiling, the words overlapping until none of them meant anything. Rolling luggage clicking across tile. A child screaming somewhere behind a row of seats. A group of women laughing as they passed him going the other direction, shopping bags swinging from their arms. Bodies moving in every direction, some with purpose, some with none.

Caine pulled his phone from his pocket and thumbed it open. He found the text thread and scrolled to the message with the name he was looking for. He read it once, locked the screen, and started walking toward the signs overhead that pointed to baggage claim. Escalators carried him down one level. The crowd thickened as he moved through a corridor lined with ads for rental cars and hotels, the images blurring past his peripheral vision. He kept his eyes ahead, his stride unhurried, the duffel bag steady at his side.

The baggage claim opened up around him, carousels turning in slow ovals, luggage dropping from chutes and tumbling onto the belts. He stopped near the edge of the nearest carousel and scanned the chairs along the wall.

A man pushed up from one of the seats and started toward him, his hand already extended before he'd closed the distance. He wore a polo tucked into khakis, a lanyard around his neck with a credential hanging from it.

"Caine?" the man said.

Caine nodded. He took the hand and shook it. "Joe?"

Joe nodded back, his grip firm, his smile spreading wide. "That's me. Welcome to Los Angeles. We're excited to have you join the Trojan family."
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Post by djp73 » 09 Apr 2026, 06:43

Caesar wrote:
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We're gonna piss djp off again.
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Post by Captain Canada » 09 Apr 2026, 09:43

USC feels like the right move. Mireya still throwing her hole around huh?

Glad Trell finally got switched down. About damn time.
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Post by redsox907 » 09 Apr 2026, 11:21

Caesar wrote:
09 Apr 2026, 05:48
Joe nodded back, his grip firm, his smile spreading wide. "That's me. Welcome to Los Angeles. We're excited to have you join the Trojan family."
CALLED THAT SHIT

:druskipastor:

also, glad Trell finally got switched down. Dumbass was really sitting comfortable thinking no one would run his shit again :smh:

But, Caine playing hero is an interesting narrative choice. Is he gonna tell Mireya him and his boys took out her pimp?
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Post by djp73 » 09 Apr 2026, 12:25

good thing the real steppers finished Trell off
gonna be wild when someone comes with receipts on draft night
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Post by Caesar » 10 Apr 2026, 06:06

Soapy wrote:
09 Apr 2026, 08:15
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Captain Canada wrote:
09 Apr 2026, 09:43
USC feels like the right move. Mireya still throwing her hole around huh?

Glad Trell finally got switched down. About damn time.
LA to LA!

Mireya can't have friendly hook ups?

Live by the gun, die by it.
redsox907 wrote:
09 Apr 2026, 11:21
Caesar wrote:
09 Apr 2026, 05:48
Joe nodded back, his grip firm, his smile spreading wide. "That's me. Welcome to Los Angeles. We're excited to have you join the Trojan family."
CALLED THAT SHIT

:druskipastor:

also, glad Trell finally got switched down. Dumbass was really sitting comfortable thinking no one would run his shit again :smh:

But, Caine playing hero is an interesting narrative choice. Is he gonna tell Mireya him and his boys took out her pimp?
I just foreshadowed it 5011 times :troll:

High on his own supply.

Caine? Tell someone something that might begin an emotional conversation? Absolutely not. Who you think we talking about here?
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good thing the real steppers finished Trell off
gonna be wild when someone comes with receipts on draft night
That's how it happens to ya.

I mean, Caine's receipts are already wild. Felon, dozens of unconfirmed crimes, fucking a pastor's daughter, his child's mother is a stripper and a prostitute. I think people would be more surprised if he WASN'T involved somehow in a murder (this isn't the first one that he'd be an accessory to). He's definitely not going to be drafted by Vrabel.
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Jaslene pulled a bag of rice off the shelf and turned it over in her hand, reading the back label with her lips moving faintly before she set it in the basket. Mireya trailed two steps behind with her forearms draped over the handle of a cart, her weight tipped forward so the front wheels carried most of it, her phone propped between her thumbs. The fluorescent strips above them hummed at a frequency that lived just under hearing. Cold air leaked through the automatic doors every time someone walked in or out, sharp enough to raise the skin on her arms below the pushed-up sleeves of her hoodie.

