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Post by Caesar » 18 May 2025, 16:49

Nada se olvida

The street was quiet in that brittle way it gets just after sunset, when porch lights flicker on but nobody’s come out to sit yet. Percy walked with a plastic bag swinging at his side—chips, a soda, some cough drops for his grandma. He was two blocks from her place, head low, hoodie pulled up, lost in his own thoughts.

That’s when they came out the cut.

Two of them. Masked. One in a faded Nike windbreaker, the other in a black hoodie pulled tight over cornrows. No words at first. Just the sound of sneakers hitting pavement and Percy’s bag dropping as instinct kicked in too late.

A punch cracked his jaw sideways before he could raise his hands. Then a kick to the ribs, and another, until he hit the sidewalk hard and curled up, arms over his head.

“Snitch ass nigga!” one of them shouted.

“Your bitch ass cousin next!” the other added.

Boots found his stomach, his back, his face. Fists hammered down like they weren’t worried who saw. Like they wanted to be seen.

Percy didn’t scream. Just grunted through blood and swallowed teeth.

A screen door slammed open somewhere. A voice shouted: “HEY! HEY! I’m callin’ the police!”

They were gone in seconds. Running hard, like roaches when the lights come on.

Percy lay there a moment, cheek against the rough sidewalk, bag still crumpled a few feet away. He pulled himself up slowly, wincing, legs trembling. His sweatshirt was ripped at the collar. Blood streaked his lip. One eye was already swelling shut.

He limped the rest of the way to his grandmother’s house. She opened the door before he could knock.

“Oh my God—Percy!” she screamed, grabbing his face with trembling hands. “What happened?! Jesus, baby, I’m callin’ the police—”

“No.” His voice was gravel, dry. “Don’t.”

“You need a doctor!”

“I’m fine.” He staggered past her, clutching his side.

She followed, still talking, panicking. But he wasn’t listening.

He went straight to the bathroom, spit blood into the sink, wiped his mouth on a rag. Stared at himself. The mirror barely showed him through the fog of swelling.

Later, in bed, he lay still. His ribs ached with every breath. The house had gone quiet. His grandmother had finally stopped pacing the kitchen.

He stared at the ceiling fan, unmoving in the dark.

“They ain’t gonna stop,” he whispered.

Then he sat up.

Moved slow.

He crossed the room, climbed on the old wooden chair, reached up to the top of the closet. Pulled down the dusty red Nike shoebox he hadn’t touched in months.

Inside, wrapped in a bandana: a .380.

He held it for a long moment.

Not trembling. Not hesitating.