Jaslene stopped in front of the tortillas. She picked up a package and held it at arm's length, her nose scrunching as she turned it front to back. The plastic crinkled between her fingers.

"We should've gone to Latinos or one of the bodegas," she said.

Mireya looked up from her phone. "You were the one that didn't want to go to the East. I was just along for the ride."

Jaslene tossed the package back on the shelf. It slid against the others and settled crooked. She kept walking and pitched her voice higher, mocking. "I was just along for the ride." She let the impression drop and her tone came back warm. "I'm trying to teach you to cook and that means good ingredients, mi amor."

Mireya rolled her eyes, her thumb still resting on the edge of her screen. "I know how to cook. I've been cooking for myself since I was like 12. And Camila loves my food."

Jaslene laughed, the sound filling the aisle. "Por mucho que quiera a tu hija, no voy a basar mi opinión en los gustos de una bebé." She plucked a jar of something green off the shelf without looking at it, examined the lid, and put it back. "Your food is only okay at best."

Mireya shoved the basket forward. The front wheel caught the back of Jaslene's ankle and Jaslene stumbled half a step, catching herself on the shelf edge with one hand.

"Puta," Mireya said.

Jaslene's laugh came again, louder now, her head tipping back so the overhead light caught the diamond earrings hanging from her ears. She turned the corner into the next aisle still grinning, her hand trailing along the endcap display as she rounded it.

Mireya slowed. Her eyes dropped back to her phone and her thumb resumed its path, pulling her feed upward in long drags. Posts slid past. A reel of someone's baby walking for the first time. An ad for lashes. A girl she'd gone to high school with posing in front of a Honda with a caption about blessings. She kept scrolling, her face slack, the store noise thinning around her until it sat behind glass.

One post stopped her thumb.

A screenshot of a news article filled the frame, the headline cropped but legible, posted by Yola. The caption sat below it in white text against a black bar: "You fucked the city up with this one, my nigga. Long Live Trell."

Mireya's eyebrows pulled together. She tapped the screen and went to the news outlet, the browser loading slow enough that she watched the progress bar crawl across the top. The article filled in from the header down. She read it as it loaded, her eyes moving fast across the text.

Trell Robinson, 28. Found shot to death in a residence in Bayou St. John. Apparent gang-related shooting. No suspects identified.

Her heart hit the inside of her chest so hard she felt it in her throat. The second beat came harder. The third pushed into her ears and sat there, a dull thudding that swallowed the store's music and the rattle of a cart somewhere behind her and the hum of the cooler cases lining the back wall. Her grip tightened on the phone until the case bit into the meat of her palm. The screen blurred for a second before her eyes refocused.

She read it again. The same words in the same order. Twenty-eight. Shot to death. Bayou St. John.

The fluorescent light above her buzzed louder or maybe she just heard it now. A woman passed behind her pushing a cart with a child sitting in the fold-down seat, the child's shoes kicking against the metal frame in a tinny rhythm that faded as they turned the corner. Mireya stood with both hands locked on the phone, her knuckles pale, her shoulders drawn up tight enough to press against the sides of her neck.

Jaslene's voice reached her from the end of the aisle. "Mi amor, ¿me has oído?"

Mireya didn't move. She stared at the screen, at the article's photo of police tape stretched across a driveway she recognized, yellow and taut in what looked like early morning light.

Jaslene came around the corner. Her steps slowed when she saw Mireya standing still in the middle of the aisle, both hands on the phone, the basket sitting ahead of her where it had rolled to a stop against a shelf leg. Jaslene's face shifted. She closed the distance and stepped beside her, close enough that her shoulder brushed Mireya's arm, and looked down at the screen.

Her hand came up and she reached over, scrolling the article back to the top with one finger. The headline filled the screen again. Jaslene's hand pulled back and she pressed her fingers to her own mouth.

"Oh, fuck," she whispered. "Mireya, I'm sorry."

Mireya looked up at her. The thudding in her ears hadn't stopped. It sat there, steady, a pulse that had nothing to do with the store or the cold or the aisle they stood in. Her fingers loosened around the phone, one at a time, until she held it with just enough pressure to keep it from falling. Her jaw worked once before she spoke.

"Quien a la espada, de la espada muere, ¿no?"

Her voice came out flat. Measured. The proverb landed between them and sat there on the tile with the fluorescent light pressing down on it.

Jaslene shook her head, a small motion, her hand still near her mouth. "¿Quieres irte? Podemos irnos a casa."

Mireya shook her head. "I'm fine."

Jaslene searched her face. Her eyes moved from Mireya's left eye to her right, down to the set of her mouth, back up. She held the look long enough for the silence to fill with the store's ambient noise again, the distant beep of a register, the clatter of someone restocking a shelf, the faint country song playing through speakers. Then she nodded.

"Okay," Jaslene said.

Mireya slid the phone into the back pocket of her jeans. She reached for the basket handle and pushed it forward until the wheels caught and rolled. She gestured ahead of them with her chin.

"What was it you were saying?"

~~~


Caine stood with his back against the elevator wall, hands in the pockets of his hoodie, watching the floor numbers climb on the panel above the doors. The cab smelled new, something between leather cleaner and metal polish, and the overhead light hit the gold trim around the buttons and the handrail and the seam where the doors met.

Tatum leaned against the opposite wall, one ankle crossed over the other, his phone face-down in his hand. He looked over at Caine, then lifted his chin toward the ceiling.

"This is how you know you made it to the big time, kid." He pointed at the gold finishes with two fingers. "Gold in the elevator."

Caine shook his head. He nodded toward the panel where the floor numbers ran blank as they passed each one, the button for 59 glowing steady at the top of the column.

"Nah, that's how."

The elevator slowed. The mechanical hum shifted pitch and the cab settled with a soft bounce before the doors parted. The hallway stretched out in front of them, long and carpeted, the lighting recessed and warm against walls the color of wet sand.

Tatum laughed, pushing off the wall. "Can't argue with you there." He stepped out and pointed down the hall with his phone hand. "You got 5901."

They walked the corridor, Tatum a half step ahead, his shoes pressing into the carpet without sound. He stopped at a door near the end and turned, pulling a set of keys from his jacket pocket and hold them out.

Caine took them. Two keys on a plain ring, one brass and one silver. He found the deadbolt key by weight and put it in. The lock turned smooth and he pushed the door open.

The penthouse opened past the foyer in a single unbroken line. The ceilings sat high enough to swallow the sound of the door behind him. In front of him, the living room spread wide, furniture already placed, a sectional facing floor-to-ceiling windows that ran the full length of the far wall. The glass held Los Angeles in it, the buildings downtown stacked and glinting, the sprawl flattening out beyond them toward a haze that sat on the horizon where the ocean was supposed to be. Mountains out in the other direction. Light came through clean and hard, throwing long rectangles across the hardwood floor and catching the edge of a marble island in the kitchen to his right.

Caine stopped in the foyer. His eyes moved across the space, taking it in one section at a time.

Tatum stepped past him, his jacket catching Caine's arm as he moved through. He walked to the center of the living room and turned, spreading his hands.

"The collective wanted to put you in EVO, but you're the fucking quarterback for USC. This," he turned his palms up and let his arms open wider, "is how you should be living."

Caine came forward out of the foyer and crossed into the living room. He walked to the windows and stood with his hands still in his pockets, looking out. The city sat below him in layers, rooftops and cranes and the thread of a freeway stitching through the grid. A helicopter moved across the middle distance, small enough to hold between two fingers if he raised his hand to the glass.

He pulled one hand free and pointed at the view. "What direction is this facing?"

Tatum had already moved into the kitchen. His voice carried over the island. "West. You'll get the sunset over the city every night." A cabinet opened and closed. "Another thing I had them make sure of when we were negotiating. You know, because a good looking fella like yourself," his head appeared around the edge of the refrigerator door, one eyebrow up, "well, I'm sure it won't be lonely in here."

Caine turned from the windows and walked into the kitchen. The countertops were quartz, white with gray veining, the edge dropping in a waterfall on the island's side. A six-burner gas cooktop sat flush in the counter, the grates heavy and black against the stone. The wine storage built into the cabinetry held a row of bottles behind tinted glass. An espresso machine sat at the far end of the counter, stainless and compact, still wrapped at the portafilter with a tag hanging from the handle. The appliances were all the same brand, brushed steel, handles that caught the light.

He opened the refrigerator. The shelves were full. Produce stacked in the crisper drawers. Containers of prepped meals lined across the middle shelf with labels on the lids. Bottles of water and juice stood in the door.

Tatum laughed from behind him. "I forgot about that. They're paying for all your groceries, too. Got one of those subscription services. Factor or something." He moved closer, leaning his hip against the island. "But you got a nutritionist, too, so you'll get fresh shit."

Caine shook his head, still looking at the shelves. "I thought I'd have to spend the fucking money they're giving me."

Tatum reached over and patted him once on the shoulder, the contact firm and brief. "All part of the package, my boy. They had to make up the difference in straight cash between them and Miami somehow."

Caine closed the fridge. The seal pulled shut with a soft compression and he turned back toward the foyer, retracing his steps across the kitchen, his eyes tracking the ceiling line, the recessed lights, the ductless vents set into the soffits.

Tatum followed, pointing as he spoke. "You got three bedrooms, three and a half baths. The half up by the door." His hand swung left. "You got two rooms on that side, washer and dryer over there." His hand crossed to the right. "Master over there."

Caine walked toward the master. The hallway was short, two doors on the left, the master at the end where the light from another wall of windows bled into the corridor. He pushed the door open with his fingertips.

The bedroom matched the rest of the penthouse. Furnished, the bed already made, a headboard in dark wood running the width of the wall. Nightstands with lamps. A dresser with nothing on it. Across the bed, spread from pillow to foot, university swag covered the comforter. A garnet and gold blanket folded at the center. Hats stacked in a row. T-shirts still in their packaging, Nike Techs, shoes, hoodies. A welcome letter on cardstock leaning against the pillow, the Trojan logo embossed at the top.

He crossed the room to the bathroom. He stepped inside and stopped at the threshold, his hand resting on the frame.

Marble ran floor to wall, a cream stone with copper veining that caught the vanity lights. Double sinks sat in a long counter, the faucets polished to where his reflection bent in them. A glass-walled shower took up the far end, the showerhead wide and flat, mounted from the ceiling. The tub sat separate, freestanding, porcelain white against the stone floor.

"This shit crazy. I can't lie." His voice carried off the marble and came back to him. "This motherfucker is bigger than my abuela's house."

Tatum stood in the bedroom doorway, one shoulder braced against the frame, arms folded, watching Caine take it in.

"Welcome to the big time."