Just remembering.
~~~
The interview room inside OJC didn’t pretend to be humane.

It was the kind of space that made time feel thick—concrete walls painted in institutional gray, a buzzing fluorescent light overhead that flickered just enough to keep your eyes raw, and a vent that hummed with a steady, mechanical drone. No clock. No window. No sense of morning or night. Only the cold.

Caine sat in the middle of it all, shackled at the wrists, the steel biting into his skin with every twitch of movement. The metal chair under him felt like ice, seeping through the fabric of his orange jumpsuit. His shoulders were square, but tension bristled along his neck and down his spine.

The door opened with a low mechanical groan, and in walked Jill Babin, the Assistant District Attorney who’d stood across from him in court and painted him like a threat in human form. Her heels clicked softly across the linoleum floor, her navy blazer crisp and her blonde hair coiled into a low bun that didn’t shift when she moved.

She sat across from him and placed a thin manila folder on the table like it was sacred.

Detective Leary, from NOPD’s gang task force, followed behind. He didn’t sit—just leaned against the wall beside the door, arms crossed, thumbs hooked in his belt. Watching.

Babin didn’t speak right away.

She took her time opening the folder. Turned a page, though she didn’t seem to read it. Adjusted it slightly, tapping the corner once to straighten it. Her silence wasn’t passive. It was performance. She wanted the air to fill with dread before her voice cut through it.

“You’ve been here… what—nineteen days now?”

Caine didn’t answer.

His eyes were fixed on a brown water stain above her head—shaped like a crescent moon. He’d started staring at stains a lot lately. They didn’t lie to you. They didn’t twist their faces into fake sympathy.

“You’ve missed two court dates,” Babin continued, flipping another page, “and guess what? You’re not seeing a judge anytime soon.”

She looked up now, her smile paper-thin.

“We’re backed up. Dockets full. Your public defender couldn’t even be here today—surprise, surprise.” She gave a casual shrug. “Could be weeks before your next hearing. Months, if you keep playing it this way.”

Caine glanced down, just for a second.

His jaw tightened until the muscle flexed like a knot. Fingers twitched once, then again—restless beneath the weight of the shackles.

“You’re not the target, Caine,” Babin said, her tone softening like a well-rehearsed lullaby. “You know that. You tell us something—what happened that night, who was holding what, even wo you bring the cars to—I can make this go away.”

She leaned in now, elbows on the table, eyes steady.

“I can get you home. Back to school. Back to your little girl.”

Camila.

The name hung in the space like fog, even though she hadn’t said it.

Still, Caine said nothing. He just blinked slowly and let her words pass over him like static.

“Tell us what you know. Give us something real,” she said, “and you’re free.”

He looked at her then.

And she saw it.

Not fear. Not panic. But fury—deep, smoldering, coiled tight behind his dark eyes like a storm with nowhere to go.

But still, he didn’t speak.

He wouldn’t.

Babin sat back, arms folding now, expression tightening. The lullaby was over.

“Otherwise…” she said, dragging the word out like a thread, “they’ll bury you. Slowly. Quietly. The way they always do.”

Her voice hardened.

“You think the system’s gonna save you out of principle? Look around. You think this place is made for saving?”

She jabbed her index finger lightly against the file. “This is going to go to trial if you don’t make a deal. Then you’re fair game. Adult charges. Adult time.”

She waited. Caine didn’t flinch.

“Look at me.”

He did.

No blink. No fear.

“Each day you stay quiet, that clock ticks louder,” she said. “And eventually, someone’s gonna run out of patience and think you’re talking anyway.”

A pause.

“And if that happens, well… maybe something bad finds its way back to your family. Or maybe we just find something new. Something that adds time.”

She closed the folder slowly, deliberately.

“You’ll wish you had talked when it was still a choice.”

The room felt smaller now. Air tighter. Caine could feel his heart pounding, but his face stayed calm. Still.

He had nothing to say to these people. Not today. Not ever.

Babin stared at him a second longer, then nodded toward the deputy waiting at the door.

The cuffs rattled as Caine was pulled to his feet. His legs ached from sitting too long. But he stood tall, taller than he probably should have.

He didn’t look back.

Not at the folder.

Not at the ADA.

Not at the man by the door who still saw him as a number in a jumpsuit.

He walked out with silence pressing against his back like a blade.

And Jill Babin, lips pursed, watched him go—knowing the next step wouldn’t be legal. It would be procedural.

Transfer. Isolation. Pressure.

The clock was ticking.
~~~
Mireya sat on an upturned milk crate next to the dumpster behind the taqueria, legs folded tight, her back against the brick wall still warm from the afternoon sun. The scent of grease and grilled meat hung in the air, but she wasn’t hungry anymore. Just tired.

She picked at a small piece of chicken folded into a single corn tortilla—no salsa, no lime. One of the cooks, Miguel, had slipped it to her with a nod and a look that said I ain’t judging. He didn’t have to say anything. Everyone around here knew. Knew she’d been pulling doubles. Knew about Caine. Knew about Camila.

The tortilla was stale. The chicken dry. But it was something.

She was chewing slowly, almost absentmindedly, when she heard the bass first—rattling the frame of a black Camry as it crept into the lot. The tires crackled over loose gravel and broken glass.

The car eased to a stop, and out stepped Kike—white tank top, slim gold chain, his hair twisted up tight, the tattoos on his forearm visible as he adjusted his belt. Two boys hopped out behind him, both laughing about something that wasn’t funny, both moving like they didn’t have to watch their backs.

Kike clocked her instantly.

“Damn, Reya.” He whistled low as he walked over, leaving the other two by the car. “You really eatin’ next to the trash?”

She looked up, brushing crumbs off her lap, expression flat.

“Was the only seat left,” she muttered.

He smiled wide like he hadn’t heard the edge in her voice and squatted beside her, resting his elbows on his knees.

“You good?”

She didn’t answer right away. She looked past him, toward the glowing window of the taqueria where orders were being passed out on styrofoam trays.

Finally, she said, “He’s still in.”

Kike nodded slowly.

“Damn. They really tryna break him, huh? You think he’s gonna talk?”

Mireya didn’t respond. She just looked down at the last bite of tortilla in her hand, then tossed it toward the dumpster without finishing.

Kike reached into his pocket, pulled out a thick roll of cash, and peeled off a couple of twenties. He held them out to her without saying anything.

She stared at the bills.

“I’m good,” she said, voice low.

“I ain’t ask if you was,” he replied, still holding them out. “Take it, prima.”

She hesitated, then took the money with quiet fingers and folded it into the front pocket of her jeans.

“Gracias.”

Kike stood up, brushing dust off his knees.

“I know someone who’s lookin’ for an office clerk. Real talk. Pays under the table. Some warehouse shit but clean. You want it, I’ll make the call.”

Mireya looked up at him. Her eyes were tired, but there was something like hope buried in the weariness.

“I’d appreciate that.”