~~~


Ramon leaned against the chain-link fence with one foot flat on the sidewalk and the other propped behind him on the metal, his weight resting easy. The cold sat in the air but the sun had started to cut through it, pressing warmth into the asphalt and the hoods of parked cars and the side of his face where he stood. Across the street, two of the younger guys worked the corner, one posted up near a mailbox and the other pacing a short line between a fire hydrant and the edge of a driveway, both of them tracking the cars that rolled past.

Tyree sat on the steps of the shotgun house behind Ramon with his elbows on his knees, a toothpick pinched between his front teeth, turning it with his tongue. His hood was up even with the sun coming through, the drawstrings hanging loose against his chest.

"You not about to sit up here in my face and say that bitch ain't have you driving all the way to Baton Rouge for a lil' lick of pussy, nigga." Ramon's head turned just enough to catch Tyree in his peripheral. "We was all there."

Tyree shook his head, the toothpick shifting to the other side of his mouth. He waved his hand out in front of him, fingers spread, cutting the air. "You changing the fucking story, nigga. I was going up there for her and her friend. It was two of them."

Ramon's mouth pulled at one corner. "You fuck both of 'em?"

Tyree adjusted his elbows on his knees and looked past Ramon toward the street, his jaw working around the toothpick. "See what had happened was—"

Ramon's laugh came before Tyree could finish, loud enough that one of the younger guys across the street looked over. "Nigga ain't fuck neither of them. Drove damn near two hours with your dick in your hand and drove two hours back the same way."

Tyree held his hands up, palms open, the gesture big enough to match the accusation. "Not even LeBron hit every shot he take."

"He don't shoot that shit from outside the fucking arena either."

Tyree pulled the toothpick from his mouth and pointed it at Ramon. "Niggas always trying to inflate they stats. Like you ain't never did some shit like that."

Ramon let his head rest back against the fence. The metal pressed cold through his hoodie between his shoulder blades. "I ain't. Not any time recently."

"Because you got a girl at home." Tyree put the toothpick back in his mouth and leaned forward on the steps, his feet spreading wider on the concrete below. "You don't take no risky shots."

Ramon shrugged, one shoulder lifting and dropping. "You can get you a lil' yeah, my nigga."

Tyree shook his head fast, the hood shifting with it. "Never that. Ain't letting no bitch tie me down."

A car turned onto the street from the far end of the block. It rolled slow, tires whispering on the asphalt, the paint catching the sun in a clean reflection that looked wrong for the neighborhood. Newer model. Tinted windows. Chrome that hadn't been touched by road salt or gutter spray. It came to a stop in front of them, the engine ticking at idle.

Ramon straightened off the fence. Tyree stood from the steps, his hand dropping to the pocket of his jeans. Across the street the younger guys had already clocked the car, their bodies stilling, attention pulled from whatever transaction they'd been running.

The driver's door opened. Naomi stepped out and came around the front of the car, her stride unhurried, heels finding the cracked sidewalk without breaking rhythm. She wore a jacket zipped to her chest, jeans fitted close, her hair pulled back tight. She stopped in front of them and put one hand on her hip.

Ramon nodded. "Naomi."

Tyree reached into his pocket for a fresh toothpick, his eyes moving over Naomi from her shoes up to her face and back down. He shook his head once and looked away toward the street.

Naomi's attention stayed on Ramon. "You got my money?"

Ramon reached into his pocket and pulled out a roll of bills held tight with a rubber band. He held it out. She took it, her fingers closing around it in one motion, and pulled the band off with her thumb. She counted, her lips moving faintly as she separated the bills, flipping each one to the back of the stack with a practiced snap.

Tyree worked the new toothpick between his teeth. "You don't feel bad about setting your man best friend up?"

Naomi sucked her teeth without looking up from the money. She shook her head. "That nigga Trell was always putting Ant in the worst shit, making him take the fall for shit." She finished counting and folded the bills in half, tucking them into her jacket pocket. "Why you think Trell ain't never had to go sit down for nothing?"

Ramon dipped his chin. "Can't trust no niggas that refuse to go up the river for their own dirt."

"Ain't nobody gonna be bothered that nigga gone, that's all I know," Naomi said.

Ramon shrugged. "Appreciate the lo."

Naomi nodded. She held up the pocket where the money sat, patting it once with her palm. "It was worth it." She turned and walked back to the car, her heels clicking twice on the sidewalk before she reached the door. She got in, pulled it shut, and the engine caught a gear. The car rolled forward, smooth and steady, and turned the corner at the end of the street.

Tyree watched it disappear. The toothpick rolled to the corner of his mouth as his jaw shifted.

"I ain't expect that nigga to look like that," he said.

Ramon looked over at him. "Fuck you mean?"

"I don't know." Tyree's hands went to his hips. "I expected him to look more like a nigga."

"She ain't start changing yesterday, nigga."

Tyree sucked his teeth and pulled the toothpick out, holding it between two fingers. "Man, I don't care. What I'm saying is I thought some Big Freedia looking ass nigga was about to get out that car. Madea or something."

Ramon's laugh broke open across the sidewalk. He shook his head, his hands coming up to gesture at Tyree. "Nigga, if you think she fine, just say that."

Tyree's face snapped toward him, the toothpick pointed at Ramon's chest. "Nigga, I'll fucking shoot you. Don't play like that. I ain't into no niggas." He jammed the toothpick back into his mouth and spread his arms wide. "It's plenty bitches with pussies like God intended out here."

Ramon held his hands up, palms open, the grin still sitting wide on his face. "You the one said it, brudda."