He smiled again, this time more genuine.

“You know I got you,” he said, patting her shoulder as he turned and walked toward the restaurant.

The other boys followed behind him, cracking jokes as they disappeared into the bright doorway, laughter echoing behind them.

Mireya sat alone a moment longer, the money in her pocket and the smell of meat still clinging to her hair, watching the sky turn orange over the parking lot.
~~~
The hum of the air conditioner in Markus Shaw’s office was the only sound for a full minute before the door creaked open.

Nicole, one of the paralegals in his office, stepped in, her badge clipped to the lanyard bouncing lightly against her chest, a slim envelope pinched between two fingers like it might disintegrate. Her face said everything.

“Got the file,” she said.

Markus took it from her without standing. The envelope was light—too damn light for what it should’ve contained. He flipped it open at once, his fingers moving quick, trained.

Intake report. Booking photos. Incident summary. Barebones arrest affidavit. A few scribbled notes from an officer who hadn’t even bothered to get the names right. That was it.

He looked up. “This all they sent?”

Nicole nodded, already bracing.

“It took this long to get you that,” she said. “And the motion for new counsel? Clerk didn’t even file it until yesterday.”

Markus exhaled sharply through his nose, set the file down. The edge of his desk thudded when his knuckles tapped it.

“They’re running the clock.”

He stood, his height casting a long shadow across the desk as he paced to the window. Outside, the skyline of downtown New Orleans shimmered in the late light. Bright enough to look alive, quiet enough to feel false.

“Standard play,” he muttered. “You stall just long enough. Let the kid rot. Make him feel forgotten. Then you offer him a way out—at someone else’s expense.”

He turned back to Nicole.

“We’re not doing that.”

She nodded.

“Want me to draft the bond motion?”

“Do it now. File it first thing tomorrow. And while you’re at it, file for full access to discovery.” He gestured to the file with a flick of his fingers. “I want every scrap they’ve got. They think just because he’s sixteen, no one’s looking?”

Nicole hesitated. Then:

“My friend in the DA’s office texted me back. Off the record… they’re pushing gang enhancement charges.”

Markus froze. For just a moment. Then he walked back to the desk and sat down slowly, dragging the file toward him.

He stared at Caine’s intake photo. The kid’s face blank, eyes dead but sharp. Not wild. Not lost. Just waiting. Like he’d learned something about the world no sixteen-year-old should know.

Markus’s voice came quieter this time.

“He’s just a little older than my son.”

Nicole didn’t say anything. She didn’t have to.

Markus closed the file carefully and set his hands on top of it.

“If we don’t force their hand now…” He looked up. “They’re going to slow-walk this until he breaks. And if that happens, it won’t just be on the system.”

He paused.

“It’ll be on us too.”

Nicole nodded. She was already pulling out her laptop.

Markus leaned back, eyes fixed on the ceiling for a moment like he could see through it—past the floors of bureaucracy, past the courts and holding cells and lost hours.

Then he said, quietly, as much to himself as to her:

“Let’s make it hurt for them to forget this boy’s name.”
~~~
The line was moving slow, like always—orange jumpsuits shuffling toward the double doors that led to the rec yard. The only thing more worn out than the kids in line was the floor beneath their shoes.

Caine stood in the middle of it, hands behind his back, eyes glazed but alert. He wasn’t looking for trouble. Just air. Just space. Just thirty minutes without concrete walls pressing in on him.

Then he heard it:

“Guerra!”

Two COs stepped into the hallway—one tall and rail-thin with a hooked nose, the other broad with a gut that strained against his duty belt. Neither looked like they wanted to explain anything.

The bigger one jerked his chin.

“You. Grab your stuff.”

Caine blinked.

“I’m on the rec list.”

“Not anymore.”

There wasn’t a reason. There didn’t have to be one. He glanced at the other boys in line. A few of them turned away. One smirked.

Caine nodded once, slow, and peeled off.

He returned to his cell, packed the little he had—state-issue toothpaste, a letter from Mireya folded six times, two pencils, a notebook half full of words he hadn’t said aloud since he got inside.

By the time he was led down the east wing corridor, he could already feel the change.

The air was heavier. More humid, somehow. The lights overhead flickered more often, and the tiles underfoot were cracked and stained. This pod—E3—was older, colder. The vents clanged instead of humming. The boys inside didn’t play cards or talk loud. They just watched.

Predators.

Not the kind from the block.

The kind who’d already learned how to survive inside.

The gate buzzed open. The CO motioned with his baton.

“Bunk seven.”

Caine stepped in. Eyes followed him—half curious, half measuring. No one said a word as he moved across the floor, climbed to the top bunk, and sat.

He didn’t unpack. Didn’t lie down.

Instead, he pulled out the notebook and pulled out the nub of a pencil, setting it against the page like it could anchor him.

I never knew my father.

The words came out in ink before they came out in thought.

Below him, a voice cut through the stillness.

“Qué pasa, pretty boy? You copping a plea as soon as you get in the car?”

Caine didn’t flinch. He didn’t even look down.

He answered back in Spanish—low, clean, sharp.

“Sigue hablando y vas a despertar sin pinche dientes.”

The pod fell still. A few boys chuckled. The voice didn’t answer back.

From a bunk across the row, another teen—older, skin pale under tattoos—spoke without looking up.

“Keep your head down in here. You ain’t got no friends in this car.”

Caine nodded once.

“I got it.”

And he turned the page, pressed his pen back to the paper.

I never knew my father. Not really. Just stories. Just silence. Just that space at the end of my name where something else should’ve been.

Sometimes I wonder if he ever looked for me. Or if I was just born too late to matter. Wonder what if he thinks about where I am.

You won’t have to wonder who I am.


He kept writing as the voices fell away.

As the pod turned inward.

As the cold settled in for good.
~~~
The kitchen table looked like it belonged to someone drowning.

Unpaid bills were spread beside an old checkbook with more scratch-outs than numbers. Sara’s phone sat face-down next to a cup of cold coffee. On her cracked laptop screen: a list of criminal defense attorneys, most with starting rates that made her chest tighten.

She rubbed her eyes, trying to push back the headache. Tried to focus. Tried to breathe.

Where was she supposed to come up with that kind of money? What kind of mother couldn’t afford to save her own son?

The front door opened with the groan of a tired hinge.

“We’re back!” Hector’s voice called through the house, followed by the scuff of boots on tile.

Sara didn’t answer.

Hector entered the kitchen with his son, Saul, trailing behind—fifteen years old, lean and quiet, earbuds in, hoodie half-zipped. He gave Sara a respectful nod on his way to the fridge.

“Go to the room for a bit,” Hector said, not unkindly but firm.

“I’m just getting water—”

“Now, Saul.”

Saul shot his dad a look, then glanced at Sara, who gave a tired smile. He grabbed a cup, filled it from the sink, and walked out without another word. The hallway swallowed the sound of his footsteps.

Hector waited until the boy’s door clicked shut before speaking.

“I talked to Ma.”

Sara didn’t look up.

“She said if Caine gets out, he can’t come back to the house.”

Sara stiffened, lips pressing into a line.

“That’s her grandson.”

“And Saul’s her grandson, too.” Hector stepped closer, resting one hand on the back of a chair. “You know how much she loves that boy. But she’s scared, Sara. Hell, so am I.”

Sara stood slowly, the chair behind her scraping back.

“You’re talking about my son like he’s a threat to his own blood.”

“He is.” Hector’s voice was level, too calm to be cruel. “You know what people are saying. You know what the papers said. I held that boy when he was born, Sara, but love doesn’t mean I trust him anymore.”

“You think they don’t lie?”

“I think Caine made his choices.”

Sara stepped forward, eyes shining now—not from tears, but from something deeper. Rigid.

“You would put my only child out on the street?”

“I’d protect mine,” Hector said. “That’s what I’m doing. Caine brought danger into this house. He didn’t just fall into it—he brought it.”

Her hands balled into fists at her sides.

“He’s sixteen. You think he chose this? You think he got a fair chance?”

“Dios mios. Of course, he chose it. But you think any of that matters to the people who’re coming after him?”

That quiet stung more than yelling ever could.

Sara turned away, bracing herself against the counter. The faucet dripped. One… two… three.

“As long as I’m breathing, he’s not going to be homeless.”

Hector watched her for a moment.

“It won’t matter,” he said. “He’s not getting out.”

Sara turned, eyes hard.

“He will.”

“Stop being so naïve.”

He started to walk off, but paused in the doorway. His words were soft, almost an afterthought.

“Nada se olvida. Everything comes to the light.”

He left without looking back.

A moment later, Saul reappeared in the doorway, still holding his cup. He hovered, then stepped in slowly, refilled it at the sink, and glanced at his aunt.

“You okay, Tía?”

Sara nodded, barely. Her lips trembled as she turned her back to him.