Tyree shoved him. His palm caught Ramon in the shoulder and pushed him back a step, Ramon's sneaker scuffing on the concrete as he caught his balance, his laugh carrying down the block.

~~~


Caine lay stretched across the sectional with one arm behind his head and the other resting on his chest, the remote somewhere under his thigh where it had slid when he'd stopped caring about what was on. The TV ran NFL playoff highlights, a commentator's voice pushing through the room at a volume that had faded into background noise. The windows held the last of the afternoon, the sky above the city shifting from white to gold at the edges, the buildings downtown starting to catch the change.

His phone vibrated on the coffee table. The buzz traveled through the glass and reached the edge of the couch where his hand hung. He reached over without lifting his head and picked it up, thumb finding the green button before his eyes found the screen.

"Hello?"

"This Cam. Come down to the Sky Lounge on 27, my nigga."

Caine's eyebrows pulled together. He shifted his weight on the cushion. "Cam?"

"Yeah, one of your new teammates, nigga. Joe already told me you touched down. Bring your ass down here."

Caine sat up. The cushion gave behind him as his weight came forward. He rubbed his eyes with the heel of his palm, pressing hard enough to see color behind his lids, then blinked the room back into focus. "27?"

"Yeah, bruh. Hurry up."

He sighed, the sound low in his chest. "Alright, give me a minute."

He ended the call and dropped the phone on the cushion beside him. The highlights kept running on the TV, a replay of a touchdown catch that the commentators were breaking down frame by frame. He pushed up from the couch and headed for his bedroom.



The elevator opened onto the 27th floor and Caine stepped out, hands in the pockets of his jacket. The Sky Lounge spread ahead of him through a set of glass doors, an outdoor terrace that wrapped the corner of the building. The air hit cooler than the hallway, the sun low enough now that the shadows stretched long across the concrete and the furniture. A few professionals sat around high tables near the bar, drinks and laptops, their voices held at a pitch that stayed between their chairs.

Off to the right, past the fire features and the planters, five guys sat around a firepit that wasn't lit. Hoodies and sweats, sneakers propped on the edge of the pit's stone rim, laughter carrying farther than anyone else's on the terrace. One of them had his phone held up at arm's length, showing something to the guy next to him, and both of them cracked up at the same time.

Caine walked over.

One of them stood when he saw him coming. He was tall, Caine's height or close to it, with a wide build through the shoulders and a fade cut sharp enough that the barber had earned whatever he'd charged.

"Shit, took you long enough to come down from that penthouse, nigga." He reached out. Caine met his hand and Cam pulled him in, one arm coming around his back in a brief grip before they separated. "I'm Cam."

"I ain't expect no one to be calling me today," Caine said.

Cam laughed, his head tipping back. "That's because we about to hit up a party." He turned and pointed at the others, moving his hand down the line. "That's Derron. Make sure you throw that shit to me instead of him because fuck that nigga."

Derron lifted two fingers from the armrest of his chair without looking up, the gesture lazy and unbothered.

Cam kept going. "Alonzo, Angel and Rachaad."

Alonzo dapped Caine from his seat. Angel lifted his chin. Rachaad nodded once, slow, his arms crossed.

Derron sat forward and pointed at Cam. "Don't listen to that nigga, bruh. He just mad because he ain't from real Vegas like me and Zo."

Alonzo reached over and dapped Derron up, their hands meeting in the space between chairs. "Say that, my nigga."

Angel looked at Caine, his vowels dropping into that Bay Area roll that carried even in short sentences. "I hope you bang, homie, because Chaad be having us in the fucking Hoovers."

Rachaad shook his head, his eyes moving over Caine from shoes to face. "He look like he can hold his own."

Caine snorted a laugh. "Yeah, I ain't never been afraid of hood shit."

Derron slapped the armrest of his chair. "I already like this nigga more than Cade."

Caine looked at the group, then out past the terrace to where the city was starting to light up, headlights and building windows filling in the dusk. "So, where we going?"



The house sat on a residential, cars lining both sides of the block, bass leaking through the walls hard enough to rattle the screen door. They came up the front walk in a loose group, Cam and Derron first, Caine beside Alonzo, Angel and Rachaad bringing up the back.

Inside, the party hit all at once. The music was loud and sat in the chest, the bass turning the air into something physical. The crowd was packed from the front room to the kitchen, bodies pressed close, cups raised, voices competing with the speakers and losing.