“I’m fine, Saulito.”

He nodded and left, quiet again.

When the door shut behind him, Sara slid back into her seat, pulled the laptop closer, and stared at the screen. The attorney fees hadn’t changed. Neither had her bank account.

She buried her face in her hands.

And stayed there.
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Post by Captain Canada » 18 May 2025, 18:42

So much desperation and tragedy to start things off. Damn shame. Just about ready for the resolution now

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Post by Soapy » 19 May 2025, 08:19

Captain Canada wrote:
18 May 2025, 18:42
So much desperation and tragedy to start things off. Damn shame. Just about ready for the resolution now
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Post by Caesar » 25 May 2025, 17:13

No Me Doblo

The room hummed under the same tired light. Caine sat with his hands cuffed to the table again, jaw tight, eyes distant. A scab flaked on his knuckle. The concrete walls pressed in.

Then the door creaked open, and a man stepped in—tall, mid-forties, dark suit rolled at the cuffs, no clipboard, no briefcase. Just a file folder and a focus that didn’t flinch.

He looked like he belonged in a courtroom, not a holding cell.

“Caine Guerra,” the man said.

Caine glanced up. “Yeah.”

“I’m Markus Shaw. I’m your new attorney.”

Caine raised an eyebrow. “Public defender switch again?”

“No. I’m private.” Markus pulled out the chair and sat across from him. “Your teacher—Quentin Landry—brought me your case. Said if I didn’t help, they’d bury a kid who didn’t deserve it.”

The name hit like a stone skipping across Caine’s chest.

“Mr. Landry,” he said, voice low.

Markus nodded. “That’s frat. We’ve known each other twenty years. He said you stepped in front of a gun for him.”

Caine didn’t answer. He didn’t need to. His silence said it wasn’t a story he liked revisiting.

Markus flipped the folder open. “According to the DA’s paperwork, you’re a carjacker with a weapon and gang ties. Drug dealer. Joyrider. Their affidavit doesn’t mention you tried to stop a shooting. Doesn’t mention you were nearly the one shot.”

He slid the thin affidavit across the table. “They’re pushing conspiracy and enhancement charges because you’re easy to isolate. Not because they have evidence.”

Still no reaction from Caine. Just a flicker of tension in his shoulders.

Markus looked him in the eye.

“Before we go any further, I need to ask you something plain. You already know not everything about this case hinges on the night in question.”

Caine nodded once.

“Did you know Percy Anderson had a gun?”

“No.”

“Did you help plan that second car?”

“No. I told them not to do that shit. It was fucking dumb.”

“Did you put yourself in it anyway?”

“Yeah,” Caine admitted. “I didn’t leave when I should’ve.”

Markus studied him for a moment. Then asked—same tone, no judgment:

“You ever jacked a car before that night?”

Caine held his gaze. “Yeah.”

“Moved drugs?”

“Weed, pills, rock, heroin.”

Markus nodded slowly.

“I’ve defended worse. A lot worse.”

That took Caine off guard just a little. Markus didn’t press it.

“Difference is,” Markus continued, “they were already gone when I met them. Some of them didn’t even care what happened in court. You? You could’ve run. You didn’t. You didn’t shoot. You didn’t fold.”

He leaned forward, voice even.

“That means you’re not just here because of the streets. You’re here because you were loyal to people who wouldn’t have done the same for you.”

Caine’s jaw tightened. His mouth twitched like he wanted to speak—but didn’t trust himself yet.

Markus didn’t force it.

“I filed for another bond hearing. Pushing for full discovery. If they’ve got something they’re not sharing, we’ll drag it into daylight. And if they want a trial, I’ll make them regret it.”

He stood.

“You’re not perfect. That doesn’t mean you’re guilty.”

At the door, he turned back, one hand on the handle.

“I’ve got a fourteen-year-old at home. He’s soft in ways you never got to be. I see the difference every time I walk in these places.”

Then, quieter:

“I’m not here to fix you. I’m here to fight for you.”

The door opened.

Caine watched him go.

Same chains. Same gray room.

But for once, someone hadn’t looked at him like a problem to be filed.

Just a person worth keeping upright.
~~~

The knock came just after seven—steady, not urgent, but firm enough to be out of place on a weeknight. Sara wiped her hands on a towel, tossed it over her shoulder, and opened the door just wide enough to see the man on the porch.

Black. Slacks and a tucked-in polo. Holding a folder.

“I’m not buying anything.”

“I’m not selling,” he said. “Ms. Guerra? My name’s Quentin Landry. I teach at Carver.”

Her eyes narrowed slightly.

“You a counselor?”

“English,” he said. “I also coordinate credit recovery—especially for students inside.”

That gave her pause.

“You the one that sent that lawyer?”

There it was—right up front. Quentin nodded once.

“You got a call from Shaw’s office?”

“This morning. Some lady said they’d taken over his case.” She stepped onto the porch, not fully letting him in yet. “Said it was private defense. That doesn’t come cheap.”

“It’s covered,” Quentin said. “I asked Markus to look into it.”

Sara gave him a long look. “You got money like that?”

“No. I’ve got history with Markus. I called in a favor.”

She let the screen door fall open now and waved him inside.

The house smelled like reheated rice and whatever cleaning spray she’d used an hour ago. The table was cluttered with mail, an open Chromebook, and a half-drunk energy drink.

Quentin stood awkwardly near a chair. She motioned. “Sit.”

He did.

“I’m not gonna lie to you,” Sara said, easing down across from him. “I don’t know any of his teachers. I don’t go to the school. I work three jobs just to keep lights on. So if you’re looking for some PTA mother to make this feel better—”

“I’m not,” Quentin said, cutting in gently. “I’m here because I was there the night it happened. The driveway it went down on? That was mine.”

Sara’s mouth tightened. She stared at him. Waited.

“The other kid pulled a gun. Caine knocked it away before he could fire. He put himself in front of it.”

Her shoulders sagged slightly, the edge still there, but duller now.

“He’s always had this way of stepping into other people’s storms,” she murmured. “Even when he’s got enough of his own.”

Quentin slid the folder toward her.

“Schoolwork. Progress notes. A letter I wrote for his case. But most of that’s just paper. What matters is the district’s obligated to keep him on track while he’s inside. I’m personally overseeing that. He’ll be getting packets from us weekly. Assignments. Credit recovery.”

She ran a finger over the edge of the folder but didn’t open it yet.

“He can still graduate?”

“If he wants it, yeah. We’ll make it happen.”

Sara looked down the hallway, toward the back room.

“I just… I didn’t know anyone was watching out for him over there.”

Quentin’s voice softened. “He doesn’t ask for much. But I don’t think that means he wants to be left alone.”

She nodded, once, slowly.

“I appreciate you calling that lawyer. And coming here.”

“I meant it when I told Markus,” Quentin said, rising from his chair. “Caine’s not just a case file. He’s a kid trying to stay standing in a world that keeps swinging.”

Sara gave a small, tired smile.

“He’s all I got.”

When he left, she stayed seated.

The folder sat in front of her, fingers resting on the cover.

She didn’t open it right away.

But she would.

And when she did, she’d read every line.
~~~

The Orleans Parish Concrete Supply yard looked like it hadn’t passed anything resembling regulation in years. Gravel cracked under Mireya’s sneakers as she stepped around a tilted pallet of broken cinder blocks. A busted generator hummed behind a rust-streaked trailer. The morning sun already burned against the tin roof, making everything shine in a sickly, dusty gold.

She checked the text again:

Just show up. Ask for Jaime. He knows.

Kike hadn’t added anything else. No warning. No follow-up. But that was how he did things. You didn’t ask questions because the answers only made it worse.

She climbed the short steps and knocked once before pushing open the office trailer door.

Inside, the air was hot and sour—old coffee, sweat, printer toner. A box fan whirred in the corner beside a file cabinet that looked like it had survived a fire.

Behind the desk sat Jaime, balding, mid-50s, reading glasses on the tip of his nose. He was sorting through a stack of invoices like he hadn’t slept, the stub of a cigar twitching in the corner of his mouth.

“You Mireya?”

“Yes,” she said. “Kike said you were looking for help.”

Now he looked up, clocked her—first her face, then her shoes, then the way she stood.

“You his cousin or his something else?”

“His cousin,” she said, voice flat.

That made him smirk faintly. “Alright then.”

He gestured toward the folding chair across from him. She sat.

“You type?”

“Yes.”

“Phones?”

“Yeah.”

“You got a license?”

“I do.”

“Clean record?”

“Cleaner than this place,” she said before she could stop herself.

Jaime let out a short laugh, surprised.

“Good. We need somebody to sit in this chair during business hours, call contractors when deliveries get behind, and not ask why half our receipts got blank totals. That you?”

“If it keeps the lights on,” she said.

“Occasionally we’ll need you to drive—drop off forms, pick up a guy if he’s stuck somewhere, grab supply runs from the depot. You good behind the wheel?”

“I don’t drive reckless.”

“Good,” he said. “There’s enough of that around here already.”

He paused, eyes dragging across her again.

“Kike ain’t exactly a VIP, but when he says someone’s worth meeting, I figure he’s got his reasons.”

He slid a clipboard toward her with a scrap of paper attached to it—no W-2, no contract, just a single line for her name and number.

“We pay end of the week. Cash. You want to ask how much, you probably shouldn’t be here.”

“I’m not asking.”

“Then you’re hired.”

She wrote her name and slid it back. Jaime looked at it, nodded.

“Be here tomorrow. 6:30. Don’t dress like you’re going somewhere else after.”

He turned back to his stack of papers. The meeting was over.

Outside, the lot was waking up. Two men in steel-toed boots were already shoveling mix from a dump trailer. One of them paused when he saw her. Not in greeting. Just to watch. A look that could be considered a leer.

She walked past without slowing.

At the edge of the fence, she pulled out her phone.

She sent a text to Kike: Got it. Starts tomorrow.

Then after a pause:

Tell me this ain’t one of your favors I’m gonna regret.

The message hung unsent for a second, then disappeared as she locked the screen. She stuffed the phone in her back pocket and kept walking.

Because at the end of the day, she had a daughter.

And this was work.

Even if it didn’t feel clean.
~~~

The visitation room at Orleans Parish Prison buzzed with tension under fluorescent lights. Conversations were kept low, deliberate. Everyone knew the lines were hot.