The lighting was low, most of it coming from a lamp someone had turned toward the wall and the glow of phone screens cutting through the dark in brief flashes. The crowd was mostly Black, the energy closer to what Caine had grown up around in New Orleans than anything he'd been to in Statesboro. Rap music. Loud talk. The smell of weed, cologne and sweat layered so thick the air felt textured.

Cam tapped Caine on the chest with the back of his hand as they pushed through the entryway. "I know you coming from the boonies, but it's always plenty bad bitches in the functions out here in LA."

Caine looked around the room. His eyes tracked the crowd, the clusters of women posted near the kitchen, the ones already dancing in the center of the front room where the furniture had been pushed back to make space.

"Yeah, I see that," he said.

Cam laughed, leaning closer so his voice carried over the music. "Just tell 'em you got that fucking penthouse and you in there."

Caine snorted a laugh and kept walking.

They moved deeper into the party, weaving between bodies and conversations. The kitchen opened up ahead of them, bottles crowding the counter, a cooler on the floor with its lid propped against the cabinet. Somebody handed Cam a cup and he took it without breaking stride.

A ripple moved through the crowd near the front of the house. Bodies shifted, stepping back, opening a lane through the center of the room. The music changed, the DJ cutting to a beat with a heavier kick pattern, a tempo that signaled something coming.

Four women stepped into the cleared space. They wore matching colors, salmon pink and apple green, their outfits coordinated enough to set them apart from every other body in the room. The first one led, her chin lifted, her step landing precise and deliberate, heel striking the floor in time with the beat. The three behind her matched her stride, their bodies moving in unison, each step choreographed and sharp.

They hit the first formation and the room responded, voices rising, hands going up. The four of them locked into step, feet stamping the hardwood in syncopated rhythm, arms cutting angles that snapped at the elbow and the wrist. Their hips rolled on the off-beat and their shoulders dropped in a line that rippled from front to back. The footwork tightened, each stomp landing harder, the sound punching through the bass, and their voices came in together, a call that was half chant and half declaration, pitched to carry over the speakers. They held each transition for a beat before breaking into the next sequence, their bodies working the formation with a precision that turned the open lane into a stage.

The crowd pressed closer. Phones came up. Somebody behind Caine whistled, the sound cutting high over the noise.

Caine watched the girl at the front of the line. The same girl he’d seen on campus for his visit near the Union. She moved with deliberate composure, her step hitting the floor and her body following it, nothing wasted, nothing extra, every motion earning the space it took.

She turned her head in his direction as the stroll reached its final formation. Her eyes found his across the crowd. One eyebrow lifted, brief, a fraction of a second, before she turned her head the other way and hit the closing beat with the rest of the line.

The crowd erupted. Hands clapped. The music rolled back in at full volume. The four of them broke formation and came together, laughing, arms around each other's shoulders. She said something to the girl next to her, their heads close, then pulled away and moved into the crowd in Caine's direction.

He reached out and caught her wrist, his grip gentle, just enough contact to stop her forward motion. "Say, love. I've seen you before."

She looked down at his hand on her wrist, then up at his face. One eyebrow rose again. "Love? A Louisiana boy in Los Angeles, huh?"

Caine smiled. "LA to LA on some shit."

She snorted a laugh, the sound sharp and quick, her mouth pulling at one corner. "Yeah, I remember seeing you. On campus."

Caine nodded. "Yeah, I just transferred to SC."

"Oh really?"

"Really really. Let's talk, get to know each other better."

She waved her hand, fingers cutting the air between them. "I'm good."

"Can I at least get your name then? So I can know who shot me down beyond that pretty chick I saw near the Union."

She stared at him. The party moved around them, bodies and noise pressing on every side, but she held the look long enough for the beat to change twice. "Autumn."

"Alright, Autumn. I'm Caine."

"See you around campus, Caine."

His eyes passed over her, the line of her shoulders, the balance in her stance, the confidence in the set of her jaw. "Yeah, you, too, Autumn."

She turned and walked into the crowd. He watched her go until the bodies closed behind her and she was gone.

He shook his head once and turned around, scanning the room. His eyes moved across the crowd, past the dancing, past the kitchen, past the cluster of people near the speakers.

A girl stood near the far wall, a cup in her hand, looking straight at him. A smile spread across her face.

Caine smirked. He chuckled to himself, the sound lost under the music and started making his way over.

~~~


Mireya put her key in the lock and turned it. The deadbolt gave and she pushed the door open, stepping inside with her bag sliding off her shoulder.

Sena lay on the couch with her legs stretched out and one arm behind her head, scrolling through her phone. The screen lit the underside of her jaw and her fingers as she swiped. She looked over when the door closed.

"She behave tonight?" Mireya asked.

Sena sat up, pulling her legs under her. She flipped her hand over twice, palm up then palm down, and shook her head. "She's upset because her dad left."

Mireya kicked her shoes off at the door, one after the other, the soles tapping against the baseboard. "Yeah, I figured."

She crossed the living room and dropped onto the couch beside Sena, the cushion giving under her weight. Her bag landed on the floor between her feet. She let her head fall back against the top of the couch and stared at the ceiling for a second, her fingers finding the elastic in her hair and pulling it free. The ponytail loosened and her hair fell across her shoulders and the top of the cushion behind her. She dropped the elastic on the armrest.

"It doesn't help shit that she really liked Los Angeles."

Sena nodded, shifting to face her, one knee drawing up onto the cushion. "She was telling me about all of the boats she saw when y'all were out there."

Mireya's mouth pressed flat. Her fingers found the seam of the couch cushion and traced it, nail catching on the fabric. "She's gonna start begging me to go see him by the end of the fucking week. And those plane tickets ain't exactly cheap."

"I'm sure he'd be happy to pay for it," Sena said.

Mireya didn't answer. The sentence sat between them on the couch, taking up more room than the words accounted for. Mireya's thumb ran along her leggings back and forth, a small motion she didn't seem aware of. She let the silence hold long enough for Sena to stop waiting for a response.

Then she looked over at her. "You want to hang for a while before you head out?"

Sena shrugged, one shoulder lifting and dropping, her phone still in her hand. "Sure, I don't have anywhere to go."

Mireya smiled. It came small and left fast, there and gone before it could settle. She leaned forward and grabbed the remote from the coffee table, the plastic warm from sitting under the lamp's reach all night. She pressed the power button and the TV came on, the screen filling with the home menu, app tiles glowing in neat rows.

"I been binging The Pitt," Mireya said.

Sena gasped, her whole body turning toward Mireya on the cushion. "You're just watching that?"

Mireya shrugged, scrolling the remote toward the HBO app. "I don't know. I like lighter stuff when I come home from work. I'm not trying to watch something about a fucking ER after a shift."

"I get that, but that's what we're trying to do." Sena's hand came up, gesturing as she spoke, her voice picking up speed. "It's realistic. Definitely more realistic than other shit. I love it."

Mireya pulled up the app and navigated to the show, the episode thumbnails loading across the screen. "Didn't expect to be watching it with the number one fan."

Sena rolled her eyes, her head tilting with the motion. "Just put it on."

"As long as you don't spoil it for me."

"I won't." Sena pulled her legs up onto the couch and settled deeper into the cushion, tucking her feet under the throw blanket that had bunched at the far end. She adjusted the pillow behind her back and let her shoulder rest against the couch arm. "I'll wait to the end of each episode to give you my takes."

Mireya snorted a laugh, the sound quick through her nose. The episode loaded and the opening scene filled the screen, the hospital corridor bright and sharp against the dim apartment. She set the remote on the cushion between them and let her hand fall to her lap, Sena’s eyes already on the TV.

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Post by Soapy » 10 Apr 2026, 06:42

one more time for that pack :romeo:

Just peeped that father of the year Caine Echeverria went about as far as he could

enjoy the facetime, beloved
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Post by Captain Canada » 10 Apr 2026, 10:12

Soapy wrote:
10 Apr 2026, 06:42
Just peeped that father of the year Caine Echeverria went about as far as he could
It's getting harder and harder for him to beat the allegations

Mireya will let Trell by her a Birkin to show hole, but god forbid Caine pays for a plane ticket :curtain:
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