Dre sat at stall 9, hands in his lap, the phone resting against his jaw before he even saw the door open.

Ricardo walked in wearing orange, face locked up tight. His cuffs were off but his jaw was clenched, and he didn’t sit down so much as drop into the seat.

He picked up the phone. Didn’t say hello.

Dre cleared his throat. “You holding up?”

Ricardo’s laugh was cold. “Yeah. Like a sandbag in a storm.”

“You look straight, at least.”

“I’m not.”

Silence. Then:

“You know who opened their mouth.”

Dre nodded. “Yeah.”

“Your family tree got too many weak branches.”

Dre stiffened. “I didn’t know he was gonna do all that.”

“Then you wasn’t watching close enough,” Ricardo said. “He’s not built for pressure. You saw the way he acted the last time we took that ride.”

Dre nodded once. Carefully.

“He cracked on stuff that didn’t even have his name on it. Said I had a hand in something I never touched.”

Dre looked down. “They ran with it?”

Ricardo’s voice lowered. “They stamped it like gospel. Now I’m in here off a story, not facts. And the people pushing for paperwork on my mom? They ain’t bluffing.”

Dre winced.

“I got family too,” Ricardo said, voice calm now—too calm. “But I don’t send mine into the fire without knowing where they’ll break.”

“You think this is what I wanted?”

“I think you gambled with someone else’s rep.”

Dre leaned forward, trying to keep it together.

“We’ve all done pickups. All made drops. All had nights.”

Ricardo’s eyes narrowed.

“Yeah,” he said. “But I never threw a name when the porch light came on.”

He let that sit, then shifted slightly in his seat. A guard passed behind him. He waited until the footsteps faded.

Then, in a quieter tone:

La próxima vez que vea a Percy, voy a partirle la cara con mis propias manos. Lo voy a hacer tragar cada mentira que dijo de mí, y después voy a arrancarle la lengua pa’ que no pueda hablar nunca más.

Dre’s brow furrowed. “What?”

Ricardo smiled darkly. “Go ask Caine. He’ll translate. He’s up the fucking road at OJJ.”

The line buzzed once—five minutes left.

He leaned closer to the glass.

“I’m in here ‘cause I didn’t rat. ‘Cause I ain’t turn state when they showed me those fucking years. I’m gonna take it and go lay down. I’m gonna do every single one. But when you walk out them fucking gates, remember that they’re gonna deport mi mama.”

Dre’s eyes dropped.

“She’s been here twenty-eight goddamn years. Never so much as jaywalked. And they’re threatening to throw her out of the country to scare me.”

His hand trembled around the receiver. Not fear. Rage.

“All ‘cause your dumbass cousin wanted to prove he was ready.”

Ricardo sat back, breathing hard. He wiped his face with the back of his hand.

Dre pressed his forehead to the glass, briefly. “I didn’t mean for this to happen, man.”

The buzzer sounded again—visit ending.

Ricardo stood.

“Don’t bring your ass back up in here unless you on the other side of this fucking glass with something on your shoulders to make it right,” he said coldly.

Dre sat in silence, phone still in his hand, heart pounding.

He didn’t need a translation for that.

He got the message.
~~~
The lunchroom in the Orleans Parish Juvenile Detention Center didn’t feel like a cafeteria. It felt like a waiting room for something worse.

Boys sat in clusters, eyes shifting more than mouths moved. Laughter happened in short bursts—never too loud, never too long. Everything in there operated on tension. Like static. Like if you brushed up against the wrong voltage, you’d get lit up.

Caine knew better than to look like he was waiting on trouble. Trouble didn’t like to be anticipated. It liked to find you thinking you were safe.

So he kept his eyes on his tray and his back to the wall.

He’d picked the corner table for a reason—less exposure, more time to read the room. The food was forgettable. The air was thick with sweat and something sour. Forks clinked. Voices stayed low.

Then came the footsteps.

He felt them before he saw them.

Trayvon. Big chest. Quick mouth. Been mean-mugging Caine since the day he got transferred in. The kind of dude who didn’t start shit with anyone smaller—only with someone tall enough to be a challenge.

Caine didn’t move.

Trayvon stopped beside the table. Two other boys trailed behind, both short, both staring hard like they’d been rehearsing it.

“You in my seat,” Trayvon said.

Caine kept chewing. Didn’t look up.

“I ain’t see no name on it.”

Trayvon grinned, flashing gold. “You will in a second.”

Then he slapped the tray off the table.

It clattered loud, echoing off the walls. Beans hit the floor. Cornbread landed half on Caine’s shoe. The meat slid to the edge of another boy’s tray two seats down.

The room stilled.

One CO stood by the door but didn’t move. Not yet. Not until it got bloody.

Caine stood up slow.

Not theatrical.

Just a clean rise.

He didn’t speak. Didn’t blink.

Trayvon swung first.

That was his first mistake.

The punch was wide, loud, thrown with ego and bad aim. Caine slipped it and buried a fist into Trayvon’s side. A second shot landed just beneath the ribs. He felt it connect. Trayvon buckled.

But he didn’t fall.

He lunged instead, caught Caine by the waist, drove him back into the table.

They crashed against it. Someone shouted. A fork clanged to the floor.

Caine braced with one hand, then brought his knee up hard. Trayvon grunted, loosening his grip.

Caine spun out and threw an elbow that clipped Trayvon just above the ear. Trayvon stumbled.

Caine followed, not wild—tight. A short right. A sharp hook. His blood was up now, but not uncontrolled. He didn’t swing for noise. He swung for damage.

Trayvon crashed into a bench, trying to catch himself. Slipped. Landed on one knee.

And Caine stepped forward—

—grabbed the front of Trayvon’s shirt—

—and slammed his head against the edge of the table.

The room erupted.

The fight might’ve gone longer if the COs hadn’t moved.

“DOWN! DOWN!”

Boots thundered. Radios crackled.

Caine stepped back with his hands half-raised, breathing steady, eyes locked on Trayvon who was on the floor, curled up and groaning, one palm clutching his forehead like it might fall apart.

Two COs grabbed Caine, arms behind his back before he could say a word.

“Thought you were smarter than this,” one of them muttered.

They yanked him backward. Another CO shoved boys aside as they cleared a path.

Caine didn’t resist.

Didn’t curse.

Didn’t struggle.

He let them pull him from the room like it was just another drill.

And when he passed the table where a few of the older boys sat—boys who hadn’t said a word all week—one of them nodded.

Nothing big.

Just once.

That was enough.



The cell was silent except for the overhead buzz of the light, humming like it had something to prove. The walls pressed in, blank and close. The toilet in the corner hadn’t stopped leaking since they dropped him here.

Caine sat on the edge of the bed, hands resting on his knees, eyes half-lidded, unfocused.

The door slot scraped open.

A manila folder slid through.

“School packet,” the CO muttered. “District says you gotta get one.”

The slot clapped shut.

Caine didn’t move.

He stared at the folder for a few seconds before reaching for it. Same rubber band. Same off-white paper. Dull #2 pencil tucked inside.

He opened it without urgency.

Reading comprehension. Algebra. One full-page essay prompt.

Describe a time you showed leadership or responsibility.

He stared at the line for a long time.

Then he wrote:

I never ran. Even when I had the chance. I took the weight.

Nothing else.

The pencil hovered for a moment.

Then he set it down gently beside him and leaned back against the wall, the paper still in his lap.
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Post by Captain Canada » 26 May 2025, 09:08

Caine just a magnet for bad situations

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Post by Soapy » 28 May 2025, 08:05

Mireya undocumented?
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Post by Caesar » 28 May 2025, 09:02

Captain Canada wrote:
26 May 2025, 09:08
Caine just a magnet for bad situations
Well, he’s certainly not going to find good situations in the parish.
Soapy wrote:
28 May 2025, 08:05
Mireya undocumented?
You would ask this, MAGA Soapy :smh:

But no
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Post by djp73 » 28 May 2025, 09:28

just when there was a little sliver of light coming through for Caine

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Post by Soapy » 28 May 2025, 10:11

Caesar wrote:
28 May 2025, 09:02
Captain Canada wrote:
26 May 2025, 09:08
Caine just a magnet for bad situations
Well, he’s certainly not going to find good situations in the parish.
Soapy wrote:
28 May 2025, 08:05
Mireya undocumented?
You would ask this, MAGA Soapy :smh:

But no
she getting paid under the table for no reason then lmao
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Post by Caesar » 28 May 2025, 10:15

Soapy wrote:
28 May 2025, 10:11
Caesar wrote:
28 May 2025, 09:02
Captain Canada wrote:
26 May 2025, 09:08
Caine just a magnet for bad situations
Well, he’s certainly not going to find good situations in the parish.
Soapy wrote:
28 May 2025, 08:05
Mireya undocumented?
You would ask this, MAGA Soapy :smh:

But no
she getting paid under the table for no reason then lmao
No reason other than no taxes and not having to claim that income because there isn’t a paper trail :smart:
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